A fantatsy Story Chapter15 Part 2

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Past chapters:
Chapter 1 : - -
Chapter 2 : - -
Chapter 3 : - -
Chapter 4 : - -
Chapter 5 : - - 3 (wait a minute there isn't a 3rd part for my 5th chapter) :sy:
Chapter 6 : - -
Chapter 7 : - - -
Chapter 8 : - -
Chapter 9 : - -
Chapter 10 : - -
Chapter 11 : - -
Chapter 12 : - -
Chapter 13 : - -
Chapter 14 : - -
Chapter 15 :

Here's a character backstory:
Gary: the pervert Protagonist, partially lost his memory, he tries to get his memory back by returning to the Empire, he's excelled at mixing elemental affinities with his katana sword beside summoning deities from another world.
Ame: the sweet imp-princess she tries to help Gary restore his memory, with her healing abilities and water element use.
Genji: the logical-speaking guy, he doesn't -like everybody else- what tribe he's, he got expelled from his village because of his appearence and ability to suck people energy and ability to control trees, he joined this journey to find out more about himself.
Eduna:a mysterious priestess she seems to know as much as Julius does, she joined the rebellion war against the tyrant.
Rose: the french speaking Fairy, she's more pervert than Gary she joined the group for fun, she has the power to charm any male, she has sensorial abilities, and wide magical abilities.
Ignius: a man who've been cursed by Julius into a hideous dragon-man he seeks to avenge from Julius.
Zhein: Gary's friend and adoptive brother who've been kidnapped but saved by the Tyrant' chancellor, he now on the good side.
Julius: the Tyrant Chancellor, he's a mysterious man, with mysterious motives, his powers are unique, he tries to bring peace without looking at the cost, he is revealed to be an ancient deity that wants to bring all world to nothingness.
Kalina: Gary's mother and the best known earth manipulator on the main land.
magia: the type energy that's used to cast magic skills
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After spending a whole day looking for their friends, Ame and Zhein finally took rest in an inn within the village resided by puppets, with some strange feelings Zhein opened his eyes witnessing his brother's future wife staring at him holding an ice dagger tightly,he exclamated: "Ame? What are you doing?", she answered immediately with a slow voice: "Zhein…don't move it's gonna be fast"…

She jumped at him and using her feet stomped on his head, doing a backflip, and stabbed him in the back of his neck…but it wasn't aiming for him, it was a mechanical arm, that got crushed with an icy cluster…

The man felt relief because his doubts weren't right: "thanks Ame!" he thanked the girl…

"Don't drop your guards they're still coming!" she said with worried expressions showing on her face…

Zhein closed his fist and with a punch he broke the wall next to him, he carried Ame on his back, spawned his single wing and rushed out of the inn…

Walking silently in the city, that seemed to be empty, they reached a narrow street, Ame heard something suspecious, she looked up to find a volley of knives falling at them, she jumped again at Zhein, and turned herself into a big blob of water to protect him from the daggers, he was a bit surprised so he asked: "what is going here?"…

Ame answered him with: "Zhein, I can hear better than you, they are chasing us!"…

"Are? You mean there're a group?" he exclamated…

She replied instnatly: "Yes, they're everywhere, on the rooftops, in the walls, it's like the whole town is moving!"…

Zhein thought for a second then ordered Ame: "Ame…hop on my back", and so she did, he flied to the roof to find a group of puppets awaiting for him holding their weapons ready for attack, he clashed his hands togather, and in a flash engaged in a hand to hand battle with them, they were obviously no match for him, breaking them with ease, dodging slashes and cuts like they were nothing, unaware an arrow hit his back; more precisely Ame :"Ame!" he shouted…

"it's okay Zhein!" she said while turning into a fluid, that easily slipped on the ground: "don't worry; no physical attack can hurt me!" she explained…

Zhein felt relief: "then I suppose you'll join this fight" he said with a grin…

"That what my hubby would do in such situation" answered the imp…

More puppets appeared surrounding the two, who were supporting each others back, and rushed to their enemies in a battle that seemed to be a kid play for the two, but zhein was worried that they won't be able to hold on for a long time due to the overwhelming number of enemies that seemed to be infinite: "Ame we got to retreat!" he shouted at his partner…
Ame had an idea she yelled: "Zhein! Fly, I'll try to do something"…

The young man wasn't sure of her plan but he could do nothing but to trust the girl…

The sea imp start chewing something in her mouth, she then jumped on the puppets heads, her small body helped her, as she landed on the narrow street , she spewed a white goo like substance, the enemies mindlessly follwed her, she smirked at them, and suddenly the goo that was covering the ground expanded like a foam, trapping the whole puppet army in it, and contined to grow, she then waved at Zhein to take her…

"that was some brilliant idea, I got to admit, my brother is lucky to have a girl like you as his future wife, it was an impressive thinking for an 8 years old girl…" Zhein complimented Ame…

"8 years old?" Ame asked…

Zhein apologized: "I'm sorry, I know I can't tell age very well"…

Ame felt a bit funny: "well I won't blame; you after all you are just 18"she commented the man…

"Really? How old are you?" Zhein asked curiously…

Ame blushed scratching her cheek: "well …I'm 20"she answered…

Zhein was surprised that he nearly dropped her..."20 but you look even younger than Rose, actually like you just entered elementary…hehe" he commented…

Ame grinned: "I know it's just a part of being a sea imp…"

Zhein noticed a big manor at the edge of the city, he headed toward it…

The moment they landed, Ame looked surprised: that's …Carol's family manor!"…
Zhein exclamated: "Carol's family?"…

Ame answered: "Yes it was were our friend Tobi once lived, all his family was killed by the empire…then he died while we were saving Genji" with depression…

Zhein notice that depression but he didn't know how cheer her up: "it's okay he was a hero and he died as a hero, now we must find our friends" he said while approaching the manor…

Zhein tried to pass by the gate, but he got repelled strangely, he suspected something, he entered his right arm easily but when it reached his wrist he got pushed back: "I get it!" he claimed…
Ame wondered: "What?"…

"it's a vital magia barrier, it won't let living objects pass through, but my right hand is a metal glove that's why it let it pass" he explained…
Ame asked: "so how'll we pass?"…

Zhein picked his newly forged fist knives: "it's a gamble" he looked toward Ame and ordered: "come hop on"…

She hopped holding his neck, Zhein tossed one of his blades, which easily slipped through the barrier to land on the ground,"here we go" he said and slashed the air with the other knife, suddenly everything went black and only the other blade is showing…

"where are we?" Ame wondered…

Zhein looked exhausted: "we are in the pocket dimension.." he looked very pale and sweat was dropping from him…

He reached the knife and grabbed it, suddenly they were back but inside the manor's garden, he kneeled, Ame looked worried: "Zhein! what happened?!" she asked…

"N..nothing, it's just disturbs my magia and cause me to feint…" and so he sit on the ground catching his breaths…

Ame heard something: "someone is coming!" she warned him…

And so it was Logh; a man in a black leather suit, an emotionless narrow eyes, a short dark haired head with a mowahawk style, approched the two slowly applausing: "Aiden's descendant… you impressed me, no wonder julius wanted you alive…but cometo think it's a shame you are a mortal" said while he's picking a blade…

Ame picked two ice daggers from her mouth: "Zhein, he's after you…please run I'll hold him back!" she said with a bit of hesitation…

"heh! Fool!" Said Logh and rushed into her cutting the imp in two, but she fluided herself
and reassembled again…
"Tobi please wake up!" She yelled…

Zhein stood up: "stop it Ame! He isn't Tobi" he said while clashing the two arm blades togather…he tossed one but Logh avoided it…in a sudden he took a ferocious kick from Zhein who instantly was teleported behind him, the kick was so powerful that it sent the enemy to collide with a fontain destroying it completely…

Ame was surprised: "but how ?" she asked…

Zhein smirked: "I used those knives again, but in another style"he answered…

Logh stood up removing dust from his cloths: "simply impressive you tossed that knife at me as faint to open a teleportation sub-gate behind me, all I have to do is to predict your next mov…" as he was interrupted by a kick in the face…i twas Zhein who tossed the blade again the moment Logh collided with the fontain…

The young man stepped back to rejoin Ame who wondered: "wow! But didn't you say it hurts you?"…

Zhein wiped his mouth: "heh… because I was teleporting you with me, I need more concentration, now on one on one fight I can use them freely!" he spinned the knives and swiftly plugged them in his belt…

Logh emerged from the ruins, his face was a bit cracked, a piece had fallen on the ground, Zhein was surprised: "what happened? that kick is supposed to crush his skull!"…

"He looks like Tobi, he talks like him, he is a puppet!" Ame answered…

"That's right isn't it the best feeling? No flesh, no pain…no useless immortal feelings, simply perfectness …" Logh said it while gazing at them…

"There's no point talking to him" Zhein claimed with serious accent…

Ame looked scared but she pulled herself togather: "I'll be with you Zhein!"

Logh removed his jacket revealing his puppet body, he picked a talisman that was hanging over his heart, and pressed it to the ground, the land wents fluid…

"That's a…" Ame said…

"Space and time manipulation!" Zhein completed…

A huge pole emerged from the ground, with an opened hand structure, Logh jumped to the top of it sitting on his throne, the pole started to open some gaps which spawned smaller hands, then the newly one spawned more, an so with the others, forming a branching tree like appearence "now how about a little show of marionnettes?" Logh said with confidence…

Ame was shocked: "there're tons of them! like they aren't limited!" she said it while holding her ears…

Thousands of portals got opened in front of each hand and from them and army of puppets of all sizes emerged"…

Zhein and Ame were stunned of shock seeing this overwhelming number of enemies, Logh on the other hand seemed pleased he signed with his fingers and with it his army moved…
To be continued​
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Now do you hate Logh as I do? :p
 
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She jumped at him and using her feet stomped on his head, doing a backflip, and stabbed him in the back of his neck…but it wasn't his neck what got hurt, it was a mechanical arm, that got crushed with an icy cluster…

Did you mean it wasn't his neck That got hurt

If so that was the only mistake I caught plus if there are anymore I'm not the guy to give a critquing lesson lol that one just confused me a bit that's all

All in all I enjoyed it. Looking forward to what happens next.
 

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She jumped at him and using her feet stomped on his head, doing a backflip, and stabbed him in the back of his neck…but it wasn't his neck what got hurt, it was a mechanical arm, that got crushed with an icy cluster…

Did you mean it wasn't his neck That got hurt

If so that was the only mistake I caught plus if there are anymore I'm not the guy to give a critquing lesson lol that one just confused me a bit that's all

All in all I enjoyed it. Looking forward to what happens next.
xd thanks I corrected it :D
 

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I had a feeling this phone screwed me over. Didn't post my comment. It was cool, didn't understand much but I enjoyed it a lot nonetheless. I may have to go back to chapter one.
 
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