A fantatsy Story Chapter11 Part 3

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Past chapters:
Chapter 1 : - -
Chapter 2 : - -
Chapter 3 : - -
Chapter 4 : - -
Chapter 5 : - - 3 (wait a minute there isn't a 3rd part for my 5th chapter) :sy:
Chapter 6 : - -
Chapter 7 : - - -
Chapter 8 : - -
Chapter 9 : - -
Chapter 10 : - -
Chapter 11 : -

Here's a character backstory:
Gary: the pervert Protagonist, partially lost his memory, he tries to get his memory back by returning to the Empire, he's excelled at mixing elemental affinities with his katana sword beside summoning deities from another world.
Ame: the sweet imp-princess she tries to help Gary restore his memory, with her healing abilities and water element use.
Genji: the logical-speaking guy, he doesn't -like everybody else- what tribe he's, he got expelled from his village because of his appearence and ability to suck people energy and ability to control trees, he joined this journey to find out more about himself.
Eduna:a mysterious priestess she seems to know as much as Julius does, she joined the rebellion war against the tyrant.
Rose: the french speaking Fairy, she's more pervert than Gary she joined the group for fun, she has the power to charm any male, she has sensorial abilities, and wide magical abilities.
Ignius: a man who've been cursed by Julius into a hideous dragon-man he seeks to avenge from Julius.
Zhein: Gary's friend and adoptive brother who've been kidnapped but saved by the Tyrant' chancellor, he now on the good side.
Julius: the Tyrant Chancellor, he's a mysterious man, with mysterious motives, his powers are unique, he tries to bring peace without looking at the cost, he is revealed to be an ancient deity that wants to bring all world to nothingness.
Kalina: Gary's mother and the best known earth manipulator on the main land.
magia: the type energy that's used to cast magic skills
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Ignius is trapped under a huge gravity orb, Eduna is unable to fight after using too much of "forbidden techniques" and Ame is very busy healing her, Kalina takes the glove for now, after remebering some old memories about people she loved, she puts her palm over her heart:
Kalina : for father …for Gen'yin …for my dear Gary I release this seal!
Sheme'yahazai : heh! Foolish mortal, you think a crippled animal like you can defeat Sheme'yahazai of the astrals!
The deity sent a huge magnetised rock block at Kalina that smashed her to the wall…but the angered mother blocked the attack with one finger! She mounted that cube and starts to stomp on it with rage until it crumbles into dust:
Kalina : (crushing the projectile with her feet) Never …under …stimate…a Sen'ya….family…member.
Sheme'yahazai : what?
Kalina jumped near Eduna that was suprised:
Eduna : but how?
Kalina : that'll come later now I persume after seeing those dark arts, you know the royal cursed seal, don't you?
Eduna : yes…
Kalina : set it, I'm gonna kick her behind for this!
Kalina rushed into Sheme'yahazai fearlessly, the deity launched a huge spear at her but she punched it right to the tip without even getting injured, and sent it flying away back, Sheme'yahazai rised the platform that Kalina is standing on, but the warrior destroyed that platform with one brute stomp and kicked the pieces at the deity, surprisingly Sheme'yahazai couldn't control those rocks despite they were magnetized and got hit by them eventually:
Ame : wow! Aunt Kalina is amazing!
Eduna : she's demagnetizing the battle field!
Ame : de…magnetizing it?
Eduna : yes …since this isn't a natural magnetic land, Sheme'yahazai molds her magnetic magia with the environnement to make it compatible with her powers, you can demagnetize an artificial magnet by either heat, isolating it, or a really hard physical shock which is happening now.
Kalina jumped at the deity after breaking every obstacle, Sheme'yahazai wasn't able to use the battle field for an advantage dueto the massive damage Kalina caused, she had nothing but to evade her by flying upward:
Kalina : you are escaping eh! Hyaaaaaa!
She smash the ground causing rocks to fly and kicked one of them straightly at Sheme'yahazai's wing damaging it and knocking her off balance, using this moment for as an advantage she jumped high and grabbed the deity's tail and spinned her twice then tossing her into the ground:
Sheme'yahazai : impossible that's no way to be a power of man!
Kalina : because you are not facing the power of one man, you are facing the power of a hundred men!
Eduna : I get it now!
Ame : what?
Eduna : she released the full potential of her muscles, she isn't using her magia but her raw strength, that's why Sheme'yahazai can't repell her using magic barrier… but how come her body isn't injured yet?
With the deity on the ground, Kalina approching her:
Kalina : now who is the crippled animal (she rises her fist) this shall be my final strike …(her arm start to go reddish) ten hundread …twenty…thirty …fourty…fifty …this all I can reach with half of my life force sealed.
Kalina Jumped high in the sky and delivered a brute drop kick to Sheme'yahazai that paralyzed her.
Kalina : Eduna! Now!
Eduna flied as fast as possible and in a flash stabbed Sheme'yahazai in the heart, a strange formula slipped from the rapier of the priestess and spread all over her body then condensed again around the deity's heart…Kalina crumbled because of Exhausting so Eduna carried her, Ignius broke free of the gravity bomb, Ame rushed to heal Kalina and Ignius, Sheme'yahazai stood up:
Sheme'yahazai : filth! You will pay for it! (she opens her lower part to release a gravity bomb)
Eduna : (she points her palm to the deity) not so fast!
Sheme'yahazai : (veins bulged) no way! Those eyes! that blood! This seal!
Eduna : enough said… (cruel stare) as long as I live this seal will bind you under my command! (turns back) now silence!
Kalina : (aided by Eduna to walk) I was badass wasn't I?
Eduna : yeah your plan to demagnetize the battle field was brilliant…
Kalina : um what's a demagnetizing?
Eduna : (facepalm) don't tell me you just charged brutely at her!
Kalina : well…yes, but I was epic wasn't I?
After a short rest, the group tried to proceed:
Kalina : Eduna …um… about those techniques… care to explain are you a tyrant family member?
Eduna : guess I'll have to tell the truth then…
A huge explosion sound is heard:
Ame : what's that?
Eduna : (uses her sensing abilities) it's Julius, and Gary and…. Avaloniir!
Kalina : (runs) Gary is in danger! (falls) ugh ..my feet are numb!
Eduna : Rick please carry Kalina and Ame!
Ignius : right!
Meanwhile before the whole battle against Sheme'yahazai, Gary, Genji, Zhein ,and Rose reached the crater where Avaloniir the spirit dragon deity resides:
Gary : well …(he shouts) Avaloniir!
Rose : he isn't here…
Gary : huh?
Rose : (facepalm) retard! He's a deity! he has the hugest magia reserve, if I can't sense him then he is not here!
Genji : (points down) look guys there's a man in the bottom of the hole!
The group descended, the man was Avaloniir in his human form:
Gary : Avaloniir! What happened? Why you are using this form?
Avaloniir : Exoddius! Was he broken free?!
Gary : no! Well a part of his power is free and caused our world to go crazy! But what happened to you? We are the others?
Avaloniir : we used all our power to keep both worlds from destruction, now we are as useless as mortals …my apologize for rudeness… now we can't even take our real forms!
Gary : it's getting worst and worst!
A step sound is approaching, Gary and co are set:
Julius : Avaloniir, my brother, ages has passed I didn't see you in….
Zhein : Julius…
Gary : bastard! What brought in here?
Julius : I thought it'd be very elegant if I passed by my brother and said hi…
Avaloniir : Exoddius! What brought you to this world?
Julius : my brother I don't hold any grudge toward you, but (he reveals the left side of his chest that has a venus fly trap mouth as shoulder)
Genji : those are my cells!
Julius : if you stand between me and my fate… alas, we'll be enemies!
From the mouth on his shoulder he pulled a long broad double edged swallow blade and pointed it toward them…
End of chapter to be continued​
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:hint: here's a nonesense that you may learn from this chapter :
  1. Kalina; one arm, half life force, and still kickass.
  2. Never stand between an angry mother and her son.
  3. Eduna is hiding a big secret.
  4. Ame's role in the story has decreased :flaw:
  5. Sheme'yahazai isn't that weak; remember that all deities are weakened when the world is in chaos. (with one exception)
  6. Julius by far is the cheekiest talker in the story.
 
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