A fantatsy Story Chapter11 Part 1

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Past chapters:
Chapter 1 : - -
Chapter 2 : - -
Chapter 3 : - -
Chapter 4 : - -
Chapter 5 : - - 3 (wait a minute there isn't a 3rd part for my 5th chapter) :sy:
Chapter 6 : - -
Chapter 7 : - - -
Chapter 8 : - -
Chapter 9 : - -
Chapter 10 : - -

Here's a character backstory:
Gary: the pervert Protagonist, partially lost his memory, he tries to get his memory back by returning to the Empire, he's excelled at mixing elemental affinities with his katana sword beside summoning deities from another world.
Ame: the sweet imp-princess she tries to help Gary restore his memory, with her healing abilities and water element use.
Genji: the logical-speaking guy, he doesn't -like everybody else- what tribe he's, he got expelled from his village because of his appearence and ability to suck people energy and ability to control trees, he joined this journey to find out more about himself.
Eduna:a mysterious priestess she seems to know as much as Julius does, she joined the rebellion war against the tyrant.
Rose: the french speaking Fairy, she's more pervert than Gary she joined the group for fun, she has the power to charm any male, she has sensorial abilities, and wide magical abilities.
Ignius: a man who've been cursed by Julius into a hideous dragon-man he seeks to avenge from Julius.
Zhein: Gary's friend and adoptive brother who've been kidnapped but saved but the Tyrant' chancellor, he now on the good side.
Julius: the Tyrant Chancellor, he's a mysterious man, with mysterious motives, his powers are unique, he tries to bring peace without looking at the cost, he is revealed to be an ancient deity that wants to bring all world to nothingness.
MI:Zhein's personal summon, a black snake with golden patterns, she has a durable scaled body, and can release a highly concentrated energy beam.
Kalina: Gary's mother and the best known earth manipulator on the main land.
magia: the type energy that's used to cast magic skills
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It was a new world of chaos, our heroes were seperated in it but with some effort they managed to reach the sky which was nothing but the sea itself, Zhein who carries Rose on his back reached the new heavens, over the "sea" a wasteland there was, covered in a starry night sky, it is something beyond belief:
Rose : Ok, this the wierdest thing I ever seen, I just wanted to help a little imp and I've been dragged into such mess!
Zhein : too late to complain about it…
Rose : yeah …unh!
Zhein : can you please stop moaning! It's just not in its situation!
Rose : it's not like that! I sense pervers and tree boy…
Zhein : Gary! Where is he!?
Rose : it's hard to sense them in this place …but let's just keep going north…
Eventually Zhein and Rose, reached a very lofty hill, where a large lake there was, on the shore of the lake there was Genji carrying the sleeping Gary on his back:
Zhein : Genji! We are here!
Genji : huh? Oh Rose! You are there wait I'm coming!
Rose : (grin) now aren't you the cutest couple …
Genji : (blushes) it's not what is seems! I just didn't want to wake him!
Rose : (grin) I'm sure he's enjoying rubbing your back with his …
Genji : no! He is just dreaming!
Zhein : (facepalm) …
Gary : gentle! Just go gentle Rose! …ungh
Rose : (angered) why that Salauds! I'll get him (she points her charm toward Gary)
Gary felt a bit upset and awaked in shock:
Gary : what the!
Genji : oh you are awake!
Gary : (jumps away from Genji) eek! What were you doing to me!
Genji : Huh?
Rose : let's just say that I improved the relationship between you two in his head (tongue out)
Zhein : what a dirty minded harlot you've became …
Rose : hehe…
Genji : by the way why are you carrying Rose, Zhein?
Zhein : she hurt her leg so I thought it'd be faster if I carry her…
Genji : you know she is a healer don't you?
Zhein : huh (realized that he carried Rose for miles while she could healed herself) Rose …explanation now!
Rose : heheh, c'mon it was romantic wasn't it?
Gary : (he examined the world around him) um guys! How did you get into Karielm?
Genji : you mean this is the world of deities?
Gary : yeah ..how can you be in it?
Zhein : it seems that Julius had something to do with that for sure.
Rose : so where should we head now?
Gary : I'll try to summon a deity…
Gary tried to summon but failed to do it:
Gary : hmm it worked before.
Genji : do you sense Julius or anybody else in here?
Rose : hmm it's hard to find, this world is full of large magias so my sensorial skills won't help much…
Gary : ok we'll go east…
Zhein : why?
Gary : when I encountered Avaloniir he was in a huge crater surrounded by mountains, and east is the only direction that I can see mountains in it.
And so the four headed east, at the same time, Kalina, Ame, Eduna, and Ignius were roaming aimlessly in Karielm:
Ame : we are we?
Kalina : in the world of deities …
Ignius : so where are we going now?
Kalina : we'll roam till we find a deity and ask it for help, fighting the seventh deity like this is suicide!
Eduna : do you have any clue where we can find a deity?
Kalina : well ……………no, but we'll find one by time, I mean this is their realm it'll be easier than finding a pervert in the woman hot bath… haha did you get the pun?
Ignius : (depressed) ugh, she is Gary's mother for sure.
They walk for half an hour or so, they confort a green cloaked little girl Ame rushed to her:
Ame : (naïvely) hi! How do you do …um silly me! I'm sorry my name is Ame what's yours?
Girl : call me Sheme'yahazai :
Ame : She …me …I'm sorry but your name is long heheh but it's cute…
Sheme'yahazai : : it's okay but what brings mortals from inner realm to our world?
Eduna : so are you a deity?
Sheme'yahazai : : yes I'm Sheme'yahazai : of the astrals, good to know you mortals now farewell!
Sheme'yahazai : slammed her palm on the ground and suddenly the land cracked, and pieces of earth starts to float:
Eduna : honorable deity, we came in peace to seek your help, why would you attack us?
Sheme'yahazai : : silence mortals! You came to stop the fate of your false world!
Ignius : so she's with Julius!
Sheme'yahazai : : don't call him with such filthy mortal name, he is Exoddius of order!
Kalina : gah! Julius! Exoddius! Deity who cares about that bastard?! I'm taking you down!
Kalina jumped at Sheme'yahazai : trying to slash her but a shockwave prevented her from touching the deity and repelled her back:
Kalina : shit! What kind of spell was that?
Sheme'yahazai : : futile! Mortals! this shall be your grave!
The floating pieces of lands got crushed into sand and flooded the battle field, moments later, the group emerged Eduna protected Ame with her wings, Ignius large size technique protected him, and Kalina used her beast form to dig out of the sand:
Kalina : sand? Oh you choosed the wrong woman to mess with!
Sheme'yahazai : : we'll see about that!
Suddenly Kalina's twin headed blade shaked and fell from her hand:
Kalina : (tries to hold her weapon but it just slips through) god dammit! What is this!
Sheme'yahazai : : that's nothing compared to what'll happen next….
The sand rearranged like a huge block and landed on Kalina, but Ignius grabbed it:
Kalina : thanks big guy!
Ignius : (the block started to slip through his fists) dammit! Kalina please run, I can't hold it anymore!
They both made it safe, but Ignius hands got injured Kalina puts a protective sand dome on.:
Eduna : Rick! Hold it I'll heal you!
Eduna tries to put her palms on Ignius, but she couldn't like she wasn't able to touch him!
Eduna : I got it now! Ame come here and heal him!
Ame rushed ,and this time she easily managed to heal him:
Eduna : it's like this then.
Kalina : what is it?
Eduna : (she grabs her lightening charged sword with ease) see I can do it …
Kalina : we are in the middle of a god damned battle against a crazy deity, and you are showing off!
Eduna : you didn't get it …it's magnetism!
Ame : magnetism?
Eduna : she is using magnetic powers, when she covered us in her sand she magnetised our bodies, that's why Kalina can't hold her blade, and Rick couldn't hold the block properly, and so I couldn't touch Rick, we are repelling each other, like the similliar magnet poles!
Kalina : then why Ame was able to heal Ignius? and you managed to hold your rapier?
Eduna : we are human, our blood contain iron so we can be magnetised, Ame is an imp most of her body is fluids, and my rapier is charged with electricity that can change the flow of electromagnetic field around it.
Kalina : that's ….wow
Eduna : I have an idea, everyone don't join the battle until I tell you ….it've been ages before I did this …
Eduna unzipped her cloak, and revealed that she was wearing a light emperial knight armor with the empire symbol striken, she spred her large angelic wings and flied toward Sheme'yahazai.
To be continued​
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what you may learn from this chapter:
  1. Rose is still doing anything to make Zhein fall for her.
  2. Genji loves Rose, but Rose loves Zhein, Ame likes Gary,but Gary likes any female.
  3. Rose is a fangirl.
  4. Gary is jerk for having fantasies about Rose.
  5. Rose knows the true fear of Gary :devil:
  6. Ame is an idiot.
  7. Kalina & Gary: like mother like son.
  8. Eduna never missed a physics class :D
 
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:( i want the next one now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edit: My bad i posted this in the wrong thread. It was meant for chapter 11 part 2. I can't wait for part 3. :)
 
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