A fantatsy Story Chapter10 Part 3

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Past chapters:
Chapter 1 : - -
Chapter 2 : - -
Chapter 3 : - -
Chapter 4 : - -
Chapter 5 : - - 3 (wait a minute there isn't a 3rd part for my 5th chapter) :sy:
Chapter 6 : - -
Chapter 7 : - - -
Chapter 8 : - -
Chapter 9 : - -
Chapter 10 : -

Here's a character backstory:
Gary: the pervert Protagonist, partially lost his memory, he tries to get his memory back by returning to the Empire, he's excelled at mixing elemental affinities with his katana sword beside summoning deities from another world.
Ame: the sweet imp-princess she tries to help Gary restore his memory, with her healing abilities and water element use.
Genji: the logical-speaking guy, he doesn't -like everybody else- what tribe he's, he got expelled from his village because of his appearence and ability to suck people energy and ability to control trees, he joined this journey to find out more about himself.
Eduna:a mysterious priestess she seems to know as much as Julius does, she joined the rebellion war against the tyrant.
Rose: the french speaking Fairy, she's more pervert than Gary she joined the group for fun, she has the power to charm any male, she has sensorial abilities, and wide magical abilities.
Ignius: a man who've been cursed by Julius into a hideous dragon-man he seeks to avenge from Julius.
Zhein: Gary's friend and adoptive brother who've been kidnapped but saved but the Tyrant' chancellor, he now on the good side.
Julius: the Tyrant Chancellor, he's a mysterious man, with mysterious motives, his powers are unique, he tries to bring peace without looking at the cost.
MI:Zhein's personal summon, a black snake with golden patterns, she has a durable scaled body, and can release a highly concentrated energy beam.
Kalina: Gary's mother and the best known earth manipulator on the main land.
magia: the type energy that's used to cast magic skills
Ok, don't flame for this one:
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Finally the tyrant era ended, everybody was celebrating victory, Gary's friends; Zhein, Ame, Genji, Ignius, all of them were happy but Rose shivered saying that "he" is here:
Ame : what's the matter Rose? Who is here?
Rose : he is here … I can feel him …. Julius! He is here!
Gary : no way!, Genji crushed him under his own meteor!
Julius : (teleports in front of them) hasty as always … Gary …
Everybody shocked:
Gary : bastard! Why can't you just die!?
Zhein : (holds Gary) wait Gary! … Julius, no need for your plans now the tyrant is dead…
Julius : naïve as before Zhein .. hmm
Eduna : (sudden pain in her stomach) Julius … what do you want?
Julius : it hurts doesn't it Marcelline?
Eduna : who are you?
Julius : (he points at Eduna and her pain is gone) I don't want you to suffer because of my gift …
Eduna : (shocked) … are you …?
Julius : I'm what … (he appears in front of Gary and slams his hand on Gary's belly)
Gary is pushed steps back :
Gary : heh, you are such a wuss thinking you can beat me with such hit…
Julius : heheheh, foolish mortals of the inner realm!
Eduna : that voice, that feeling of magia …. And the curse … it can't be, you are … Exoddius!
Julius : (applause) we have a winner here !
Kalina : it can't be him … it is too far from being possible!
Zhein : no way he is Exoddius … he is a human!
Rose : so what is this Exoddius anyway?
Eduna : Exoddius is ….. the seventh deity…
Every body was shocked:
Gary : what the hell! how can that be?
Julius : oh well … I guess I'll have to explain (he stops the time and the group is immobilized)
Ignius : I can't move!
Julius : Rick my friend … that is because I binded all of you in my timeless field, now sit still and listen!
The background changes to shadowy image of the six heavenly deities :
Julius : those are my memories! The six deities; Edin of the light, Fenix of the flames, Quetzl of the seas, Sphinx of the land, Chirin of the wind, and Avaloniir of the spirits … these were the six who I once considered as brothers of myself the newly created deity Exoddius whom his powers governs space, and time and the borders between reality and illusions, I was the youngest among them yet the strongest, we lived in peace in Karielm, until you mortals of the inner realm discovered us, it seemed that the imbalance between both of our worlds weakens my fellows but strengthens me more, the first tyrant Ezel Archmadeis the first invaded our realm and had his hands over my brothers, I was young and scared but a man of your world named "Zhein" helped me realize the true extents of my authority and aided me free my fellows, then he sealed us in Karielm again with all the rest of deities, a thousand year has passed in your land, the cursed descendance of Ezel opened the gate between the worlds again and so he tried to inslave us with the same seal that Zhein once sealed our world with it, Ophiuchus' greed possessed him driving him to help to Ezel from the inside to open the gate, and so we banished him from our realm, it is true he was on the wrong path, yet he was our brother as well, but how can me the youngest of the deities have a word in front of other heavenly creatures, I agreed and banished him to the inner realm, were he met Ezel and so they both became the new deity of the mortal world, Ezel Tyranny exceeded ,faced by two heroes from the descendance of Zhein who are well known as " the twin branches" used me again to stop Ophiuchus and seal him again in the heart of your land... I was used against my brothers to save a world … a world of fools who kill each others just for power …. A world of filth that has no hope to recover … I tried to rewrite history using the authority God has given me, and remove the mortals from this existence but … my six brothers stood before me, and with the help of Zidane and Aiden Miridia, I was sealed for eternity in the heart of Karielm…. Another thousand year has passed in your world Ezel Archmadeis the XXVI, seeked my powers but i twas beyond his grasp to summon me, so he used the darkest art of all time art of reincarnation by rebirth, they used a vessel … a human vessel and so it was the 10 years old Julius Cyan Reneval has been used as a container of the Exoddius power, it was not a perfect incarnation and only a sixth of the seventh deity power was sealed inside Julius, I fed on his soul and so my malice has taken over his body, the royal family used ther cursed seal on this human vessel to prevent me from harming them and so I grew to become the high chancellor of the last tyrant, I used every chance to destroy the balance of this world …, Ragna, Zhein, Genji, Eiko ,Gary and so many fools to violate the balance of this realm and thus powering me more and weakening this existence, and so I can finally travel to my world and regain my true body, and fulfill my mission I had on myself to remove this false world …
The time returns to flow again:
Julius : but until then, I'll have some fun with you … Gary Gen'yin, Kalina Sen'ya, Zhein Ji'ail Marcelline Evermor, Roselline Rothe, Raameyururu Ramusu, Ignius Fireheart, and Genji …you shall please me … (he claps his hand) do you feel this? … the call of chaos!
The shadows started to crawl over land, the ground shaked, the sky turned crimson red and then everything went black …………
Zhein awakened lying on the ground, stood and walked few steps:
Rose : anybody there?
Zhein : Rose? Is that you?
Rose : No I'm the free milk girl! Of course I'm Rose! … come her and help me!
Zhein found Rose hanging from a high cliff, he aided her:
Rose : ouch! Oh I can't believe it!
Zhein : what is it?
Rose : something stuck under my wing and I can't pull it!
Zhein : here let me try (he examines her wings)
Rose : (blushes) hmmm …eeh…
Zhein : what now?
Rose : I can't help it … scratching under my wings arouses me …
Zhein : (blushes and steps away) ah! … how …disgusting!
Rose : come now, please … it burns!
Zhein : fine but keep quiet!
Rose : ok …I'll try!
Zhein : (removes a pebble) here it is now let's search for Gary …
Rose : but I can't walk …
Zhein : what now?
Rose : (hse reveals a small cut on her thigh) I hurt my leg!
Zhein : (he removes a sheet of his clothing and wraps her cut) very well here (he ducked) hop on.
Zhein carried Rose on his back and started examining the place:
Rose : wow! Your hand is really soft for someone who can crush a human heart with ease …
Zhein :
Rose : oh c'mon, speak, don't be such a jerk!
Zhein : Rose please I'm not in mood for talking…
Rose : then I'll keep blabbing till you are in the mood!
Zhein : alright! What do you want to talk about?
Rose : nothing specific, just to pass the time!
Zhein : fine let me examine where are we (he spawns his wong and flies)
Rose : mon dieu!
It was something hard to describe, the whole land has been rearranged into what appears to be a tree that ends touching the sky that is actually a large pond of water, the people were there but they seemed frozen in a blue shadowy aura:
Rose : it is chaos alright, so where are we going now?
Zhein : I don't know, but I think we should reach the "sky".
Rose : (scratch Zhein in the head) so Zhein what does your name mean I mean Zhein Ji'ail is cool …
Zhein : oh god, must I suffer, "Zhein" in ancieant language means "kind" and "Ji" means "death", "ail" means "gives", so my name means "the one who gives kindness until his death" happy now?
Rose : don't be that moody, no girl would love you like this!
Zhein : but I don't like any girl …(Rose giggles and Zhein blushes) I didn't mean that you dirty minded harlot!
Rose : heheh …gotcha with that didn't I?
Zhein : man you are annoying no wonder men disgust you!
Rose : (sad accent) yeah… I didn't find anyone who understand me yet
Zhein : (smiles) it is okay, I'm happy for being your friend …I guess…
Rose : (hugs Zhein's) YAY!
Zhein : I said a friend …I didn't mean anything about going on your dirty stuff!
Rose : hmm …men!
The scene switches to Kalina and Ame who were walking on an upsided-down waterfall :
Ame : what is this world? What happened here? Everything seems incorrect …
Kalina : it seems that the chains that keeps our world in balance has been broken, now everything is heading to chaos …
Ame : (grabs Kalina's cloak) I'm scared…
Kalina : (carries Ame on her shoulder) it is okay baby girl I'll be here to protect you…
Ame : I'm not baby!I'm an adult married woman now!
Kalina : Really married to who?
Ame : (blushes) Gary!
Kalina : what?! You kiddin' girl!
Ame : what? Is that something bad?
Kalina : no, no way, It's just a bit wierd to have grandsons this age, I feel like I'm already 60 ..heheh
Ame : grandsons! Who said anything about grandsons? I don't plan to have babies until the next 10 years maybe…
Kalina : (was lost in her imagination about having thousands of blue grandsons) oh yeah that's good …
Ame : were you even listening?!
Kalina : heheheh!
The scenes switches to Genji and Gary, Genji just woke up, and Gary was still knocked out and speaking in his sleep:
Gary : (creepy grin) easy now girls! one by one, I have enough for you all!
Genji : (facepalm) what a perv! Oh well I won't disturb him (he carries Gary on his back) I'll get going now …wait a minute, this my town which mean mom! Mom!
Genji : wondered in his "town" but it seems all the people are frozen in time, he looked for his house, he entered to find his mother frozen while hugging his blancket, sudden memories rushed into him:
*5 years Genji walking in the street he looks around to find a group of kids torturing a cat:
Genji : hey stop it!
Kid 1: hey it's the freak!
Kid2: let's beat him!
The kids attacked Genji who was taking their hits without saying a word but the feeling of pain made roots grow around kids and wrap them:
Kid1: ah! what is this?
One of the kids father rushed and punched Genji:
Father : demon! What have you done?
Genji : I'm sorry mister (he cries) I didn't mea nit!
Genji ran away to his house:
Granny Meiko : Genji! my boy! what happened to you?
Genji : mom …I didn't mean to hurt them …I'm a bad boy!
Granny Meiko : (cleaning him) it's fine my boy, one day they'll learn to love not for your face but for your kindness …
Genji : but everybody hates me thinking I'm a demon! How can anyone love me like this!
Granny Meiko : don't rush it kid you'll have friends with time …
Then Genji remembers how Gary and Ame changed his life saving him from himself and risking their lives to help him, and how Tobi died trying to protect him from Julius …and all the good times he spent with them
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Genji : mom I'll promise that I'll save you and the whole world …
Genji then left his house and headed to the "sky" …
Meanwhile Julius was walking through the Karielm when suddenly a large fuzzy tentacle wrapped him:
Voice : what are you mortal doing in this realm?
Julius : Sheme'yahazai, having ages didn't see you…
Sheme'yahazai : it can't be you are Exoddius!
Julius : truly I am, my girl … (Sheme'yahazai appears to be a short fully cloaked woman with two fuzzy antenas )
Sheme'yahazai : been Milleniums since I've seen you, what are you doing in such filthy mortal body?
Julius : it is far a long story, but it is for another time now I must regain my lost authority …
Sheme'yahazai : …I sense mortals in our realm!
Julius : sot hey have came …Sheme'yahazai I need your help here…
Sheme'yahazai : and so I will my love…
End of chapter to be continued​
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here what you may conclude from this chapter:
  1. Julius is a troll: Problem? mortals of the inner realm!.
  2. Never aid a young deity and teach him his full powers.
  3. Julius is such a drama queen.
  4. Rose will do almost anything to make Zhein fall for her
  5. Ame doesn't really know where do baby come from :devil:
  6. Gary is a jerk even in his sleep.
  7. Sheme'yahazai is the crowned to be the longest character name I ever created, I dare anyone to pronounce it :D.
  8. Exoddius and Sheme'yahazai on a tree :kiss: ing each others :p
 
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Wow this is great im hooked to it! :)
Though haha i started on chapter 10 because I saw that one on new threads but since then I liked it a lot!
If it's not to much trouble could you right a little summary about chapter 1-9 just so I know whats happend. I hate starting storys from the start if I have seen future chapters. :p
Im now off to read chapter 11. :)
 
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