A fantasy Story Chapter21 Part 1

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Past chapters:
Chapter 1 : - -
Chapter 2 : - -
Chapter 3 : - -
Chapter 4 : - -
Chapter 5 : - - 3 (wait a minute there isn't a 3rd part for my 5th chapter) :sy:
Chapter 6 : - -
Chapter 7 : - - -
Chapter 8 : - -
Chapter 9 : - -
Chapter 10 : - -
Chapter 11 : - -
Chapter 12 : - -
Chapter 13 : - -
Chapter 14 : - -
Chapter 15 : - -
Chapter 16 : - - -
Chapter 17 : - -
Chapter 18 : - -
Chapter 19 : -
Chapter 20 : - -

Here's a character backstory:
Gary: the pervert Protagonist, partially lost his memory, he tries to get his memory back by returning to the Empire, he's excelled at mixing elemental affinities with his katana sword beside summoning deities from another world.
Ame: the sweet imp-princess, strangely Gary's wife, she helps Gary on his quest with her healing abilities and water element use.
Genji: the logical-speaking guy, he doesn't know -like everybody else- what tribe he's, he got expelled from his village because of his appearence and ability to suck people energy and ability to control trees, he joined this journey to find out more about himself.
Eduna (A.K.A Marcelline):a mysterious priestess she seems to know as much as Julius does, she joined the rebellion war against the tyrant.
Rose: the french speaking Fairy, she's more pervert than Gary she joined the group for fun, she has the power to charm any male, she has sensorial abilities, and wide magical abilities.
Ignius: a man who've been cursed by Julius into a hideous dragon-man he seeks to avenge from Julius, with his brute raw strentgh and perfect fire element use.
Zhein: Gary's friend and adoptive brother who've been kidnapped but saved by the Tyrant' chancellor, he now on the good side, he's a hand to hand fighter, with wide knowledge over magic seals.
Julius: the Tyrant Chancellor, he's a mysterious man, with mysterious motives, his powers are unique, he tries to bring peace without looking at the cost, he is revealed to be an ancient deity that wants to bring all world to nothingness.
Kalina: Gary's mother and the best known earth manipulator on the main land.
The scions of Exoddia: a group of six powerful men who were summoned by Julius to help him get Gary and Zhein:
Halmius: A blonde man with a masked face, he later was revealed to be Eduna's old lover, eventually she killed him in a rampage.
Logh: A puppeter, and a living puppet himself, he fights using his enormous amount of puppets, and a special torturing magic...he's claimed to be having their friend Tobi's body.
Pashtaroth: A knight, he's the evil human version of Ignius, he fights with swords and monsterous techniques such as dead reviving techs, He was defeated in a battle against Ignius.
Nabri: A short man with his left face side covered in a wooden mask, Revealed to be like Genji, he's claimed to be the only one able to counter his wood technique, by summoning weapons made of special metal that can be deadly for Genji's kind...
Emmero: The only female scion, a woman with a pale blue skin, she wears a rain coat, and her eyes are bandaged, she is Ame's evil counterpart, she uses high level water, ice and steam techs.
Lahabrea: A mysterious man his face is masked with a skull mask, nothing revealed about him yet except that he's the only one able to take on Gary, then he was revealed to be Gary's father Gen'yin of another dimension...
Genesis: Lahabrea's main summon, under the form if a giant baby that seems to be able to have a large portion of spells, as he was revealed that he's supposed to be Gary but of another reality
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The revived priest Heins -with a little help of Gary and his friends- managed to put his seal on the demon Eduna, as he started the process of exorscism, immobilizing the Megidon, draining the beast's flesh toward him, but it seems that even with his special techniques of demon binding, it still giving no results…

Heins focused more powers on the link between him and his rapier that was attached to Eduna's back, Rose tried to sense the situation commenting: "It's useless…the seal isn't perfectly working…mamie is resisting…"

The priest took a deep breath then asked: "She didn't tell you about her relationship with Aiden Miredia, didn't she?"…

Rose wondered: "Aiden?...isn't that Zhein's anscestor?"

Gary's thinking was driven away: "Relationship?...you mean Eduna did it with Zhein's grand father?! Ewe gross! "…

Ame slapped the latter with her tentacles scolding: "Stop thinking like that!"

"It's not how Zidane thought, Marcelline had been altered during her youth, so she can inherit the powers of the legendary younger branch Aiden…" Heins answered…
"Altered?!" Genji asked…

And so Heins started to tell the story of Eduna and Aiden:

"Aiden Miredia…along with his twin older brother Zidane were known to be the strongest Zheinian clanmen in the era of the XVIIth tyrant, Zidane was known to be blessed with a magical body,while his younger brother was famous because he can bend his body at his own will, the bone, the blood, and the flesh, all were under his powers…

In addition to all that, he had an impervious body that can resist what's deadly for any other human…

During his battle with his brother against the tyrant in order to bring freedom to their clan, they weren't match for the usurper, they lost and retreat, unaware that their enemy had his grip over a fragment of Aiden's powers…

And so the evil king used the highlander's experience in science, and implanted that piece of Aiden in his young niece's body…true that was Marcelline Evermor, or as you call her Eduna…

The expirement created a powerful breed between the royal tribe and the Zheinian clan, the tyrant used her as a terrorizing weapon, that made the middle land kneel before him…

However, the emperor's greed seemed endless, as he tried to exceed the limits of our world, and use his niece as a…"

Gary interrupted Heins saying: "Living seal" remembering what Lahabrea told him about Genesis…

The priest continued to talk: "That's right, he turned her into a living seal for something unworldy…something evil, an entity that has no form, nor mind, that used Aiden's powers to live…"
Rose added: "The Megidon"…

Heins completed his tale: "After that Marcelline had been possessed by that calamity, as she was used against the twin branches again,but they won over her…defeated she was, her life started to change, she couldn't express any emotions, because Megidon feeds on it, she tried to keep her secret but not for long, she arrived at my village…

She was lost on the verge of suicide,God's will was with the poor woman, I took care of her, and so I knew how misguided she was"

And so Heins brought back memories of the past:

Heins enters his room carrying a bowl of hot soup, where Eduna…or as she was known as Marcelline during that era was lying on a bed, staring at him with her eyes reflecting her fear from an unknown fate, holding her left wrist that was wrapped with bandages…
The priest put the dish on a table nearby and turned toward the escapee, with a smile he saluted her: "Hi you alright?…thank God, I was there to save you, have you lost your mind hurting your wrist like that?...sorry if I was talking so much, I didn't get so much visitors lately…"

Marcelline didn't seem to have interest, she asked him coldly: "Give me the dish"…
The latter did what he was asked to do, shortly before being literaly sprayed with the soup: "What the hell!...ugh…what kind of ingredients did you use for this?!" shouted the injured woman…

Heins wiped his face saying: "Hehe…sorry, I'm a bit short on money lately so I couldn't afford expensive spices, I know it's hard for someone who've been raised in the royal family to eat food like this but…"

"Stop!" the woman interrupted the priest with tears in her eyes asking: "Why do you help me if you know who I am?!"…

Heins smiled saying: "Because we all deserve a second chance, even if we were from the royal family, besides I can't believe that a beautiful maiden like you can be a bad pers…" but the man stopped talking avoiding the dish that was tossed toward him by Marcelline: "You really have anger problems" the man commented on the woman's act…

Eduna grabbed her head and badly she started to apologize: "I'm sorry!I'm sorry! I can't …it's because I have that…never mind! I'm sorry…" but she was calmed when Heins embraced her saying: "Have no fear it'll all be alright"…

Weeks passed and Marcelline's health had got better, she even started to help Heins shopping ,taking care of the house, and even teaching the children instead of him,she started to see the world as a beautiful place seeing how people stands for each other, she found the meaning of love, kindness, and friendship, things she missed while she was living as the royal family member…

But nothing stays the same, one night when Heins was busy tutoring children in the temple of their village, the emperial army attacked their town, and so the people had nothing but defending their home, as the royal woman was hiding in her house watching…

In the middle of all that chaos Marcelline was witnessing the villagers' defeat, when suddenly she realized that she can't hold her demon anymore, and headed directly to the battle, slicing the enemy with her bare hand, the view of leaking blood made her demonic instinct urges for more, as she started to transform, growing extra eyes, creating horns of bone, and a third skeletal arm…

Both of the town people and the emperial soldiers retreat in fear of the demon lady, seeing them running from her made her feel worst, releasing a powerful cry that filled the surrounding area… "Marcelline!" a shout interrupted all that…

Heins emmerged delivering a powerful punch to the demon sending her steps back: "Megidon! I know you are inside her! Prepare to be banished from this world!" said the priest while pointing his rapier toward Eduna…

The beast didn't spare a moment and rushed instantly toward Heins, who swiftly managed to avoid the coming attack, but he didn't notice that the demon's third arm caught his own…

Megidon furiously bite the priest's neck, but the latter smiled saying: "You really have anger problems…eh Marcelline?!" before dropping his rapier and kicking it to hit the beast's stomach violantly releasing Heins who didn't save a moment smashing the demon's heart using his palm forming a seal around its heart, and so Marcelline's evil was suppressed…

The woman fell in Heins arms, barely speaking but the latter could understand that she said: "See? I told you that I'm a monster"…but the priest smiled saying: "No I don't see a monster…I see a woman, that is lost, walking in a dark place, a place so dark that she can't see that there's someone holding her hand"


"And he shall hold it forever!"Heins regained his focus saying: "But that was back then, things've changed, my hundread years seal came to an end and the Megidon used Aiden's powers to manifest within Marcelline again, this is something that can't be forgiven!" said the man while raising both of his hands to the sky, then clapping them in an instant chanting, then seven pillars of light surrounded the demon, bindning it with their light…

Nabri commented: "The seven heavenly pillars! You fool! are you trying to kill yourself?!", Genji added: "He's dead already!"

Heins smiled saying: "And why not dying to save someone you love"…

But an unexpected thing happened; the pillars shiny golden color turned to dark purplish glow, and the body of the Megidon started to absorb it, Heins stood in fear saying: "Impossible! Marcelline can use cursed tyranny with the holy element too!"

After "devouring" the holy light the beast grew larger, and with that six long bones were formed on his back, creating a large sphere of dark lightning: "Everyone back off!" Heins shouted, but Genji jumped in front of him, creating a large thick wall of trees saying: "Haven't you just said, you'd die for someone you love?"…

The orb of lightning collided with the wall, unusually the wood conducted the dark current to damage Genji intensly throwing him back a distance, Rose followed him to protect him from the fall…

Gary charged wind to his blade saying: "That's enough! I'll stop her even if I have to slice her to small pieces…Ame use your icy dust on my sword!" and so the imp did covering her partner's sword with ice crystals to make its cutting power even deadlier…

And so the young swordman jumped at the beast, using his immense speed he managed to perofrm a combo of destructive cuts making Megidon drop a lot of flesh, but he was careless not noticing the third skeletal arm that hit him badly injuring his back, sending him to the ground…

Ame rushed to heal but he stopped her saying: "It's okay I got her where I want!", he clapped his hands using the immense pain to fuel his deity transformation…

The deity boy jumped highly to perform a diving stab, Heins shouted at him: "Zidane! don't…" but it was too late, the young man hit the beast, but the latter instead of getting damaged he started to absorb Gary's deity magia until it was totally draught…

Ame acted quickly and pulled her lover from the situation, Gary was confused: "What the…?" he asked…

Heins answered: "Cursed tyranny and Deity magic don't go along togather! Never try to make them face each other"…

Now half of the team is incapable to fight, and the beast seems to grow even larger, the latter was ready to release his cursed fire breath attack, charging dark flames in his mouth, the imp stood in the front saying: "Water defeats fire! I'll stop that!", but the priest prevented her: "Imp! Stop it! Cursed flames aren't a regular fire magic!"…

The beast released his attack, and even Ame's continuous ice walls didn't manage to extinguish it, they were on the verge of being obliterated, but suddenly a fiery dragon emerged from the ground and grabbed the attack absorbing it into nothingness…

"Oi! I left you for a day and I see that you are into hell of troubles!" a familiar voice echoed…

Gary turned around saying: "Uncle Ignius!", and so he really was the dragon man Ignius holding his magic blade "Santos Espada", the knight jumped to face the beast…

Heins commented after seeing the full form of the enchanted sword: "The Santos Espada!...you are a Dhelvi family member! But you look different!"

Ignius answered: "Details!" then he pointed his weapon toward the Megidon saying: "And who's this guy?!"

Gary wiped his mouth saying: "Eduna…believe it or not, and this guy here is her lover Heins"…

Ignius scratched his head saying: "Wow! Crazy stuff happened here! Explain later" then he grew to match the beast's size and started a hand to hand battle with Eduna…

Rose approached aiding Genji to walk saying: "Guys, I don't think that Ignius would be so much help, mamie is still growing, and her magia is going more demonic!"…

Heins closed his eyes saying: "I think the Megidon is taking over her mind, and she's not resisting it…then there's only one solution!"…

Rose and the others looked interested: "One solution?!" they asked…

Heins answered: "Yes…we need to force her to resist it… from the inside"

To be continued​

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Wow! So long! xd You’ve really put a lot of efforts on it! :y But I have something to complain here & that would be the layout of the green-black parts! -___- It hurts the eyes so badly! U_U Please change it to another color like blue (with no mixed black color :| !) You know, the layout of your text is one of the most dominant reasons of attracting or pushing away your readers! :)
 

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Wow! So long! xd You’ve really put a lot of efforts on it! :y But I have something to complain here & that would be the layout of the green-black parts! -___- It hurts the eyes so badly! U_U Please change it to another color like blue (with no mixed black color :| !) You know, the layout of your text is one of the most dominant reasons of attracting or pushing away your readers! :)

xd done for you xd
 

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Great chapter my Friend now I'll see in in about 20 mins lol
 
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