A fantasy Story Chapter20 Part 2

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Past chapters:
Chapter 1 : - -
Chapter 2 : - -
Chapter 3 : - -
Chapter 4 : - -
Chapter 5 : - - 3 (wait a minute there isn't a 3rd part for my 5th chapter) :sy:
Chapter 6 : - -
Chapter 7 : - - -
Chapter 8 : - -
Chapter 9 : - -
Chapter 10 : - -
Chapter 11 : - -
Chapter 12 : - -
Chapter 13 : - -
Chapter 14 : - -
Chapter 15 : - -
Chapter 16 : - - -
Chapter 17 : - -
Chapter 18 : - -
Chapter 19 : -
Chapter 20 :

Here's a character backstory:
Gary: the pervert Protagonist, partially lost his memory, he tries to get his memory back by returning to the Empire, he's excelled at mixing elemental affinities with his katana sword beside summoning deities from another world.
Ame: the sweet imp-princess, strangely Gary's wife, she helps Gary on his quest with her healing abilities and water element use.
Genji: the logical-speaking guy, he doesn't know -like everybody else- what tribe he's, he got expelled from his village because of his appearence and ability to suck people energy and ability to control trees, he joined this journey to find out more about himself.
Eduna:a mysterious priestess she seems to know as much as Julius does, she joined the rebellion war against the tyrant.
Rose: the french speaking Fairy, she's more pervert than Gary she joined the group for fun, she has the power to charm any male, she has sensorial abilities, and wide magical abilities.
Ignius: a man who've been cursed by Julius into a hideous dragon-man he seeks to avenge from Julius, with his brute raw strentgh and perfect fire element use.
Zhein: Gary's friend and adoptive brother who've been kidnapped but saved by the Tyrant' chancellor, he now on the good side, he's a hand to hand fighter, with wide knowledge over magic seals.
Julius: the Tyrant Chancellor, he's a mysterious man, with mysterious motives, his powers are unique, he tries to bring peace without looking at the cost, he is revealed to be an ancient deity that wants to bring all world to nothingness.
Kalina: Gary's mother and the best known earth manipulator on the main land.
The scions of Exoddia: a group of six powerful men who were summoned by Julius to help him get Gary and Zhein:
Halmius: A blonde man with a masked face, he later was revealed to be Eduna's old lover, eventually she killed him in a rampage.
Logh: A puppeter, and a living puppet himself, he fights using his enormous amount of puppets, and a special torturing magic...he's claimed to be having their friend Tobi's body.
Pashtaroth: A knight, he's the evil human version of Ignius, he fights with swords and monsterous techniques such as dead reviving techs, He was defeated in a battle against Ignius.
Nabri: A short man with his left face side covered in a wooden mask, Revealed to be like Genji, he's claimed to be the only one able to counter his wood technique, by summoning weapons made of special metal that can be deadly for Genji's kind...
Emmero: The only female scion, a woman with a pale blue skin, she wears a rain coat, and her eyes are bandaged, she is Ame's evil counterpart, she uses high level water, ice and steam techs.
Lahabrea: A mysterious man his face is masked with a skull mask, nothing revealed about him yet except that he's the only one able to take on Gary, then he was revealed to be Gary's father Gen'yin of another dimension...
Genesis: Lahabrea's main summon, under the form if a giant baby that seems to be able to have a large portion of spells, as he was revealed that he's supposed to be Gary but of another reality
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They've finally reunited, Gary, Genji, Ame, and Rose, meeting eachother at the ruins of Halmius' village, they faced their possessed friend Eduna in her demon form, but they were no match for her so they comitted retreat…

Then Genji revealed that he saved Nabri the scion, who seemed to be just a misguided child fooled by Julius, and shared the same body with him to manifest on Genji's shoulder as a small sprout, it was hard to be accepted especially by Gary, but in the end it seems that they gave him a second chance…

Nabri then mentioned something interesting, he told them that they can revert Eduna to a human, but they need to revive Heins; the priest who Eduna fell in love with a thousand years prior to these events, and the more shocking thing is that Gary is the one capable to revive him…

Under the surprise of what they heard from Nabri Rose spoke: "You're kiddin'! How can an imbecile such as Pervers be able to revive people"…

Gary nodded: "Yeah…Wait! An imbecile!..."

Nabri interrupted them saying: "I didn't say he's able to revive people…yet, I'm going to teach him hpw, but I need all of you, and certain requirement"…

Genji asked: "Requirement? What do you mean?"…

The sprout answered: "Well, have you ever heard of the Dark art of reincarnation before?"…

Genji signed that he didn't, but Rose remembered something: "Wait guys, I think I know what he's referring to, back when I was a part of the rebellion army, we surrounded the Tyrant in his lair but he used some strange magic to call forth the dead, among them there were Zhein's clan and even his family members…"

Nabri nodded: "That's an improvement for what I'm talking about, it's called Dark art of the dead lands, I meant its basic skill where you can revive one person"…

Ame added in fear: "But aren't these forbidden arts?!"

Nabri answered: "Either you take it or you leave it, I don't know another way, believe me"…

Gary thought deeply for a while then he asked: "What are you talking about anyway, guys?"

The whole group felt depressed of Gary's dumbness, but he scratched his head saying: "C'mon I lost you when you are talking in such complicated stuff"…

Nabri whispered in Genji's ear: "With such an idiot, you are all doomed", and the latter responded with a silly smile…

After the re-explanation of what seemed to be obvious, Gary came to understand what his friends are trying to say…

Nabri started to instruct them: "Well the first requirement that we need…is Halmius' corpse"…

The group felt wierd of this instruction, but Gary stood up saying: "I know it's wierd guys, but rememebr it's all for our friend Eduna…I'll go" and so he started running to turn back after a while: "By the way guys do you know where's the corpse?" asked the young man…

Rose hit her face with her palm saying: "Quel salauds imbecile!...I'll come with you, I remember where he died!" and so he was rejoined by the fairy…

Within the half hour they waited, Ame thought of preparing some food for the group, this time Genji with the help of Nabri's instructions managed to grow a small pears tree, Ame complimented the sprout's knowledge saying: "Wow Nabri you are smart!"…

Nabri said in pride: "Of course I…" but he suddenly felt something warm and broke small tears: "Actually this is the first time a girl says something nice to me, is this friendship?" asked while rubbing his head on one of his petals…

Genji laughed a bit saying: "See that's why I told you having friends is something wonderful"…

Then they heard sound of slow steps approaching them, they put their guards on, but it was nothing to fear, they were Rose and Gary, each of them is holding a part of the cold corpse of Halmius, Gary dropped the dead body and fell on the ground shaking: "That was…creepy!" he said before rushing to the water flow to vomit…

Rose insulted him: "Coward!" but as soon as she hold her mouth and joined him…

After gathering themselves, and ate some fruits to restore their energy, the young hero asked: "Now what?"…

Nabri answered: "Now we sleep!"…

The group wondered: "Sleep?"

The sprout nodded: "Yes we sleep, one spell of those reincarnation techniques consume a whole day deal of magia, if we perform it like, this we won't be able to revive even a roach"…

And so the group had nothing but to obey the scion's order and go to bed, the first night they were able to rest peacefully ever since they entered Exoddia…

In the morning the group woke up on the smell of scorched flesh, Gary opens hos eyes slowly but soon to be surprised witnessing Genji burning the corpse, he shouted: "Idiot! what are you doing?!"

Genji stopped Gary from attacking Nabri saying: "It's ok Gary! It's a part of the technique!"

Rose confirmed: "Yes, I recall when the tyrant casted it, he summoned ashes of the dead first"

Gary calmed: "Um…Okay sorry" he apologized to Nabri…

The latter started to explain this technique: "Ok, first to know what are we going to do, you must know that this is a very complicated technique, so mistakes are intolerable, it's a mix of space time manipulation with a forbidden art of bending the souls, which is simply impossible for any mortal tribe except for humans"

Genji asked: "Then why we are involved in it?"

Nabri continued to explain: "Because you need three types of mages to do it; a Soul bender who's naturally a human space time manipulator and it's Gary, A space time manipulators who're you and me, and a professional healer who are the imp and the fairy…now shall we begin?"

The group nodded that they're ready…

Genji put his palms on the ground summoning small wooden structures, that soon rearranged into a large cylindrical base that contained the ashes surrounded by three totem poles of different sizes: "Now Gary, stand in the top of the highest one, Genji on the middle one, and the girls on the lowest one" Nabri instructed…

"Now we first need to call forth the soul of Heins" the scion said…

Rose interrupted: "Wait a minute! If we are going to revive Heins, why we are using Halmius' corpse?"…

Nabri answered: "Because Halmius and Heins, despite being of different dimensions, they are still the same person, it doesn't matter whose body we are using as long as the memento is Heins'"…


Gary asked: "Memento?"
Nabri answered: "Yes, something that had an expensive emotional price for the dead to make him attached to this world, a jewel or a book or something like that, …"

Rose said: "Wait! I think there's one!", she pulled Eduna's cloak from her magic bag, and started searching in a hidden pocket, then pulled an old necklace, it was made of a blue rectangular crystal, tied to a golden hair lock: "I think this is what are we looking for" said Rose…

Ame asked: "What makes you so sure?"…

The fairy said: "Well, this is not mamie Eduna's hair, and there's a small runic écriture poem on it, I couldn't translate it all but the last part is saying: -I prayed… God shall reunite our souls togather one day… by Marcelline Evermor-"

Nabri completed his lesson: "Good give it to Gary, he'll start the ritual by calling his soul from the after life, then Genji and I shall rebuild his body using time manipulation by inverting the effect of decaying that his body had been into, finally you girls need to focus your healing magia on the reforming corpse to give it vitality…"

Gary seemed excited: "Cool! Now…would anyone care to explain, how can I call forth the soul of Heins?"

Nabri commented: "As expected!...here I'll teach you, first draw some blood from your fingers…then draw a line on the relic…cross the index and the middle of each hand while putting the necklace between them…focus your space manipulating magia in it, try to feel the world of the after life…focus on finding the soul that gives you the same feeling as this necklace gives you…" the sprout tutored Gary…

And so Gary did, unusually he managed to feel the afterlife souls: "I feel it" he said in a calm voice, Nabri added: "Good…now have you found the soul of Heins? it's supposed to be similiar to Halmius' appearence"

Gary nodded…

The scion asked the young man to repeat after him: "Akane bi shura wanne…Zent rohu mane… araoia"

Ame asked Rose what is that suppose to mean, the latter answered her: "It's in ancient native tongue of the main land, it means: -O' essence of the lost…please give your soul to me…just for once-"…

Gary's body shivered heavily, as he sweated, he started to scream: "No! I can't! it's hard!", Nabri scolded him: "You either do it! or your soul will be lost in the after life as well! Forever! Remember that you are doing it for Eduna!"…

Gary forced himself to continue the rituals, his mouth suddenly bulged like a toad's, vomitting a shiny white etheral entity that started to spin around him, Nabri commented showing his excitement: "Unbelievable! You managed to summon his soul without passing away!"…

Gary kneeled on his knee, heavily breathing and started complaining: "Dammit! I feel like my whole magia had been drawn!"…

The sprout added: "What'd you expect? It's a forbidden technique, you are lucky it didn't kill you!...now hurry up and seal that soul with your blood"…

Gary made a small cut on his palm using the edge of the pole, and subconsciously he grabbed that soul and sent it to merge with the ashes, shortly before he collapsed…

Ame looked worried but Nabri interrupted them: "He did his part… now it's ours"

Genji pointed his magical staff toward the ashes, casting a small time warp around it, the remeneants of the dead started to glow, reforming a skeletal structure, that got covered with flesh: "Girls now! Cast your healing magic at an equal ratio!" Nabri ordered both Ame and Rose…

The girls put grabbed each other's hand, and casted their curing techniques and the reforming corpse, Genji started to loose his balance, but Nabri smacked him to wake up, the three did their best, until all their magia got draught, causing them to collapse, Nabri ordered his last: "Gary! unseal the spirit!"

Gary barely managed to move, but he pushed himself, and clapped his hands releasing the spirit of Heins…

Seconds passed, and the ashes magically reformed itself, giving the body of a middle aged man, with an average body build, the man was wearing a full body white cloack with many black runic marking on it, a pale face, with green eyes and blonde straight hair that ends with sideburns…And that was Heins

To be continued​

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Next issue: Heins
 

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Great endings your chapters' parts have! xd Haha I don’t know so much about the details of the story but I say your endings are epic! :y You have talent, worthy to be known as the writer of fictional books! :y You truly know how to make a story interesting & make the readers sit in their place, waiting for the next part! :y
Hah I was totally fixed, gazing at my monitor screen! :D
 
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