A fantasy Story Chapter19 Part 2

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Past chapters:
Chapter 1 : - -
Chapter 2 : - -
Chapter 3 : - -
Chapter 4 : - -
Chapter 5 : - - 3 (wait a minute there isn't a 3rd part for my 5th chapter) :sy:
Chapter 6 : - -
Chapter 7 : - - -
Chapter 8 : - -
Chapter 9 : - -
Chapter 10 : - -
Chapter 11 : - -
Chapter 12 : - -
Chapter 13 : - -
Chapter 14 : - -
Chapter 15 : - -
Chapter 16 : - - -
Chapter 17 : - -
Chapter 18 : - -
Chapter 19 :

Here's a character backstory:
Gary: the pervert Protagonist, partially lost his memory, he tries to get his memory back by returning to the Empire, he's excelled at mixing elemental affinities with his katana sword beside summoning deities from another world.
Ame: the sweet imp-princess, strangely Gary's wife, she helps Gary on his quest with her healing abilities and water element use.
Genji: the logical-speaking guy, he doesn't know -like everybody else- what tribe he's, he got expelled from his village because of his appearence and ability to suck people energy and ability to control trees, he joined this journey to find out more about himself.
Eduna:a mysterious priestess she seems to know as much as Julius does, she joined the rebellion war against the tyrant.
Rose: the french speaking Fairy, she's more pervert than Gary she joined the group for fun, she has the power to charm any male, she has sensorial abilities, and wide magical abilities.
Ignius: a man who've been cursed by Julius into a hideous dragon-man he seeks to avenge from Julius, with his brute raw strentgh and perfect fire element use.
Zhein: Gary's friend and adoptive brother who've been kidnapped but saved by the Tyrant' chancellor, he now on the good side, he's a hand to hand fighter, with wide knowledge over magic seals.
Julius: the Tyrant Chancellor, he's a mysterious man, with mysterious motives, his powers are unique, he tries to bring peace without looking at the cost, he is revealed to be an ancient deity that wants to bring all world to nothingness.
Kalina: Gary's mother and the best known earth manipulator on the main land.
The scions of Exoddia: a group of six powerful men who were summoned by Julius to help him get Gary and Zhein:
Halmius: A blonde man with a masked face, he later was revealed to be Eduna's old lover, eventually she killed him in a rampage.
Logh: A puppeter, and a living puppet himself, he fights using his enormous amount of puppets, and a special torturing magic...he's claimed to be having their friend Tobi's body.
Pashtaroth: A knight, he's the evil human version of Ignius, he fights with swords and monsterous techniques such as dead reviving techs, He was defeated in a battle against Ignius.
Nabri: A short man with his left face side covered in a wooden mask, Revealed to be like Genji, he's claimed to be the only one able to counter his wood technique, by summoning weapons made of special metal that can be deadly for Genji's kind...
Emmero: The only female scion, a woman with a pale blue skin, she wears a rain coat, and her eyes are bandaged, she is Ame's evil counterpart, she uses high level water, ice and steam techs.
Lahabrea: A mysterious man his face is masked with a skull mask, nothing revealed about him yet except that he's the only one able to take on Gary, then he was revealed to be Gary's father Gen'yin of another dimension...
Genesis: Lahabrea's main summon, under the form if a giant baby that seems to be able to have a large portion of spells, as he was revealed that he's supposed to be Gary but of another reality

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Rose and Ame were driven in a fight against the scion Emmero, who stands between them and rejoining their friends, the female scion claims that she's the perfect evil version of Ame, used her mysterious water magic to lock her good counterpart in a threatening explosion…

Fortunately, the explosive water drops stopped engmatically by being attracted to a strange purple circle under Ame's feet, it was Rose who formed her hand in a strange sign; her right hand closed with both of the index and the middle separated over her left's palm opened except for the thumb…

Ame smiled while looking to her friend, but the latter shouted at her: "Petite! Move it!"…

And so did the imp, jumping away from the spell that detonated, Emmero smirked: "Oh impressive! A seventeen years old sylphid fairy that can cast shadow crests…"

The word "slyphid" angered Rose that she pointed her staff releasing a drilling wind spell, but the target blocked it using an instantly created frozen rampart, usning this moment the fairy grabbed her friend and flied with her to hide behind a safe tower top…

The girls took their breaths, Rose noticed the burns on Ame's back, so she casted a healing technique on her, the imp thanked her friend and wondered what happened, so the fairy had to explain: "That circle was a shadow crest; it's a high level shadow elemnet, I can with it dissamble almost any technique to pure magia, but it has to release it as a form of a blast…"

Ame admitted impression saying: "Wow rose you are amazing!"…

Rose gulped saying: "But what happened before that is what I don't get …I was sure that her first explosion faded, but it returned from …nothingness"…

Ame heard something coming, so she pushed Rose with her to jump off the tower saving her from another ice bomb, but it didn't stop here because the bomb reformed again to attack them, so Rose countered it using another shadow crest…

The girls landed in front of the scion who laughed at their persistance: "You really need to give up! You are no match for my supremacy!", ame replied saying: "In your face! As long as we have rose use her crests you can't hurt us!"…

Rose put her palm over her face complaining: "Dieu! quelle imbecile! I can't use them as much as I want! My magia isn't like Gary's!"…

"Well excuse me for being not into magic like you!" Ame shouted in her face…

"Of course you are not, retard!" the fairy answered…

"Are you referring that I'm stupid!?" Ame asked…

"I dunno ask yourself!" the fairy said in anger…

And so they totally forgot that they're facing an enemy and started a futile argument, Emmero smiled: "this is going to be easier than I thought!" as she formed an orb of spinning water at them, Ame notice dit so she blocked it with a water barrier that froze immediately, suddenly the wall started to melt into a boiling wave, the girls jumped back evading it, Rose predicted something: "Petite! breath!" ordered her partner, and so Ame released her icy dust to freeze the pond before reforming again…

Rose stared at Emmero saying: "This is your magic…time manipulation!"…

Ame asked: "Time…manipulation?"…

The fairy started to explain: "All scions share this aspect, they're similiar to Julius, they can manipulate space and time, and so as with her, she rewind time back to make the same attack available over and over, but it seems that the attack musn't be blocked so she can do this"…

Emmero stood surprised as she tried to talk but she was interrupted: "Yet there's still another weakpoint…you are a sea imp so you can't use other elements than water, making your powers way too limited compared to the other scums of scions!" said Rose while smiling trying to take her breaths…

Emmero frowned: "Well you are right, I'm the weakest among the scions…" she removes her rain coat, to reveal that she wears a standard sea imp attire; a white thighs-long dress with golden and green marking as a sign for the royal family, continued by tight dark blue pants covered with a green waist cloth, like something Ame used to wear before her escape and shape shifting, but that wasn't as imprortant as her bandages that extended from just covering her eyes to covering her arms, breasts, and torso, ending looking like a twin tail…

Rose used this moment to release another joke: "Wow Petite! It seems that evil comes with extra large breasts… teehee"…

Ame blushed saying: "Stop it!"…

The scion suddenly moved instantly in front of the fairy kicking her to the sky, Ame tried to react but she was slower than their enemy who punched her to the icy wall next to her…

"This shall be the last time you'll ever laugh" said Emmero before locking Rose in a large bubble of water sending her away…

Ame tried to follow her friend but she was prevented from this because the scion surrounded the area with an icy dome…

"Ya Raameyururu…Magi ti wa lu" said Emmero challenging Ame in her people's native language…

The little imp girl turned toward her answering that she'll save her friend: "Wa kita, wu mera!" as she rushed into her forming an icy katana, Emmero laughed and with a swiftly kick she broke the weapon and sent its owner to the air, but without missing a chance she lifted her leg extending it into a long ice pole causing even more damage to the heroine…

Ame fell on the ground, her body was badly hurt, but she stood, Emmero mocked her persistance: "No way! you still have some power yet! Expected from someone who is me…"

The imp girl stood properly: "I am nothing like you! I have a husband to defend, I have a sister to see, and a friend to save! I may not have Exoddius' blessing in my body but…I have my faith and my pride as the princess of Submerria!"

Ame rushed toward her enemy fearlessly, the latter of course tried to kick her back, but she was surprised, the imp girl released an icy blast toward the ground to push herself highly in the air, rising her hands forming an extremly massive iceberg to toss it to the ground, the enemy blocked this attack with her elbow, unaware that Ame sent her tentacle straightly through the large obstacle to grab her arm and throw her highly in the air, then Ame landed as she separated her arms and started to take a deep breath making her surrounding glows with icy dust, that quickly gathered in her closed palms ressembling to a small snow ball, finishing her technique by blowing it to hit Emmero causing a large explosion of ice…

The scion fell on the ground violently, showing no reaction, which made Ame relax saying: "Thank God, I defeated her…"…

But not that easy…Emmero stood up, removing the chunks of ice off her skin: "Impressive, you performed our father's secret technique but with ice manipulation, gotta admit you got me with it!" the bandages over the scion's arm got untied: "I'll show you what a real water technique is!" said Emmero while clapping her hand causing the whole icy area around them to turn into water, the water gathered like a vortex and headed to the sky: "Witness the Leviathan!" were the villian's words before her spell is casted under the form of a large demonic water dragon that collided with the battle field throwing Ame badly injured…

Ame's body was immobilized because of the pain, Emmero laughed: "Pathetic excuse even for the name of Raameyururu…DIE!" said before throwing a large water bomb that exploded into an ice cluster, but Ame was saved by Rose who flied away with her…

"So you were saved" Emmero said to Rose…

The fairy landed, and quickly casted a healing spell on her friend that totally cured her, she wiped her mouth: "Her name is Ame, and it's a beautiful name by the way…and if there was any pathetic existance here…then it's You! You became a crazy woman who seeks power just because you hold the power of that damned Exoddius, you think you are better than her!"…

"Ineresting lecture there Roselline, but at the same time I'm not quite intersted" said Emmero pointing her palm to the girls, but she grinned and changed her hand to the sky releasing a beam of water: "I guess you should've brought an umbrella because it's going to rain, my special YeeNii rain…"

"Hot and cold rain?" Ame wondered…

And so it started to rain, strangely the drops were detonating with hot temperature the moment they touch a surface to freeze instantly forming a mass of ice, witnessing this Rose quickly hid under a broken ruin of a crystal tower, noticing that Ame didn't get affected with the rain she started to conclude a plan: "Petite! Come!" she called her friend…

Emmero didn't spare them a chance, as she broke their shelter, Rose quickly slammed her fists to the ground creating a dome of rocks, this defence wasn't effective because Rose' earth element was the weakest as her technique started to crumble, she instructed her partned: "Petite! I have a plan but you must do something to me", Ame listened carefully…

Emmero wanted to finish this battle quickly so she attacked the rock dome using her ice bombs breaking it apart, from the dust Rose flied to the sky, but strangely the rain didn't effect her, Rose passed a kiss to Emmero trying to taunt her, and flied away…

The angered scion followed them by jumping from a tower to tower: "Dammit! I can't believe it! those girls are pushing me toward opening the body gate!" said Emmero while removing the bandages over her breasts and stomach, with this act her magia had grown bigger she rised her hands causing water to gather around her, and reformed it into a giant jelly fish…

Rose witnessed that as her senorial powers started to work again telling her that her enemy is getting stronger: "Merde! I didn't put that in count!" said the fairy while avoiding ice projectile launched from the beast's tentacles…

However she got hit by one of those which didn't detonate as expected sinding her to the ground, the scion and her monster landed, and Rose got swallowed by the water beast, Emmero stared at her saying: "Not bad! I still don't get how you resisted my rain but this is the end!"…

Rose smiled, shortly before the whole jellyfish started to shrink, it seems that her body is absorbing it, Emmero jumped back looking in shock: "What the ? how is that?"…

After the whole technique is absorbed, Rose laughed lightly: "Very good work…Petite!", as it was revealed that Ame used her hyderfication technique to cover Rose's whole body saving her from being affected by the scion's water element…

Emmero's anger reached its limits, she didn't hesitate and attacked Rose directly with a kick, but Ame's body absorbed the attack and locked Emmero with ice…

Rose raised her hands in the sky forming a shadow crest above her enemy saying: "Farewell…", Ame jumped off Rose over the magic circle, to create an iceberg, witnessing that Emmero laughed: "Heh! Are you that desparate you know that water doesn't effect me!"…

Rose grinned saying: "I know, I know, but fire does!" and so she created a red crest under the shadow one: "As you can see that's a fire crest, after I convert Petite's ice into raw magia I shall revert it to fire right over you!"…

Emmero tried to unlock her self from the trouble but she was slower than the girls, because the spell is already launched under the form of a large fireball: "But that's not all" said Rose while creating a green wind elemental crest that fueled the fire attack even more, and so Emmero was trapped in a huge explosion…

Ame fell on the ground exhausted, but soon she gathered herself and stood up, Rose on the other hand took a deep breath, and did some strange pose saying: "Now the whole world shall kneel before femme fatale!"…

Ame wiped some sweat saying: "Poser…"

The fairy said: "Yeah! But at least I still have these" pointing to her chest…

Ame blushed again: "Shut up!"…

Rose suddenly turned serious hitting her face with her palm: "Ayayae…We forgot something really important!"…

Ame asked in interst: "What is it!?"…

Rose smirked: "We forgot to ask that Emmero how she manage to get those breasts, you know to make you have some too…" finishing her sentence with a deep laughter…

The embarassed imp felt so frustrated but her friends stopped her saying: "Nah don't even think about kicking me there…it ain't gonna work"…

Ame turned her face away: "Honestly you are just a dork!"…

Rose tried to argue more but suddenly her body shivered intensly: "Oh no! This can't be true!" she said in fear…

Ame ignored her: "hmph like I'd fall for it…"
But this time the fairy wasn't lying, because their enemy emerged from the ground, Emmero barely taking her breaths shouted at them: "I'm Emmero! I'm a deity! I can't loose to scum like you!" while quickly removed the bandages over her eyes: "Now you shall die mortals!"

The surrounding air was lifted, Rose sensed huge amount of magia leaking from the scion's body: "This can't be…Petite run quickly!" Rose ordered her friend…

End of chapter to be continued​

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Just a note about Ame and Rose's powers:
Ame: she can manipulate water in its 3 phases, however she can only absorb a limited amount of water as a liquid making her weak against ice and steam.
Rose's crests: Rose as a sylphid fairy can use Wind, Fire, Shadows, and water, and a very weak earth element, however her shadow crest is a very special magic because it has a slightly different effect:
Shadow crest: it converts elemental spells into raw magic power, then it shoots it as a beam, which can be used as a favour, because when raw magia passes by a fire , water , wind , earth , or holy
elemental crest, the latter transforms it into an elemnetal attack again.
 
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Very long & of course nice piece, my friend! :) I got into the story like I was actually there seeing everything happening… joy, anger, excitement…! xd Your descriptions are really good! :y + It had some funny parts too! :p It’s obvious you’ve put a lot of time on it! :rolleyes: Job well done! I say it again; See if you can publish your story as a book but I think you know it needs some editing for it! You deserve more than this so go for it!
It’s worth doing it I guess! ^_^
I wish I could've supported you, my friend, but I'm the one needing some right now! U_U
 
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Hmmm....it was good. I didn't really understand most of it....water imp and scion are strange to me....is this an FF from some manga? Or an OF? Anyways, I liked the writing and enjoyed what I read very very much. Sorry for late review...:shy:
 
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