A Detective vs A Doctor (Detective L vs Dr.Proof) (closed)

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Rei's R and R
Start at mid-range
Terrain:Where Itachi and Sasuke fought
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Shikamaru Nara? I don't ever recall you being much of a fighter..
 

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"Eh,its for some important stuff.Let's make this quick eh."
As he speaks to the unknown man,Shikamaru quickly forms the rat handseal and inserts his chakra into his shadow.He then extends his shadow towards the man,capturing the man,rendering him useless.

Kage Mane) - Shadow Imitation
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Traps the enemy by combining shadows.

"Like I said,I ain't got time to waste."

Shikamaru then gathers his Raiton chakra and covers himself with it.He then produces a bolt of lightning from his right hand towards the mysterious man.As the man can't move,the bolt of lightning hits the man.

Raiton: Bakurai ) - Lightning Release: Depth Charge
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After enveloping themselves with lightning, the user emanates a powerful bolt of electricity targeted at their opponent.
"What a drag.."
 

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How impatient..

Aoba weary knowing that you are of the Nara Clan, takes notice of you forming the Rat hand seal in which he retaliates by kneading chakra within his forearm swinging his arm from his chest, down to the ground causing a flame wall blocking your line of sight, and Kage Mane's possible succession.

( Katon: Honoo no Heki ) Fire Release: Flame Wall
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user kneads fire chakra into their forearm and then by swinging their arm in a wave motion they release the fire chakra creating a line of fire that spreads out infront of the user acting as a defensive wall.

Once Aoba blocks your frontal line of sight he pulls out an explosive kunai then swiftly side steps to the left while throwing the same explosive kunai in which was about to explode directly at your chest area exploding inches away from your chest causing you to be in a state of confusion, along with not only your 12 o'clock (north) viewpoint, but your 3 (east), 6 (south), and 9 (west) being blocked as well, due to you being captured in a small space of mist.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air. This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it. This effect lasts for 2 turns.

Once your senses, and line of sight are put out of play. Aoba (due to you, and him still being within Mid-Range) swiftly performs the hand seals Ram β†’ Boar β†’ Dog β†’ Bird β†’ Hare summoning the Four Giant Pillars completely surrounding the small area of mist in which you've been caught in. Binding you, as well as causing significant damage allowing Aoba to successfully defeat you.

(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram β†’ Boar β†’ Dog β†’ Bird β†’ Hare hand seals they then summon Four Giant Pillars surrounding the enemy target and then the user shoots out bolts of lightning, binding the target in place and possibly doing damage to them.

And that was your downfall..

*Uses Fire Release: Flame Wall downward to block Line Of Sight deeming Kage Mane unsuccessful.

*Pulls out Explosive Kunai, then side steps to the left, throwing the soon to explode kunai at your chest. Kunai explodes causing you confusion, and your Line Of Sight is blocked from your 12, 3, 6, and 9 o'clock viewpoints.

*Due to your confusion, Aoba performs the hand seals Ram β†’ Boar β†’ Dog β†’ Bird β†’ Hare summoning Four Giant Pillars capturing you, and causing significant damage; ultimately you've been defeated.
 
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As Shikamaru sees the man swing down his arm before his chest,Shikamaru instantly changes his attack.He quickly bites his thumb,and slams his hand on the ground.Shikamaru summons forth the BlueJay,Suijin.The fastest BlueJay which he uses to get out of range of the man's attack.

Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user bites his thumb, and begins to
slams both of his hands onto the ground to call forth
Suijin the younger brother of the boss of the Blue Jays.
Suijin is around half the size of Gamabunta, and can
travel up to 100 miles per hour. What makes him unique
is his incredible manipulation of the water affinity, from
his birth he was training to master the water element,
and after 5 years of training he has completely mastered
the water element, a goal most cannot accomplish.
Therefore he can use the water element up to A-rank
techniques without the use of hand seals, in order to
perform the water techniques. He also has thick blue,
white, and black feathers that makes him immune to
water techniques from B-rank and below. Whenever
Suijin performs a water technique it gets enhanced by
+10 additional damage points due to him using more
chakra in order to perform the water technique required.
- Can only be summoned once per battle
- Stays on the field for 5 turns
- Must have signed the Blue Jay contract
- Can only be taught by Toshiro

Now in long range,the man's kunai wouldn't reach Shikamaru,so he performs three handseals, Ram β†’ Horse β†’ Snake β†’ Tiger.He then release a blinding light from my body which extends to long range.

(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of
Lightning Pillar
Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the following handseals
Ram β†’ Horse β†’ Snake β†’ Tiger the user will then create
a blinding light that appears to emanate from the users
body and blind the target/s.

While the man is blinded,Shikamaru dashes forward until he is close enough.He then inserts chakra into his shadow.He then extends his shadow towards the man,as it reaches him,he manipulates the shadow to form needles which impales the man.

(Kage Nui) - Shadow Sewing
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20(+5 if used with
exploding tags)
Damage Points: 40(+10 if used with exploding tags)
Description: Shadow needles that can move the
opponent or impale them and can be used with
exploding tags.
 

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Impressive.. Though a Blue Jay doesn't quite fit your persona.

Aoba after seeing you summon a Blue Jay escaping his radius notices that you've acquired a long range advantage. Noticeably after his keen observation, Aoba once again notices you, in which he sees you performing hand seals taking to the defensive as in believe a ranged assault would come his way Aoba points his hands in the 12 o'clock direction, while kneading Raiton chakra. This causes a Raiton-based wall to appear in front of Aoba, blocking your, and his Line of Sight.

( Raiton no Heki ) – Lightning Release Wall
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user manipulates their chakra and then releases it in front of them whilst holding their hands out and they generate a wall of lightning energy that can defend against certain techniques. The user can use this defence to shock enemy targets who attempt close range combat and deliver a small electrical shock that can temporarily reduce their physical capabilities.

Aoba crouching down behind his protective Raiton-based wall, turns his head upward without getting up, and notices a quick blinding light, in which vanishes as quickly as it appears. As this happens, Aoba looks to his right noticing you running toward him, and his Raiton-based wall, gaining distance (mid range) quickly. As Aoba sees this he conceals himself back around his Raiton-based wall performing the hand seals Rat β†’ Dog β†’ Tiger, while again peaking to his right, but this time pointing his left hand in your direction firing a small fireball, in which erupts quickly taking your footing, and completely capturing you within it's radius.

(Katon: Zukokku) - Fire Release: Intelligent Hard Work
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user after performing the required hand seals Rat β†’ Dog β†’ Tiger fires a small fireball that erupts into a giant fire-storm after making contact with a surface, causing widespread destruction to the area. Since the flames travel along the ground, and cover such a wide area this is a difficult technique to evade. When combined with Wind Release: Pressure Damage, this technique is amplified to the point of being able to evaporate a large amount of water in an instant.

Shikamaru Nara.. A name to remember..


*Aoba suspects a long ranged assault, takes to the defensive by concentrating Raiton chakra, making a Raiton-based wall in his 12 o'clock direction (North) protecting him from the Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar.

*Once the blinding light fades, Aoba looks to the left, sees you running toward him, then performs hand seals while concentrating Katon chakra performing Katon: Zukokku taking away your footing, and capturing you within the blast radius.
 
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As Shikamaru gets closer to the man,he sees a wall of Raiton which conceals his presence and acts as a minor defence.Shikamaru then concentrates his Fuuton chakra in his mouth and releases it in the shape of a whirlwind towards the wall of Raiton,cancelling it out.The Fuuton continues on as a minor D rank.This gives Shikamaru a chance to counter attack and staggering you,thus not giving you a chance to perform the handseals for the Katon jutsu.

(FΕ«ton: Shippuu Tama) - Wind Release: Twister Shot
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user releases a stream of wind infused
chakra from their mouth that takes on the shape of a
twister to attack the enemy.

While the opponent is still staggered by the D rank Fuuton.Shikamaru then throws a smoke bomb towards the man,blinding him for a short period of time.He then inserts chakra into his shadow and sends it towards the cloud of smoke.The shadow then traps the opponent in a suit of smoke,compressing it and crushing him due to the high pressure.

(Kage Enmaku) - Shadow Smoke Screen
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: You first throw a
smoke bomb at the opponent and then your shadow
covers the smoke compressing it and trapping the
opponent in a body suit shadow with the high pressure
smoke crushing them form with in.
 

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Aoba feeling debris flying toward his direction figures you must have conjured up a wind based technique, in which he takes into account that wind is the natural insulator of lightning. Acknowledging this fact, Aoba in the middle of weaving the three hand seals Rat β†’ Dog β†’ Tiger to perform Katon: Zukokku, stomps his left foot into the ground forming an underground tunnel. Once the underground tunnel is formed, Aoba side steps to the right (keeping his right foot directly an inch away from the tunnel) to not only dodge the gust of wind, but take advantage of it releasing a small fire ball out of his right hand taking away your footing, and capturing you in a fiery demise (increase damage due to your Wind based technique).

(Katon: Zukokku) - Fire Release: Intelligent Hard Work
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user after performing the required hand seals Rat β†’ Dog β†’ Tiger fires a small fireball that erupts into a giant fire-storm after making contact with a surface, causing widespread destruction to the area. Since the flames travel along the ground, and cover such a wide area this is a difficult technique to evade. When combined with Wind Release: Pressure Damage, this technique is amplified to the point of being able to evaporate a large amount of water in an instant.
And to reassure my succession..

Aoba simultaneously after using Katon: Zukokku releases Katon chakra throughout his mouth into the tunnel causing the underground tunnel to transport lava from the entrance (my positioning; beneath me), to it's exit (your positioning; beneath you). You being distracted, your viewpoints being blocked (by the engulfing of the blast), and caught within the blast radius of Katon: Zukokku, you cannot perceive the incoming technique. Once the lava is right beneath the area in which you were blasted, Aoba forms the Tiger hand seal, causing a long ranged (vertical) eruption; successfully killing you.

(Katon: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Fire Release: Exploding Flame Crater
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user first stomps on the ground, making an underground tunnel form between themselves and the opponent. They then breathe out fire into the tunnel, causing the fire to turn into lava as it travels. With a single hand seal, the lava will erupt from the ground underneath the opponent, engulfing them in lava.

Full Coverage..


*Aoba finishes his hand seals to perform Katon: Zukokku, simultaneously stomping his left foot into the ground forming an underground tunnel in between the two of you in which you are oblivious.

*Aoba side steps to the right, keeping his right foot on the tunnels entrance, in which he uses his right hand to unleash a small fireball exploding on the surface catching you within the radius, causing you to lose your Line of Sight, and causing significant damage.

*Aoba then simultaneously unleashes Katon chakra from within his mouth into the tunnels entrance causing lava to transfer from the entrance to the exit, in which he performs the Tiger hand seal causing a long ranged eruption catching, and killing you.
 
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As Shikamaru dashes towards the man,he sees he is unaffected by the Fuuton.He stops and disperses Suijin,and bites his thumb,and then slamming his hand into ground.Shikamaru summons,Odun.He appears right infront of Shikamaru as the Katon jutsu gets used by the man.Odun blocks the Katon jutsu while Shikamaru gets behind him.

Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Odun: Summoning Jutsu Odun
Type: Summoning/Defensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will bite his thumb and slam his
hand on the ground. Summoning the mighty Odun. Odun
is a Blue Jay Warrior he is about the size of Orochimarus
Three head snake and is covered in a thick steel amor.
Odun is fast although being covered in a thick amor
being able to move a great speed that of (chuunin rank
ninja). Odun's thick amor makes a great defense from
attack being able to Defend against a Total of 3 B-Rank
techniques, 2 A-Rank or 1 S-Rank all within reason and
taking into account the size of the techniques. If Odun
recieves many damage points it goes away like a normal
summon. If Odun blocks against a certain attack
depending on The rank of the attack his total 4 turns can
be reduce upto 1.
-Note-
-Can only be summoned once per Battle
-Stays on the field for 4 Turns
-If he defends to much he goes away quickly
-Must have signed the Blue Jay Contract
-No Other Blue Jays can be in play while he is on

While Odun blocks the jutsu and the man's view,Shikamaru moves back(long range).He then channels and focuses his Raiton chakra and releases it from his body.Thus,Shikamaru creates an identical copy of him made from lightning chakra.Due to Odun's huge size,the man wouldnt be able to see any of this.

(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release:
Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself
infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit
he will return to its previous state of pure lighting
chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor
is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well
as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B
rank.

Shikamaru and the clone then dashes forward.Shikamaru then hides behind Odun as the clone moves towards the man with great speed.The clone then emits a spear of Raiton from his mouth,splits it in two and launches it towards the man.

(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from
their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike
multiple enemies.
Gather a lot of raiton chakra in your mouth, then release
a spear of lighting from your mouth, the spear can split
off and attack multiple targets.
 
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