(Rewrite version of Takara's Life...Hope you like my story!!)
Sitting in a dark corner of my room, I'am all alone in this old house that wasn't even mine. In fact, I was locked up here by the villagers of the Hidden Sound because my singing. If anyone hears my song, it would harm the person, mentally. They said I was a monster, born to destroy their village. I never knew my parents and I was alone as an orphan at first. I was in a good relationship with the villagers but when I sang them a song, all of those who listened were hurt in the ear. Soon, they locked me up in this old house, never to get out when I was 8 years old. They provided me of their left-overs and I barely ate for one week. Now, 7 years have passed and I'm already 15, still they didn't set me free. They didn't show me the outside world for a long time that I grew anger and hatred towards everyone outside of this old house. I hate them. I swear that I'll take revenge of what they did to me! I'll make them pay!!
My body was slowly weakening after a few days of no food or left-overs and my vision is getting blurrier every minute. Am I gonna die now? Without taking my revenge for what the villagers had done to me? It isn't fair that I got to be the one who suffers. I never done anything wrong!
As I stagger in hunger to the ground, a blast suddenly bursted the door of my room and smokes began to spread. There wasn't anytime to be startled or surprised, since I'm gonna die anyway.
A guy's figure suddenly went through the smoke and cried out desprately "I'm gonna save you!!"
Save me? Why? Isn't it better if I die, 'cause I don't care anymore. I don't care about the villagers nor about myself. Just let me die in peace!!
I gave a last look at the guy and gradually closed my eyes, accepting the darkness to engulf me.
Light.
It's very bright.
I opened my eyes to see the ceiling of a room. I sat up, looked around and finally realized that I wasn't in the old house anymore. I was in a hospital, with a thing stuck in my arm. Why am I still alive? I should be dead, right? Did that guy saved me?
Suddenly, there was a noise from behind the curtains in front of me.
"Hey, Sensei!! Can I see her now??" That energetic voice. It was the guy's voice who saved me back at the old house.
"Sure. Go ahead." said another man, his voice was calm and stern.
The curtain opened and there were two person standing in front of the bed. A spiky blond guy with an vigorious visage, who seemed to be at the same age as me, and a gray haired man with a mask across his mouth.
I flinched. I was scared and angry. I never have encountered anyone for 7 years and I hated anyone who was outside of that damn house.
"Hey!! You're awake already!!"the spiky blond guy hollered at me with a big grin.
The man in a mask punched him on the head and it made me startle. " Quiet down, Naruto. We're in a hospital, for pete's sake!" he said lowly, annoyed.
So, his name is Naruto. The one who saved me. The one who spared my life that I didn't care anymore. But why? He's a citizen from the Hidden Leaf Village, right? Judging from his forehead protector. Aren't the two village againts each other? Why??
I glared at them, fuming with anger.
Naruto noticed and he went beside the bed, his face became serious.
I unconsciously protected myself with two fists raised up. I was scared. I was very scared. I don't want to get hurt anymore. I nervously closed my eyes, getting ready for whatever comes to me.
Then, I felt my fist getting warmer. I blinked and swiftly glance at Naruto who was already in front of me, holding both my fists. " Don't worry." he said calmly with a smile. "Everything's going to be alright. You won't get lonely anymore. I promise you that!"
For the first time, after long years of loneliness, I felt the warmth of being accepted and tears began to fall on my face. At last, someone to fill out the missing pieces of my life that wasn't suppose to be here .
But, then, because of that, I completely forgot that there will surely be someone who will bring down this happiness.
Someone who will steal my song.
Sitting in a dark corner of my room, I'am all alone in this old house that wasn't even mine. In fact, I was locked up here by the villagers of the Hidden Sound because my singing. If anyone hears my song, it would harm the person, mentally. They said I was a monster, born to destroy their village. I never knew my parents and I was alone as an orphan at first. I was in a good relationship with the villagers but when I sang them a song, all of those who listened were hurt in the ear. Soon, they locked me up in this old house, never to get out when I was 8 years old. They provided me of their left-overs and I barely ate for one week. Now, 7 years have passed and I'm already 15, still they didn't set me free. They didn't show me the outside world for a long time that I grew anger and hatred towards everyone outside of this old house. I hate them. I swear that I'll take revenge of what they did to me! I'll make them pay!!
My body was slowly weakening after a few days of no food or left-overs and my vision is getting blurrier every minute. Am I gonna die now? Without taking my revenge for what the villagers had done to me? It isn't fair that I got to be the one who suffers. I never done anything wrong!
As I stagger in hunger to the ground, a blast suddenly bursted the door of my room and smokes began to spread. There wasn't anytime to be startled or surprised, since I'm gonna die anyway.
A guy's figure suddenly went through the smoke and cried out desprately "I'm gonna save you!!"
Save me? Why? Isn't it better if I die, 'cause I don't care anymore. I don't care about the villagers nor about myself. Just let me die in peace!!
I gave a last look at the guy and gradually closed my eyes, accepting the darkness to engulf me.
Light.
It's very bright.
I opened my eyes to see the ceiling of a room. I sat up, looked around and finally realized that I wasn't in the old house anymore. I was in a hospital, with a thing stuck in my arm. Why am I still alive? I should be dead, right? Did that guy saved me?
Suddenly, there was a noise from behind the curtains in front of me.
"Hey, Sensei!! Can I see her now??" That energetic voice. It was the guy's voice who saved me back at the old house.
"Sure. Go ahead." said another man, his voice was calm and stern.
The curtain opened and there were two person standing in front of the bed. A spiky blond guy with an vigorious visage, who seemed to be at the same age as me, and a gray haired man with a mask across his mouth.
I flinched. I was scared and angry. I never have encountered anyone for 7 years and I hated anyone who was outside of that damn house.
"Hey!! You're awake already!!"the spiky blond guy hollered at me with a big grin.
The man in a mask punched him on the head and it made me startle. " Quiet down, Naruto. We're in a hospital, for pete's sake!" he said lowly, annoyed.
So, his name is Naruto. The one who saved me. The one who spared my life that I didn't care anymore. But why? He's a citizen from the Hidden Leaf Village, right? Judging from his forehead protector. Aren't the two village againts each other? Why??
I glared at them, fuming with anger.
Naruto noticed and he went beside the bed, his face became serious.
I unconsciously protected myself with two fists raised up. I was scared. I was very scared. I don't want to get hurt anymore. I nervously closed my eyes, getting ready for whatever comes to me.
Then, I felt my fist getting warmer. I blinked and swiftly glance at Naruto who was already in front of me, holding both my fists. " Don't worry." he said calmly with a smile. "Everything's going to be alright. You won't get lonely anymore. I promise you that!"
For the first time, after long years of loneliness, I felt the warmth of being accepted and tears began to fall on my face. At last, someone to fill out the missing pieces of my life that wasn't suppose to be here .
But, then, because of that, I completely forgot that there will surely be someone who will bring down this happiness.
Someone who will steal my song.
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