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Okay, this is a flashback battle that occurred before the start of my original story (6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles)! In case, you haven’t read it yet, please do so :p This chapter starts where the “spoiler tag” in Chapter 3 was placed. Please go easy on me as this is my first real battle chapter.

SPECIAL BATTLE CHAPTER

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Naruto: Sasuke…

Naruto closed his wet eyes…

*flashback continues*

Naruto and Sasuke were standing side-by-side in front of Madara. Madara’s purple cape was on the ground along with Sasuke’s sword but seemed quite in controlled of the battle. Naruto and Sasuke were both panting with Naruto’s eyes being in Sage Mode and Sasuke activated his 3-tomoe Sharingan.

Naruto: Sasuke, we must do something. We will not finish him like that. I already used one Rasenshuriken in vain.

Sasuke: I know...

Madara: You are two fools. I really thought that being an Uchiha; you will understand their pain and fight their enemies, Sasuke. Still, you betrayed the clan and joined back with that brat.

Sasuke: Just shut up.

Sasuke launched a frontal attack on Madara and thrown one of his shuriken and attacked with his Chidori Spear. His Chidori Spear pierced an intangible Madara as the shuriken was going to hit him again.

Madara: You should wake up, Sasuke. You really thought that a shuriken will take me down.

As he was talking, he kicked the shuriken as Sasuke smirked. Then the Chidori Spear suddenly joined with the Lightning in his shuriken and formed a Lightning Blade.

Sasuke: Gotcha.

The blade was going to slash Madara in that split second. Madara blocked it with his arm, slashing it a bit before his body re-became intangible and the Lightning Blade vanished.

Madara: You were a split second too late.

Suddenly, Naruto from the sky jumped on Madara with 2 Giant Rasengan in hand but again, Madara dodged it with his Space-time jutsu. Naruto made a giant hole in the ground as he retreated again quickly.

The three began thinking and analyzing.


Madara: At this rate, I will have to use Rinnegan and Sharingan powers fully, perhaps even that power…

Naruto: Damn it, we might be close to get him but Sasuke and I am both using too much chakra in vain for that. Besides, he’s still on the defensive…

Sasuke: That bastard, he’s waiting for something but whatever the case, we cannot continue fighting like that. We thought that successive attacks will finally pay off but he seems to be more and more efficient in dodging. One of us will need to attack from long range as the other attacks him close-range. This way, we can get him but long range attacks will need to be very powerful. In that case…

With his analysis, Sasuke’s eyes went to EMS as he retreated steps behind! His Susanoo began forming…

Madara: Uh, I won’t let you! Banshō Ten'in!

Madara tries to pull Sasuke when a clone of Naruto emerges beneath the surface with a Rasengan.

Madara: Uh!

Madara dodges it and kicks the clone, unable to launch the Almighty Pull though. Naruto, then quickly charges onto Madara with Asuma’s chakra blade in his hand. They began fighting while Sasuke’s Susanoo was taking shape.

Sasuke: That’s it, Naruto! I’m almost done!

Naruto’s slash attacks were just forcing Madara to defend itself!

Madara: That brat! He’s getting quicker and quicker in his attacks. I’m unable to use Shinra Tensei now because if he dodges it, 5 seconds could be what he needs to get an opening.

Naruto infused Sage chakra to his blades, increasing its sharpness! The chakra slashes pass just through Madara thanks to his Space-Time jutsu.

Sasuke: That’s it, I’m ready.

With his Susanoo complete, Sasuke began aiming an arrow infused with Amaterasu onto Madara.

Naruto continues his assaults with Frog Kumite while Madara dodges while he can! In the successions of Naruto’s attacks, he activates his SO6P-Kyuubi Mode.

Naruto: Six Orbs Rasengan!

Madara: What? I won’t be able to dodge all of them.

Sasuke: This is the moment!

Sasuke shoots his arrow while Six Rasengan orbs – formed by Kyuubi’s chakra – are thrown onto Madara.

Madara: Shinra Tensei!

The Rasengan Orbs crushed onto the gravitational force of Madara’s technique but Sasuke’s arrow – enhanced due to Amaterasu flames – continued its course.

Madara: If only this was so easy!

Madara once again used his Space-Time jutsu and the arrow pierced an intangible Madara.

Naruto: Then, we’ll make it easy!

In an Orange flash, Naruto teleported behind Madara with a Menacing Ball in hand and hit him with it. A gigantic explosion occurred.

Naruto: *pant* *pant*

Sasuke: We got him right?


Out of the explosion’s smoke came out Madara with his Sharingan eye bleeding…

Naruto: What?

Madara: That was clever to force me use my Shinra Tensei and Space-Time Jutsu simultaneously, I admit. It gave you the opening you needed; however, I had another means of defense…Izanagi!

Sasuke, furious of the failure of the attacks, launched another arrow from his Susanoo while Naruto, impulsive as always, sent two Shadow Clones for a frontal assault on Madara.

Madara: Fools! Shinra Tensei!

Madara unleashed a thunderous Shinra Tensei to counteract the attacks that sent Naruto and Sasuke flying in a sickening thud. Naruto fell hard on his back while the damage to Sasuke was lessened due to his Susanoo. Madara began his slow march towards them…

Sasuke: Naruto, can you retry the Menacing Ball?

Naruto: *aah* I don’t think so! I have one Sage Mode clone in reserve but I’m reaching my limits with the Kyuubi mode. I can’t overuse it or that damn fox might takeover me.

Sasuke: I see…

Sasuke began thinking with Itachi words resonating in his minds…

Itachi: You need to stop Madara…Do the right thing…little brother…


Sasuke: With Naruto with that few chakra, we won’t really be able to combine our attacks. Even I’m in a bad shape, I might be able to use an MS technique only once more…

With that in mind and the view of a ghastly Madara approaching, Sasuke’s eyes came back to the normal Sharingan.

Sasuke: Naruto, back me up!

Sasuke got up and rushed towards Madara with a Chidori in hand.

Naruto quickly reverse-summoned his last Sage Shadow Clone while Madara awaits for Sasuke’s attack…

Madara: It pains me to end it like this! Giant Fireball Jutsu!

Madara launches a fire attack on Sasuke but he uses Substitution Jutsu…

Madara: Old tricks, huh? You’ll…

A strident sound suddenly abrupted Madara. Naruto had finished his Rasenshuriken ready to throw.

Madara: That won’t work…

Suddenly, the thunder roars and from the sky comes Sasuke riding on his hawk.

Sasuke: We’ll see who’s faster! Your space-time jutsu or Kirin! Sasuke was manipulating all the lightning he could up there.

Madara: You’ll need to him me first…Shinr…Oh, no...

Naruto just threw his Rasenshuriken onto Madara! Seeing the approaching menace, Madara just cannot launch his riposte onto Sasuke.

The Rasenshuriken just flew apart Madara’s body.

Madara: Oh no!

Madara just realized that he was just caught but that fact strike him a split second too late as Sasuke’s Kirin fell upon him. A gigantic explosion occurred…

Sasuke: We got him?

The smoke began squandering and the astonishing sight struck Naruto…
Madara was still standing, desperately trying to retain the lightning from striking him with his Shinra Tensei.

Sasuke: That ain’t possible.

Madara: I will succeed…

Naruto: I need to end this…

Naruto summoned five Shadow clones and began making to what seems like another Rasenshuriken…

Sasuke: What is he doing? What?

A smaller Rasenshuriken was in Naruto’s hand. It was also thinner and had the resemblance of six-faced shuriken chakra…

Naruto threw it onto Madara as Sage Mode ended. The shuriken suddenly was reflecting itself with each one expanding onto the other…

Naruto: Take that, Rasenhurricane!

The shuriken replicated and expanded so much that it took form of a Giant Rotating Hurricane that struck onto Madara…

Naruto: It’s over! For the sake of the peace Jiraiya-sensei wanted, for all the hatred that Nagato suffered, for all the suffering that you brought into this world, you’ll die…Madara’s Gravity Barrier finally gave up to Naruto’s ultimate attack; disintegrating his body.

Sasuke landed onto the ground! He saw some mere pieces of Madara’s cloak floating in the air; being the last remaining things of Madara! He then sees Naruto, smiling to him!

Naruto: *pant* finally, we did it, *pant* Sasuke!

Sasuke: Idiot! Yeah, it was too easy though!

Naruto: Yeah, I found it too. *pant*

Naruto fell onto the ground, extinguished by the hard-fought battle.

Sasuke: As always! You remain the most unpredictable ninja!

Naruto: I’m hungry!

Sasuke: Yeah, that was…

Suddenly, Sasuke felt something behind him. He turned around and saw…

Sasuke: What the f***?

Madara was resurrecting himself! His burnt cells were fusioning back together…

Naruto: What’s happening?

In front of them stood a revived Madara…

Sasuke: It’s the Resurrecting Technique that Orochimaru used…Edo Tensei!

Naruto: What? You mean he was already dead before we even fought him?

Sasuke was perplexed! He was seeing the cold glance of Madara whose mask was finally down. His Rinnegan seems more terrifying than ever…

Naruto stood up but fell back on one knee; due to his chakra overuse!

Madara: Summoning: Demonic Statue of the Outer Path

The Gedo Statue was summoned, piercing Madara’s souless body with its rod and releasing multiple dragon-like creatures which assaulted Naruto and Sasuke.

Both retreated a bit to dodge the attacks. Naruto fell back to his knees.

Naruto: Darn it! After all that, we were just fighting a dead person! Now that I recall it, he never tried to capture me in this battle. Sasuke, what can we do?

Sasuke: …

Naruto: I see! I guess I have to use the Kyuubi Mode once more regardless of the outcome. We need to…

Sasuke just knocked Naruto out cold with a shot behind his neck.

Sasuke: Naruto, thank you. Please continue my clan’s legacy…

Naruto fell to unconsciousness with his last view being Sasuke’s smile and his Susanoo forming back.

*darkness flows* and *light comes back later on…*

Naruto was coming back to his sense. He still felt dizzy and his first glance was for searching Sasuke. He finally found him, lying far on the ground. He rushed towards him…

Naruto: Sasuke…

Naruto reached to Sasuke’s lifeless body.

Naruto: Hey, stop being lazy, Sasuke! Wake up…

Sasuke had a bright smile on his face.

Naruto: No, Sasuke, you cannot die! I promised myself to make you return to Konoha. You cannot end up like this. SASSSUUKKEEE…

*flashback ends*


Naruto was standing near Sasuke’s grave, sobbing to his heart’s extent.

Naruto: You did the greatest sacrifice, Sasuke and you didn’t let me help you in it. Today, I don’t even know if I deserve to be Hokage. I was unable to save you but I promise to continue your clan’s legacy, Sasuke.

He took out a small tube from his pocket.

Naruto: That’s the least I can do for the heroic act you did for our village! The Uchiha Clan’s pride and honor…I will entrust it to you…Heisuke!

He put back the tube in his pocket that contained two Sharingan eyeballs and turned back towards Konoha.

~END OF CHAPTER~

Well, I know I’m surely going to get bashed as I did quite an awful job with this chapter :p It’s really not easy to write battles especially when the battle concerns the 3 most overpowered character of the Narutoverse. I tried to do maximum justice to the story and improvised a lot. Please CnC and if you liked it, reps and rate. Also excuse for the time it took to write it. xd
 
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Re: 6th Hokage Flashback Battle Chronicles ~ Special | Sasuke & Naruto v/s Madara |

Link to Chapter 1 -

Link to Chapter 2 -

Link to Chapter 3 -

Link To Chapter 4 -

Link To Chapter 5 -

Link To Chapter 6 -

Link To Chapter 7 -

Link To Chapter 8 -

Link To Chapter 9 - N/A

Chapter 9 will most likely be released on 1st December :D
 
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Re: 6th Hokage Flashback Battle Chronicles ~ Special | Sasuke & Naruto v/s Madara |

Awesome .. But I don't get it why Naruto took sasuke's Eyeballs :S for his son ? That'd be Ridiculous IMO.
 

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Nicely written imo. I really don't like writing battle chapters myself, so I know how hard it is. Nicely done hower!
 

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Re: 6th Hokage Flashback Battle Chronicles ~ Special | Sasuke & Naruto v/s Madara |

wait wut ? How did sasuke die...? what happened to Madara...? Madara didnt capture Naruto ?

I really expected something more glorious in Sasuke's death
 

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Thnakies

Awesome .. But I don't get it why Naruto took sasuke's Eyeballs :S for his son ? That'd be Ridiculous IMO.
Well, I was a bit sad when I realised that the Uchiha Clan and the Sharingan will surely go extincted with Sasuke's death. So, I got that idea all along for Naruto to take Sasuke's eyeballs in order to continue his clan's legacy. I know it's a bit ridiculous but it's a bit Sasuke's fault that he did'nt got himself a child. xd

Nicely written imo. I really don't like writing battle chapters myself, so I know how hard it is. Nicely done hower!
Thanks, mate! I appreciate you liked it! These battle chapters are reaaly f*****' hard to write especially if it's afull-on battle. xd

wait wut ? How did sasuke die...? what happened to Madara...? Madara didnt capture Naruto ?

I really expected something more glorious in Sasuke's death
Wait, where :p

Madara, well, he was dead and resurected (small twist by me)xd Had he been stopped by Sasuke...you'll need to keep followin' it :D

How did he die? Well, I initially was going to write how he died but I didn't finally [yeah, i know it's a bit my fault :p]I didn't write because:
1. It was gettin' way too long.
2. I can't continue a flashback that even Naruto didn't seee :p

Hehe Madara didn't capture him so this means that...try to guess xd

I know that it wasn't such a glorious death! it could have been a little if I did show how he died...Sorry to disappoint :p
 

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Hmm, what can I say?

1. Those Rasenhurricane was really creative. It was like Rain of Rasenshuriken evolving (you know, like charmander - evolve!:D) Really, really nice!

2. I always like Naruto-Sasuke teamwork and you did a really good job with that. Demn! I envy you now! This battle just pushed a really great pressure on me. *sigh* How will I do mine, now?:? The jutsus being used are all so powerful here. Its a really grand battle.

3. A really sad end for Sasuke.:( But, I believe that the Madara-Sasuke battle turned out to be worth more than Sasuke's death. Don't you dare revive Madara or you sure will hear from me.xd

I'd say a 9/10. Uhm, Naruto's son getting the sharingan? Ehehe, kinda out of league.:eek: But, its a FanFiction anyway, right? Anything can happen.:D Keep it up!:)
 

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Hmm, what can I say?

1. Those Rasenhurricane was really creative. It was like Rain of Rasenshuriken evolving (you know, like charmander - evolve!:D) Really, really nice!

2. I always like Naruto-Sasuke teamwork and you did a really good job with that. Demn! I envy you now! This battle just pushed a really great pressure on me. *sigh* How will I do mine, now?:? The jutsus being used are all so powerful here. Its a really grand battle.

3. A really sad end for Sasuke.:( But, I believe that the Madara-Sasuke battle turned out to be worth more than Sasuke's death. Don't you dare revive Madara or you sure will hear from me.xd

I'd say a 9/10. Uhm, Naruto's son getting the sharingan? Ehehe, kinda out of league.:eek: But, its a FanFiction anyway, right? Anything can happen.:D Keep it up!:)
1. Thankies for the Rasenhurricane. Yeah, it's abit like Charmender-evolve Fire...The idea in fact came from the name itself xd I was always like - WTF, Shippuden means "Hurricane Chronicles" and I never saw a Hurricane attack :|

2. You'll do good for your battle, don't panic and no need to envy me xd Frankly, I really don't know if I did well xd despite the comments

3. Yeah, it's abit of a sad end U_U Reviving Madara...well see later on but I don't think so xd

The Sharingan part...Well, I know that most of you didn't like this but I did this part just because I didn't wanted the last Uchiha member to die and their symbolic power to get extinct. There must be someone to wield the Sharingan (except Kakashi).
I know it's awkward for an Uzumaki to get a Sharingan but it's Sasuke, Kakashi who forced me to this - they could have produce a child.
 

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1. Thankies for the Rasenhurricane. Yeah, it's abit like Charmender-evolve Fire...The idea in fact came from the name itself xd I was always like - WTF, Shippuden means "Hurricane Chronicles" and I never saw a Hurricane attack :|

2. You'll do good for your battle, don't panic and no need to envy me xd Frankly, I really don't know if I did well xd despite the comments

3. Yeah, it's abit of a sad end U_U Reviving Madara...well see later on but I don't think so xd

The Sharingan part...Well, I know that most of you didn't like this but I did this part just because I didn't wanted the last Uchiha member to die and their symbolic power to get extinct. There must be someone to wield the Sharingan (except Kakashi).
I know it's awkward for an Uzumaki to get a Sharingan but it's Sasuke, Kakashi who forced me to this - they could have produce a child.

LOL! Right on that.xd But, oh, you could have given them one, you know. You gave Naruto and the rest, even so. So, why not Sasuke, too?:rolleyes: I get your sentiment about the sharingan legacy though, but, will it be inherited down to Hisuke's children if ever? Hahaha! That's going waaaaay to far, already, ha?xd

Don't worry about how people feel about that part though. Instead, take it as a challenge for you to deliver that idea in a way that would turn the boat around (if you get what I mean);):)
 

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LOL! Right on that.xd But, oh, you could have given them one, you know. You gave Naruto and the rest, even so. So, why not Sasuke, too?:rolleyes: I get your sentiment about the sharingan legacy though, but, will it be inherited down to Hisuke's children if ever? Hahaha! That's going waaaaay to far, already, ha?xd

Don't worry about how people feel about that part though. Instead, take it as a challenge for you to deliver that idea in a way that would turn the boat around (if you get what I mean);):)
LOL! Givin' them a child...Sasuke was so like "Destroy Konoha, Avenge itachi..." that I don't even think that crossed his mind xd For Kakashi to get a child, well, that's a bit late, isn't it? :p
For the legacy to pass to Heisuke's children, well that's the whole idea but I don't think I'll write till he bcomes father, LOL :D Also, he's a newborn, we should let him live his life first xd:eek:

Thankies, I hope I'll pull it off even if I didn't really planned anything great with that part :eek:
 

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Re: 6th Hokage Flashback Battle Chronicles ~ Special | Sasuke & Naruto v/s Madara |

Good chapter mate, a little ehm... funny how certain things turned out, but I liked the idea of it:p You have a great mind coming up with those jutsus and I think you did a hard job including Madara's transparent time/space jutsu as it seems like a bitch to fightxd
Chapter 4 next:p
 

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Good chapter mate, a little ehm... funny how certain things turned out, but I liked the idea of it:p You have a great mind coming up with those jutsus and I think you did a hard job including Madara's transparent time/space jutsu as it seems like a bitch to fightxd
Chapter 4 next:p
Thanks, funny :| if you say so :p Anyways, I needed to twist some things up for my own satisfaction xd

Jutsus, well, it came out quite naturally for some and quite hard for others. The Rasenhurricane was not so hard though as I thought of it since quite long....

O man, the Space-Time jutsu and Shinra Tensei is not only a bitch to fight off but really a bitch to write...believe me! Just as I thought of an attack, I realised that this will be too simply avorted by Madara's defensive jutsus and I needed to change it back. That just pissed me off in this chapter and was completely relieved when I finished it.

Yep, Chapter 4 next but I'll need to get time for that though :p
 

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Re: 6th Hokage Flashback Battle Chronicles ~ Special | Sasuke & Naruto v/s Madara |

Thanks, funny :| if you say so :p Anyways, I needed to twist some things up for my own satisfaction xd

Jutsus, well, it came out quite naturally for some and quite hard for others. The Rasenhurricane was not so hard though as I thought of it since quite long....

O man, the Space-Time jutsu and Shinra Tensei is not only a bitch to fight off but really a bitch to write...believe me! Just as I thought of an attack, I realised that this will be too simply avorted by Madara's defensive jutsus and I needed to change it back. That just pissed me off in this chapter and was completely relieved when I finished it.

Yep, Chapter 4 next but I'll need to get time for that though :p
Yeah, have been thinking how to deal with Madara myself in one of my upcoming chapters:p Maybe by disabling his "coward-jutsu":pxd

Looking forward to it then;)
 
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I wonder why I did not get a link for this nice special feature chapter.:cool: You do have a great imagination to begin with. Criss crossing Harry Potter and Naruto, and now, passing on the sharingan eye to a non-uchiha. I'm now wondering what will happen on the next chapter. Can't wait to see how they'd be dealing with the dementors.
 

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I wonder why I did not get a link for this nice special feature chapter.:cool: You do have a great imagination to begin with. Criss crossing Harry Potter and Naruto, and now, passing on the sharingan eye to a non-uchiha. I'm now wondering what will happen on the next chapter. Can't wait to see how they'd be dealing with the dementors.
Oops, sorry to haven't given you the link :p I did went to your profile but you were quite absent from NB; so I thought you were no more loggin' often. Won't make that again :p Glad you read and liked it! xd
Finally, someone who found it imaginative to the Sharingan to an non-Uchiha even if I agree with others that it's a little weird but I'll stop explainin' why I did this. :cool: Yep, dementors are next when I got the some time dealin' with them apart from school xd
 

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Re: 6th Hokage Flashback Battle Chronicles ~ Special | Sasuke & Naruto v/s Madara |

That was soo awesome mate
9/10
How do you come up with these Ideas!?!? I can barely think of an Idea for my FanFiction, I'm still thinking tho XD
 

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That was soo awesome mate
9/10
How do you come up with these Ideas!?!? I can barely think of an Idea for my FanFiction, I'm still thinking tho XD
Reading, movies, all sort of entertainment and getting inspired from others works mostly :p That's where inspiration mostly comes from...
Thankies...
YOu'll get it soon, I'm sure xd
 

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I thought your use of words was phenomenal and that the battle scenes were epic with the exception of Sasuke dying of course T_T (It was my only disappointment) You know how I feel about this character but besides that it was pretty much perfect! Sasuke for me was the reason I got into Naruto and if he does die indeed in the manga I will have felt that Kishi’s point in his epic story failed. My opinion of course but it is how I feel. Although, for choosing this route I’ll say that you presented it superbly and I congratulate you on it! Especially the part where Naruto would be continuing Sasuke’s legacy with his eyes implanted in the child of his best friend ;)
 

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Re: 6th Hokage Flashback Battle Chronicles ~ Special | Sasuke & Naruto v/s Madara |

I thought your use of words was phenomenal and that the battle scenes were epic with the exception of Sasuke dying of course T_T (It was my only disappointment) You know how I feel about this character but besides that it was pretty much perfect! Sasuke for me was the reason I got into Naruto and if he does die indeed in the manga I will have felt that Kishi’s point in his epic story failed. My opinion of course but it is how I feel. Although, for choosing this route I’ll say that you presented it superbly and I congratulate you on it! Especially the part where Naruto would be continuing Sasuke’s legacy with his eyes implanted in the child of his best friend ;)
Thanks. I know that I offended Sasuke's fans a bit with this chapter and I got some remarks especially from PoD about that already :p It's not easy to see your favorite character being wiped indeed. I'd like that Sasuke dies as for me. Don't worry I think that he'll remain alive though as he's Kishi's favorite but for me, the best philosophy that Kishi could give will be that Sasuke died because he indulged himself so much in darkness in search of power and revenge that the vengeance consumed him to death. The second alternative that I'd like Kishi to take with Sasuke will be to make change his ways of doing but remaining the same in attitude.
I'm glad that I didn't disappointed you yet. You're among the firsts who liked my twisted way of ending this chapter without finding it ridiculous or weird :p
 
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