6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 10

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I see. Did you finalize a name or are you still waiting for my opinion? -.-

So you'll be trying new things too with this sequel? Hmmm...interesting. And yeah, I'll do something for it.

O, it's the part where Hermione explains on the History of Triwizard Tournament. About 3 sentences or so are taken from Rowling's 4th HP Tome. It's just like Dumbledore spoke it towards the students of that time.

Ah, you mean Quirrell. Well, yeah, I'm not giving a very tender image to Krum but then again, Durmstrang people are reputed for being pretty stern. Anyways, let's see what'll spring up? xD

Well, thank you very much for all tips, all suggestions and all praises ^^

Yeah, In the end, I came up with 3 names and I think I have picked my favorite already;)

Yep, though I'm not sure how much of it will be shown as I think most of my changes are build up and structure based, not so much as changing the way of telling the story. I dunno:p

I see. Well I didn't really remember it, but that is perhaps because I've only watched the movies...

Yeah that's him!xd So Krum's behavior kind of reminded me of a mix between him and Snap's role in the first film/book. Whatever happens or if anything happens on this "part of the story", I bet you will make it phenomenal;)

Yeah, my pleasure, though I'm not sure how much of a decent tip I gavexd
 

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Chapter 11 released!
 

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This is truly amazing u should be a writer:)
 

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Only talk no jutsu:T_T: no action,no naruto:T_T:
But goblet of fire:crazy::overjoy: i hope i'll see a lot of action and ninja in next chapters:)

This^
Should have put some action in it
 
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