[Predictions] 693: The Final Fight Begins

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693: The Final Fight Begins

{Sasuke lights the flame of revolution!}
{How does Naruto plan to extinguish it?}

Sauske: End it here...
Sasuke: And how do you plan on accomplishing that?
[Naruto looks down]
Naruto: ...
Naruto: [Looking up] By killing you!
Sakura: [Shocked] N-Naruto...
Sasuke: I'll offer you one last chance...
Sasuke: Sit beside me in the new world...
Sasuke: Or die by my hand!
Naruto: You know my answer...
Sasuke: Then I'll have to kill you and take usurp that power of yours
Naruto: Just try!
Sasuke: Then let's end it
Hagoromo: Before you begin this skirmish...
Hagoromo: Allow me to allot you my remaining power in order for you both to be restored to your peak conditions
[Hagoromo raises his hands]
[The seals on his hands disappear]
[Naruto and Sasuke both glance at their preferred hands]
[The crescent and full moon(or sun)appear on their hands]
Hagoromo: The winner will determine whether I was right or wrong by choosing Ashura
Hagoromo: And the winner will decide how the world is governed
Hagoromo: Go!
[Naruto enters into his Rikudou Sennin mode, with 9 Gudoudama and 2 Gudoudama staves]
[Sasuke creates two Chidori Spears]
[Naruto and Sasuke clash for a few panels]
[Sasuke kicks Naruto away]
Sasuke: Burn away!
Enton: Kagutsuchi
[Flames begin to encompass Naruto]
Naruto: Gwah!
Kakashi/Sakura: Naruto!!!
[the flames grow larger]
Hagoromo: And the winner i-
Sasuke: Wait!
[A large Gudoudama shoots from the ground]
[It separates into nine separate small Gudoudama, revealing Naruto]
Naruto: It'll take a lot more than that to kill me!
[Naruto launches a Rasenshuriken at Sasuke]
[Sasuke creates a Perfect Susanoo]
Sasuke: Enough of this!
[Sasuke swings his Susanoo's sword at Naruto for 2-3 panels]
[The sword swings downward]
[Naruto holds up his staves to guard]
[The sword hits them and Naruto is propelled into the ground]
[Naruto flies into the sky]
Naruto: Heh! Ya know how you have more control over that Rinnegan after that fight with Kaguya...
Naruto: Well, I have more control over my new powers too!
[Naruto creates Ashura's Bijuu avatar]
[The Susanoo and the avatar fly into the sky and clash for a few panels]
[Eventually, the avatar hits the Susanoo with a Bijuudama]
[An explosion ensues]
[From the dust, a sword appears and pierces the avatar]
[Sasuke's Susanoo is seen with several cracks throughout it]
Sasuke: This is the difference between our power!
Naruto: No! This is the difference!
[The avatar disappears]
[Naruto flies upward creating 9 Bijuudama Rasenshuriken]
[Naruto launches them at the Susanoo]
Sasuke: !!!
[As they connect, a large explosion ensues]
[Sasuke is seen falling toward the ground]
Sasuke: (Not bad...)
[Sasuke summons his hawk]
[Sasuke flies toward Naruto]
[Naruto creates a kagebushin that launches a RasenShuriken at Sasuke]
[The hawk dodges it, and Sasuke is seen staring toward the ground]
[Sasuke looks up and creates a black Chidori]
[The Naruto without Gudoudama lunges at Sasuke]
[Sasuke jumps from the hawk, avoiding Naruto's attack, but sacrificing the hawk]
[Naruto launches a staff at Sasuke]
[Sasuke glares at the staff]
[Sasuke teleports himself in place of the staff]
[Sasuke pierces Naruto through the heart with his Chidori]
Sasuke: You can never surpass me!
Naruto: It's...not over yet]
[Naruto disappears]
[The other Naruto appears behind Sasuke with the Gudoudama rushing behind him]
[Sasuke remembers looking toward the ground when he was riding the hawk]
Sasuke: (Shit! He must've swapped the Gudoudama with the kagebushin when I wasn't looking!)
[Naruto kicks Sasuke, propelling him toward the ground]
Sasuke: (No! It can't end like this!)
[Sasuke's body nears the ground]
[Naruto appears, catching Sasuke with an enlarged Chakra hand]
Sasuke: Why...Would you save me?
Naruto: Tsk...I guess I still can't bear the thought of losing you...
[Sasuke gets up]
Sasuke: Face it...One of us has to die here
Sasuke: The paths we walk are just too different
Naruto: ...
Sasuke: Maybe in a different world...we both walked the same road
Sasuke: But in this world, our ideologies separate us...
Sasuke: And because of that, only one of us can live!
Naruto: Dammit!
[Sasuke lunges toward Naruto]
Sasuke: Now let's end the brothers' feud!
[The two clash for a while]
[Naruto kicks Sasuke away]
[Sasuke lands on his back]
[Naruto rushes toward Sasuke, staff in hand]
Naruto: [lachrymose] I'm sorry Sasuke!
[Naruto goes to stab Sasuke with his staff]
[He stops two inches away from his face]
Sasuke: [smirking] What's wrong, still can't go through with it?
Sasuke: Or is there another problem?
Naruto: (No...Not this!)
Hagoromo: (Is that...)
[A limbo clone is seen holding Naruto back]
Hagoromo: (To unlock Limbo in such a short interval of time...)
Hagoromo: (He's mastered the nuances of the Rinnegan at such an expedient rate...)
Naruto: Sasuke...You can
[The clone kicks Naruto away]
[Sasuke gets up]
Sasuke: You have your puny Kagebuushin...
Sasuke: And I have my Limbo!
[Sasuke creates 4 limbo clones]
Naruto: Four, eh...I'll just have to double that!
[Naruto creates eight Kagebuushin]
Sasuke: Okay, now that the warmup's over...
Sasuke: Let the real fight begin!
{The real fight begins!}
{Which ideology will prevail!?!?}
 

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Nice, one thing though, Hagaromo saying and the winner is in the beginning was really weird. Other than that, it's good. And of course I can tell that you aren't proposing Naruto kill Sasuke, just say that he will
 

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Nice, one thing though, Hagaromo saying and the winner is in the beginning was really weird. Other than that, it's good. And of course I can tell that you aren't proposing Naruto kill Sasuke, just say that he will
Thanks for your input. And yeah, I was really debating the and the winner is comment, but I was too lazy to remove it :p
 

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one more thing sasuke & naruto both can't get power up from hogoromo as in last chapter hogoromo said with half power result is same so no point of that.Also sasuke can't use limbo technique because his ability is not same as madara but he can swap things. Otherwise nice prediction.
 

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one more thing sasuke & naruto both can't get power up from hogoromo as in last chapter hogoromo said with half power result is same so no point of that.Also sasuke can't use limbo technique because his ability is not same as madara but he can swap things.
Otherwise nice prediction.
 

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i am sorry ...but the truth is

what was going on with the fight... it was like hogomoro supports,loves watching and even promoting their fight by giving them powers.it was like hogomoro is the ring master or judge and there will be a wwe match between naruto and sasuke.

[in my point of view a hopeful person having powers trying to bring piece from the start by entrusting upon its successors will never want to see war again at last after what has done ]

sasuke using limbo....damn that was madara's specialty and it is shown in the previous manga chapters that sasuke's rinnengan is different then madaras .and that is s/t jutsu. besides the general paths of rinnengan.

i dont want to be rude or something and i believe you can do better then this but seriously dude this one suckked . the fight tactics are allright. i will be waiting for your next one
 
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