[Predictions] 686 Prediction: The Blossom

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sakura: ugh...
she begins passing out.
obito: oh no. it looks like that acid she was hit with did more damage than i thought. at this rate...
sasuke: obito...can you fix her?
obito: as it is i have barely enough chakra left myself.
sakura: sasuke kun....its ok.
sasuke: ?
sakura: you have to....save naruto.
sasuke: why did you go so far to save me just then?
sakura: i dont know...my body was moving on its own. perhaps this is my penance for all of my mistakes.
sakura allows herself a small smile. sasukes mouth curls slightly.
obito: :>(
sasuke: what mistakes?
sakura: oh you know...im not innocent sasuke kun. we've hurt each other havent we?
sasuke: no it was...i hurt you! i...
he clenches his hands and places them on sakura's chest.
sasuke: i'm no medic but surely theres something-
sakura: no. just listen. you wanted to know...why naruto and i cared so much about you right?
sasuke: thats...
sakura: its because i sensed it from the beginning. you had darkness but also light. and i was...right. you became a hero. you saved the allied shinobi army. you werent all pain hate and rage and i wanted...to bring that kind of man back. and that determination became love.
sasuke: you guys helped me. i really didnt do that much, sakura.
sakura: neither did i. i didnt save neji after all. even if you believe that, i'm happy to die here and now, as i was able to protect my comrades at last. i'm not a kyuubi jinchuriki. im not a sharingan user. however i still helped my friends.
so put aside the past. become that hero, sasuke kun. for the sake of konoha and our world.

her hands fall. we see her dimming eyes in a close up.

*flashback*
6 year old sakura is sitting and crying.
bully: forehead!
bully 2: your such a weakling!
bully: go on, cry like the crybaby you are!
sakura runs away, headfirst into sasuke.
sasuke: huh?
sakura: mmmphm
sasuke: whats wrong?
sakura: mean girls...
sasuke: ok. leave it to me.
bully: oooh sasuke kwwoooon! isnt he the top in the academy?
sasuke: shut up. you made this pink haired girl cry. leave before i get mad.
they leave.
sakura: thank...
they hear a womans voice.
mikoto: sasuke-chan!
sasuke: well see ya. coming mom!
sakura...you?
sasuke had already left.
sakura looks up. it is a cherry blossom tree. slightly molting, but a rich kind of pink.
sakura: its pretty..but i wonder who that boy was.

present time
sakura thinking: it seems in the end...the tree was beautiful, wasnt it?
my classmates, tsunade shisou, kakashi sensei, ino-pig, naruto...this is goodbye.
but perhaps...ill do better the next time around. yes...
when a blossom blooms, it dances in the sky. thats what death is, right ino?

flashback:
10 year old ino: sakura you shouldnt get yourself so down in the dumps!
here.
she gives sakura a flower.
ino: its called a sakura. cherry blossom! suits you right? hehe.
they say that when the blossom blooms, it will dance in the sky. dont you think thats true sakura?
sakura: (blushing) yeah, ino chan...

present time:
sakura dies.
text: the pink flower of kunoichi falls!

sasuke is distressed and still clenching his hands tightly.
he slowly picks her body up with obitos help.
obito: exactly what do you plan to do now, sasuke?
sasuke briefly flashes to when he said he wouldnt let itachis life be for nothing.
sasuke: defeat kaguya in one final battle! i will NOT let sakura's final act of bravery be for nothing!

text: sasuke is heading to save naruto, next time!
 

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Meh, sasukes out of character....>.>

No offence but didn't like it much the flashback won't happen, and sasuke is highly out of character

It just seemed a little too fanfic for me
 
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