onepieceuc1
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Hello guys, hope you like it.
Scene starts with Naruto and co.
Kaguya: Uzumaki Naruto... How did you survive?
Naruto: As always, i used my favorite jutsu!
Kaguya: Clones...
BZ: Mother, he's just a kid. He won't beat us with clones, he just want to save time.
Naruto: (He is right, i need Sasuke) Kagebunshin!!! (Kurama, can you help me?)
Kurama: Take it!
Wide panel shows an immense army of clones, hiding the sky. Naruto dashs on her direction.
Kakashi: Naruto... How did you do that?!
Naruto: Let's go!
Obito's side.
Sasuke lets Sakura fall in Obito's arms.
Sasuke: Keep her safe, i don't want any numbskul.
Obito: She saved you, without her i wouldn't be able to save you!
Sasuke: From the man who starts the war, who killed my family without any culpability, i think that the idea of friend or teamate is just disgusting.
Obito: ...
Sasuke: Let's go.
Obito: Sorry it's all we can do, Sasuke, i need your chakra to use my Kamui...
Sasuke touches his shoulder, giving him the moon mark.
Obito: What is this?! This is incredible!!!
Sasuke: The power of the Rikudo.
Obito takes Sakura while Sasuke put a hand on him.
Obito: We should help Naruto quickly!
Sasuke: Yeah, this stupid boy will die without me!
Obito: (Kakashi, Naruto, hold on!)
Obito uses Kamui and leaves the dimension.
Naruto's side, almost all clones are destroyed.
Naruto: Haa...Haa, what can i do?
Kaguya:...
She raises her index in his direction, a little fire ball is created.
Naruto:?!!
Kakashi: This is bad, i must help him! Even if i use a lot of my chakra.
Suddenly, the fire ball grows up very quickly, becoming huge. She throws her jutsu on him...
Kakashi: Suiton-Water position wall!
Five Kakashi's clones stand in front of Naruto and block the fire ball, creating at the same time a fog.
Panel shows Kaguya, using her byakugan to see through the fog. Just after, the real Kakashi is shown behind, spliting in half the fog.
Kakashi: This my chance! Raikiri!
Panel shows Kaguya, looking, seriously, at Naruto.
BZ: Mother!
BZ covers Kakashi's hand to protect her mother (she doesn't need his help...). Kakashi, feeling that BZ is draining his energy, uses his kunai to save himself.
Kakashi
My energy...) (But, how powerful is she? She didn't care about me at all!)
Before he falls, Naruto creates a platform for him with his orbs
Sasuke's team arrives.
Sasuke: Naruto!
Naruto: Everyone, you're here. Obito, you keep your promise!
Obito: Yeah, i di... (Starts coughing)
Naruto: Obito! (Looks at Sakura) Sakura!
Sasuke: Don't worry, she just loses conciousness. But him...
Naruto uses his sun mark on Sakura.
Sakura: Thank you, Naruto!
BZ: Obito, you were a really borring kid... I saved you, and you escaped your fate which was the death. And finally, the only thing you did was to betray me, that is your sentence, you will die, as a shit as you has always been.
Kakashi: Shut up! The only shit here is me, i'm the man who couldn't keep his promises and save his friends... Obito is a hero, and whatever he did, whatever atrocity, and whatever people can say, i really think he is still a awesome hero!
Obito: Hey, i'm not dead yet!!!
Sasuke: We have no time for those feelings, Naruto, come with me.
Naruto: (Kakashi sensei...)
Sakura: I'm coming with you!
Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura leave the place and attack Kaguya.
Kakashi: We should go with them.
Obito: Wait, i've something to say, it's important.
Kakashi: ??!
Obito: The ninjas of the mist, the fact that Minato sensei was sent far of you that day, it was Madara's plan.
Kakashi: ?!!
Obito: Rin was controlled by Madara, a powerful seal, used by him on her heart. She sacrificed herself...
Kakashi ...using my chidori...
Obito: It wasn't your fault, what i wanted to say was that: i forgive you! (Smiles to him) You keep this weight on your heart for a long time, i want to liberate you.
Kakashi: Yeah, thank you, Obito, you liberate my heart.
White chakra emerges from Kakashi.
Kakashi: (Pure chakra, at his highest level, that's incredible! Dad, now, i understand why people said Tsunade, Jiraya and Orochimaru were nothing in front of you!)
Obito looks at him and smiles, he activates his MS and his Susano which covers him. This Susano is green, have an human size (as a knight armor.) and shows some space distortions.
Obito: I think i can last a little more, now we can go help your teamates!
Sorry i made this in three times. Hope you enjoyed this, i change some Sasuke's words.
Scene starts with Naruto and co.
Kaguya: Uzumaki Naruto... How did you survive?
Naruto: As always, i used my favorite jutsu!
Kaguya: Clones...
BZ: Mother, he's just a kid. He won't beat us with clones, he just want to save time.
Naruto: (He is right, i need Sasuke) Kagebunshin!!! (Kurama, can you help me?)
Kurama: Take it!
Wide panel shows an immense army of clones, hiding the sky. Naruto dashs on her direction.
Kakashi: Naruto... How did you do that?!
Naruto: Let's go!
Obito's side.
Sasuke lets Sakura fall in Obito's arms.
Sasuke: Keep her safe, i don't want any numbskul.
Obito: She saved you, without her i wouldn't be able to save you!
Sasuke: From the man who starts the war, who killed my family without any culpability, i think that the idea of friend or teamate is just disgusting.
Obito: ...
Sasuke: Let's go.
Obito: Sorry it's all we can do, Sasuke, i need your chakra to use my Kamui...
Sasuke touches his shoulder, giving him the moon mark.
Obito: What is this?! This is incredible!!!
Sasuke: The power of the Rikudo.
Obito takes Sakura while Sasuke put a hand on him.
Obito: We should help Naruto quickly!
Sasuke: Yeah, this stupid boy will die without me!
Obito: (Kakashi, Naruto, hold on!)
Obito uses Kamui and leaves the dimension.
Naruto's side, almost all clones are destroyed.
Naruto: Haa...Haa, what can i do?
Kaguya:...
She raises her index in his direction, a little fire ball is created.
Naruto:?!!
Kakashi: This is bad, i must help him! Even if i use a lot of my chakra.
Suddenly, the fire ball grows up very quickly, becoming huge. She throws her jutsu on him...
Kakashi: Suiton-Water position wall!
Five Kakashi's clones stand in front of Naruto and block the fire ball, creating at the same time a fog.
Panel shows Kaguya, using her byakugan to see through the fog. Just after, the real Kakashi is shown behind, spliting in half the fog.
Kakashi: This my chance! Raikiri!
Panel shows Kaguya, looking, seriously, at Naruto.
BZ: Mother!
BZ covers Kakashi's hand to protect her mother (she doesn't need his help...). Kakashi, feeling that BZ is draining his energy, uses his kunai to save himself.
Kakashi
My energy...) (But, how powerful is she? She didn't care about me at all!)Before he falls, Naruto creates a platform for him with his orbs
Sasuke's team arrives.
Sasuke: Naruto!
Naruto: Everyone, you're here. Obito, you keep your promise!
Obito: Yeah, i di... (Starts coughing)
Naruto: Obito! (Looks at Sakura) Sakura!
Sasuke: Don't worry, she just loses conciousness. But him...
Naruto uses his sun mark on Sakura.
Sakura: Thank you, Naruto!
BZ: Obito, you were a really borring kid... I saved you, and you escaped your fate which was the death. And finally, the only thing you did was to betray me, that is your sentence, you will die, as a shit as you has always been.
Kakashi: Shut up! The only shit here is me, i'm the man who couldn't keep his promises and save his friends... Obito is a hero, and whatever he did, whatever atrocity, and whatever people can say, i really think he is still a awesome hero!
Obito: Hey, i'm not dead yet!!!
Sasuke: We have no time for those feelings, Naruto, come with me.
Naruto: (Kakashi sensei...)
Sakura: I'm coming with you!
Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura leave the place and attack Kaguya.
Kakashi: We should go with them.
Obito: Wait, i've something to say, it's important.
Kakashi: ??!
Obito: The ninjas of the mist, the fact that Minato sensei was sent far of you that day, it was Madara's plan.
Kakashi: ?!!
Obito: Rin was controlled by Madara, a powerful seal, used by him on her heart. She sacrificed herself...
Kakashi ...using my chidori...
Obito: It wasn't your fault, what i wanted to say was that: i forgive you! (Smiles to him) You keep this weight on your heart for a long time, i want to liberate you.
Kakashi: Yeah, thank you, Obito, you liberate my heart.
White chakra emerges from Kakashi.
Kakashi: (Pure chakra, at his highest level, that's incredible! Dad, now, i understand why people said Tsunade, Jiraya and Orochimaru were nothing in front of you!)
Obito looks at him and smiles, he activates his MS and his Susano which covers him. This Susano is green, have an human size (as a knight armor.) and shows some space distortions.
Obito: I think i can last a little more, now we can go help your teamates!
Sorry i made this in three times. Hope you enjoyed this, i change some Sasuke's words.
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