[Predictions] 679 : " Return "

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the scene start in konoha

minato sit up and grab the kunai with his mouth

minato * thinking * : " this is bad i can feel it all over the place ...probably this is madaras jutsu but why didnt it work on me ... i need to head to naruto but first ......" he use hiraishin to where tobirama is standing next hashirama

mianto : "lord first and second , so edo is not effected hashi : " u made it here fourth .... we were about to go to u .....where is sarutobi ?? "

tobi : " i can feel his chakra in the battle field but he is heading to us anyway ..it wont be necessary to go to h ......."

both minato and tobirama look toward tenten location

tobi : "this is ....what ahuge chakara !!! "

the scene change to where tenten is , afew meters away from her a shadow stands

?????? : " at last ...... "

the shadow hovers and fly toward the rumble where madara and the rest are

the scene change to madara heavily coughing blood and growling

sauske *thinking * : " this is my chance "

he appear in front of madara trying to slash him put his shadow block his sword so he jump back , as two shadows dash to the right and the left of BZ , the first of them tear his hand and the other tears his legs with his staff

BZ turns into some kind of liquid and stick to madara then pierce through his body penetrating his skin

BZ *thinking* : "shit , what just happened , obitos hand and legs were torn off out of no where , is this limbo ....i must be careful "

madara shiver as he move his hand slowly to grab BZ , he looks in sever pain as naruto prepare arasenshuriken

naruto : " sasuke we can end this now ...lets go " he dash toward madara as sasuke jump high and with his perfect susano swing his sword trying to hit madara

the shadow reach madara before they do smashing into the ground sending naruto and sasuke away and making a terrible shock wave as the dust rise up and slowly come down

naruto : "the hell was that ... sasuke ...was that madara ..i can feel another person chakra ?? "

sasuke : " no ..it was the other one ....but he was even able to counter even my susano !!! "

they both look at the dust as it slowly calms down revealing the scene behind it
madara standing infront of kaguya as she put her hand on black zetsu sucking it slowly
her face is wrinkled and turning to youth again while madara gaze at her in pain
her hair is covering her face and eyes and only her mouth , nose and the right horn are shown nothing else

madara : " you ........ how did u .... !!! "

kaguya remains silent looking toward sasuke and naruto while she drains madara chakra into her body
her left horn is regenerating as well as her body and face

suddenly madara growls and stab the ground with his staff as the four shadows attacking her , she raise two fingers forming seal while her byakugan in her right eye is revealed , a sever chakra form around her body then she spread her palm to them shooting chakra toward the shadows
the four shadows are sent back flying as madara pull him self back from zetsu grasp tearing parts of his body along with his left shoulder

madara * coughing blood and look weak * : " this cant be , u were sealed away ...that what the scriptures say !!! "

in a whim she reach him snatching his left eye
madara jump back where naruto and sasuke are standing looking at his eye in her hands

slowly she raise the eye to the left eye socket and place it then uncover her face
the five of them looks surprised with her evil smirk on her face with the rinnegan on her left eye socket

kaguya *pointing her nail toward madara* : " you ...a despicable brat such as you holds the great power of kaguya ootsutsuki " she smirks " far from my imagination was that though to be , yet the ones who brought such fate were nothing but my own blood and flesh sealing me in a filthy gourd of his .... my dear sons " she grin in a horrible scene making them step back

kaguya : " dont be worried humans of the future from such a fate , i see u already fulfilled my plan " she smiles looking to the god tree " and now for the rest of my chakra u stole ...." she make the seals and point her palm to madara

madara lose control over his body as the god tree start to bloom from his body sending its branches all over the place

THE END


(sorry for any misspellings or grammar , hope u like it )
 

Hata Hideaki

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not bad man, i liked how u made kaguya her appearance. but dont u think its odd, if she was sealed in the gourd then im pretty sure whenever 8 tails is released she could have been released too right..? do u get my point?
 
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