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Scene starts with Madara, his eyes wide open.
Sasuke:I... I can't believe it, is this the infinite tsukoyumi? He really used the moon?
Naruto/Sakura/Kakashi:?!!
Naruto:Sasuke, we must be faster, we need to stop him before the genjutsu begin!
Sasuke:Yeah, I know...
Both of them are worried, but they start to jump over the chibaku tensei.
Madara:I must concentrate my chackra, just a little more, about 8 seconds i think so those will never reach in time. This is the end for those brats. Hun hun!
Scene changes to BZ, looking at the sky.
BZ:Finally, i couldn't do nothing for Madara-sama and now... Will I die?? With my enemies?!
Madara(speaks in BZ's mind):Go in the kamui, you can escape my jutsu.
BZ:Kamui!!!
BZ starts to disappear in a spiral but someone run to him and touch his shoulder.
Kakashi: Obito!!!
BZ:No! What did you do?
Kakashi:Sakura! Take care of Naruto and Sasuke!
Sakura:Y...Yes!!
Scene changes to Naruto and co.
Naruto:We will never do that in time, Sasuke take my hand, i will throw you on him, and then stop his genjutsu!
Sasuke:Ok.
Naruto do what he said. Sasuke is closed to Madara, he was about to slash him but...
Madara:Too late, INFINITE TSUKOYUMI!!!
The world changes suddenly, Naruto is in front of Madara, they are in white room.
Naruto:Where am i? Madara?
Madara:You lost. Now peace begin.
Naruto:I will never be defeat by someone like you! Your world is artificial, false, nothing is real. I must save everyone, and i can swear it, one day, everyone will understand each other, so, please, trust me and stop this.
Madara:As a kid, your words are nothing. I'm bored to see you, so I prepared something special for you, the Uchiha-boy and the pink-haired girl. You know, everyone is in a world of dreams now, but for you, I created a true world of nightmares.
The world changes again, Naruto is in his kitchen, Kushina and Minato are here.
Naruto:I feel strange... As i forgot something.
Naruto see his parents, smiling.
Naruto
ad, Mom you are here!!!
One second, naruto's parents took a demonic face and an abnormal smile.
Naruto:??!
The world changes again, as Kakashi in Itachi's tsukoyumi, he is unable to move. He is in his bedroom, his parents are in front of him, in the dark.
Narutoad, Mom, what happens to me?
Step by step they emerge of the shadow, the same terrifying face that Naruto saw just before, Naruto looks at their hand and see a kunai, he looks behind his parents, it is writed a message on the wall : For eternity.
Kushina/Minato: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!
They start to kill Naruto, they torture, and empale him. The same scene can be seen for Sasuke and Sakura, killing, torturing, empaling by their parents, their friends...
Sasuke/Naruto/Sakura:GWAAARRRGHHH!!!
Scene returns to Madara, in his white room.
Madara:HATAKE KAKASHI, where are you?
Scene changes to the Kamui.
BZ:Why did you come with me?
Kakashi:Give me back Obito's body.
BZ:Without your sharingan, i've a doubt, can you really beat me and force me to leave Obito's body?
Option 1:
Flashback, Kakashi, 5 years old.
Kakashi: Dad, learn me to use the white chackra, please, please!!!
Sakumo:Ok,but you must follow exactly what i show you or this chackra will consume you energy and maybe kill you.
2 hours after.
Tsunade:I managed to save him!
Kakashi's mom:My son!!!
Sakumo:Thank you, Tsunade. Kakashi forgive me i wouldn't try to learn you this.
End of the flashback, now.
Kakashion't underestimate me.(Dad, now i can do it!)
A white energy begin to emerge of Kakashi, he starts the raikiri's handseals. And run to BZ with intention of killing him.
Kakashi:Raikiri (white version)
BZ:What? His speed and power are better than before!
Option 2:
Kakashi:You are wrong, a part of Obito is inside me now.
Kakashi activates his left sharingan, but not the MS.
BZ:?!!
KakashiIf i use the kamui, i can touch Obito's body) Give me back Obito!!! Doton-Great Mud Wall!
A gigant wall blocks BZ movements.
Kakashi:Suiton-Aqua dragon! Raiton-Varley!
A aqua and electrics dragon starts to attack BZ.
BZ:Kamui!!!
In a short spiral, the dragon disappears, little by little.
Kakashi:Kamui!!!
A portal appears, closed to BZ and the dragon come back and touch him.
Sorry for mistakes and i made 2 options because i had these ideas and i wanted to write them. Hope you enjoyed it and thanks for your opinions.
Sasuke:I... I can't believe it, is this the infinite tsukoyumi? He really used the moon?
Naruto/Sakura/Kakashi:?!!
Naruto:Sasuke, we must be faster, we need to stop him before the genjutsu begin!
Sasuke:Yeah, I know...
Both of them are worried, but they start to jump over the chibaku tensei.
Madara:I must concentrate my chackra, just a little more, about 8 seconds i think so those will never reach in time. This is the end for those brats. Hun hun!
Scene changes to BZ, looking at the sky.
BZ:Finally, i couldn't do nothing for Madara-sama and now... Will I die?? With my enemies?!
Madara(speaks in BZ's mind):Go in the kamui, you can escape my jutsu.
BZ:Kamui!!!
BZ starts to disappear in a spiral but someone run to him and touch his shoulder.
Kakashi: Obito!!!
BZ:No! What did you do?
Kakashi:Sakura! Take care of Naruto and Sasuke!
Sakura:Y...Yes!!
Scene changes to Naruto and co.
Naruto:We will never do that in time, Sasuke take my hand, i will throw you on him, and then stop his genjutsu!
Sasuke:Ok.
Naruto do what he said. Sasuke is closed to Madara, he was about to slash him but...
Madara:Too late, INFINITE TSUKOYUMI!!!
The world changes suddenly, Naruto is in front of Madara, they are in white room.
Naruto:Where am i? Madara?
Madara:You lost. Now peace begin.
Naruto:I will never be defeat by someone like you! Your world is artificial, false, nothing is real. I must save everyone, and i can swear it, one day, everyone will understand each other, so, please, trust me and stop this.
Madara:As a kid, your words are nothing. I'm bored to see you, so I prepared something special for you, the Uchiha-boy and the pink-haired girl. You know, everyone is in a world of dreams now, but for you, I created a true world of nightmares.
The world changes again, Naruto is in his kitchen, Kushina and Minato are here.
Naruto:I feel strange... As i forgot something.
Naruto see his parents, smiling.
Naruto
ad, Mom you are here!!!One second, naruto's parents took a demonic face and an abnormal smile.
Naruto:??!
The world changes again, as Kakashi in Itachi's tsukoyumi, he is unable to move. He is in his bedroom, his parents are in front of him, in the dark.
Naruto
ad, Mom, what happens to me?Step by step they emerge of the shadow, the same terrifying face that Naruto saw just before, Naruto looks at their hand and see a kunai, he looks behind his parents, it is writed a message on the wall : For eternity.
Kushina/Minato: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!
They start to kill Naruto, they torture, and empale him. The same scene can be seen for Sasuke and Sakura, killing, torturing, empaling by their parents, their friends...
Sasuke/Naruto/Sakura:GWAAARRRGHHH!!!
Scene returns to Madara, in his white room.
Madara:HATAKE KAKASHI, where are you?
Scene changes to the Kamui.
BZ:Why did you come with me?
Kakashi:Give me back Obito's body.
BZ:Without your sharingan, i've a doubt, can you really beat me and force me to leave Obito's body?
Option 1:
Flashback, Kakashi, 5 years old.
Kakashi: Dad, learn me to use the white chackra, please, please!!!
Sakumo:Ok,but you must follow exactly what i show you or this chackra will consume you energy and maybe kill you.
2 hours after.
Tsunade:I managed to save him!
Kakashi's mom:My son!!!
Sakumo:Thank you, Tsunade. Kakashi forgive me i wouldn't try to learn you this.
End of the flashback, now.
Kakashi
on't underestimate me.(Dad, now i can do it!)A white energy begin to emerge of Kakashi, he starts the raikiri's handseals. And run to BZ with intention of killing him.
Kakashi:Raikiri (white version)
BZ:What? His speed and power are better than before!
Option 2:
Kakashi:You are wrong, a part of Obito is inside me now.
Kakashi activates his left sharingan, but not the MS.
BZ:?!!
Kakashi
If i use the kamui, i can touch Obito's body) Give me back Obito!!! Doton-Great Mud Wall!A gigant wall blocks BZ movements.
Kakashi:Suiton-Aqua dragon! Raiton-Varley!
A aqua and electrics dragon starts to attack BZ.
BZ:Kamui!!!
In a short spiral, the dragon disappears, little by little.
Kakashi:Kamui!!!
A portal appears, closed to BZ and the dragon come back and touch him.
Sorry for mistakes and i made 2 options because i had these ideas and i wanted to write them. Hope you enjoyed it and thanks for your opinions.
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