[Predictions] 672 Prediction

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My First one.....


(Madara smiles condescendingly at Gai)
Madara: Is this what the great the elephant has to offer? How...
(He turns to Rock Lee)
...Disappointing
Rock Lee: (Desperate rage passes over his face) Grrrrrr........
Gai: Lee...do not let him hinder your flames...anger will only cloud your decisions.
Rock Lee: But Gai Sensei......
Gai: Lee! Listen to me now!
(He gives Lee a small smile) You have always been dedicated to your goal.
*Flashback of the team forming*
Following your dreams with a passion that has instilled unrivaled flames of youth within yourself.
*Flashback of Lee training*
I have always been proud to call you.....my student. Watching you turn into the splendid ninja you are today has been the single most joyful experience of my life. Thank you.
(Tears streak down Lees face)
Lee: Gai sensei.
(Black streaks begin to show in Gai's red flames)
Gai: Lee, you are already a splendid ninja. You have always been one. And now as your sensei, I will fulfill my duty and pave the way for the youth.
(The black flames break away from the red and begin to envelope Gai's fists)
Gai: AND NOW.....THE NIGHT MOTH SPREADS ITS' WINGS!
Madara: Bring your flames....SO THAT I MAY DOUSE THEM IN THE RAINS OF MY AMBITIONS!!
BOOM!!!!!!!!!
Madara: !!!
Gai:!!
The rest:!!!
Minato: These chakra signitures....their....unreal.
Madara: What is this...feeling....
(scene cuts to Orochimaru and his group)
Karin: S-sasuke-kun?!
(Cuts to obito within the dimension)
Obito: (smiling) I don't know what this is....but maybe....I was right to place my trust in you...Naruto.
(Naruto and Sasuke awake, both keeping their eyes close as they stand up)
Naruto and Sasuke return from death!
What is the strange new power of the Sage?

Madara: I haven't felt this since Hashirama!
(A sadistic smirk adorns his face)
EXCELLENT!
Next issue: Madara itches for battle.
 

HENI

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I like the ending of it haha
 

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i think that's too short for now but since it's your 1st.. Keep it up..
 

Alfred Pennyworth

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keep up . would be better with more fight scenes since the manga did leave a 'prediction' that madara would get pierced
 

keshav31

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make it long. Interesting ending
 

Xāvî1

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Too short.....
 

Jarex

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Nice one there for your first try =D. Make it a bit longer next time
 

Hata Hideaki

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I liked the ending...
(Madara itches his BALLS) lol Lol:snick:
 

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Too short... Need to work on it
 

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OMG, it was going so well...untill the ending :(
It was too short.
 
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