[Predictions] 663: The Eighth Gate

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663: The Eighth Gate ​

{Their hearts begin to fail, along with any remaining hope for the world...}
Madara: What a waste...
Madara: Enter into the eternal darkness now, child!
Madara: For you shall never know Heaven!
Tobirama: Where'd that damn statue go??!
Madara: I hid it away while I recover chakra
Madara: I became too accustomed to having unlimited chakra as an edo and overdid it...
Madara: [Evil Smile]Besides, I get to play with your old student for the time being!
Tobirama: [angry] Madara!! You stay away from hi-
Madara: I don't think you can stop me!
[Madara jumps away]
Tobirama: (Hiruzen...I'm sorry)
[Scene switches to Sakura healing Naruto]
Sakura: *pant* *pant* It's no good! He's only getting worse!!
Gaara: Don't give up!
Gaara: We can't let him die!!
Sakura: You're right...
[Scene switches to Guy and Lee together]
Lee: Guy Sensei! This enemy is insanely tough! What do we do??
Guy: Lee, we need to use the 8 gates and flank him from both sides!
Lee: [shocked] All 8!??
Guy: No! At least up to 7, and that's only a worst case scenario!
Guy: We'll start from 5 and move up from there!
Guy: You flank left and I'll flank right, got it!
Lee: Yes Guy Sensei!
Guy: Then let's do it!
[Lee and Guy get into the position to open the 8 gates]
Lee/Guy: Gate of Limit! Open!
[Lee and Guy open the 5th gate]
[Lee and Guy flank the mini-buddha]
Zetsu Clone: Huh? what's this?
Spiral Zetsu: Two stupid Kakashis
Zetsu Clone: Gah! You still say that!
[Guy and Lee kick the mini-buddha from both sides]
Guy: (Not even a dent! We'll have to step it up!)
Guy/Lee: Gate of View! Open!
[The mini-buddha launches two hands at them]
[Guy and Lee jump away]
Guy: Lee! Distract that thing and I'll hit that weird guy when he's not looking!
Lee: Yes Guy Sensei!
[Lee moves in front of the mini-buddha]
Spiral Zetsu: That's a dumb move!
Hiruzen: Lee! Be careful!
Lee: Don't worry Third, I got this!
Spiral Zetsu: How about this!
[The mini-buddha launches all 5 elements directly at Lee]
Hiruzen: (Sh!t! I don't have time to react!)
Lee: (I'd call this a worst case scenario!)
Lee: (Gate of Wonder! Open!)
[Lee rapidly punches the jutsu with flaming fists, negating it]
Hiruzen: [surprised] (He's grown so much...)
Hiruzen: (To repel all 5 elemental jutsu with taijutsu alone is...)
Lee: *pant* *pant* See...I got th-
[Lee passes out]
Hiruzen: (Seven gates are too much for anyone to handle...He'll be unable to fight for weeks)
Spiral Zetsu: [middle finger extended] No fair! You can't use your fists to counter jutsu! That's cheating!!
Zetsu Clone: What the f*ck is that kid??!!
Guy: He's my comrade!
Zetsu Clone: [shocked] !!
[Guy kicks the Zetsu Clone off of the mini-buddha]
Spiral Zetsu: Ooh! I can't wait to kill you!
Guy: The only one dying here will be you!
[Guy attempts to punch Spiral Zetsu]
[Guy misses]
Spiral Zetsu: (I'll need more space to fight this one!)
[Spiral Zetsu jumps away]
[Guy chases after him]
[Madara arrives]
Orochimaru: Karin, Juugo, Suigetsu!
Orochimaru: We're clear to move toward Sasuke!
Karin: Then let's go!
[Orochimaru, Karin, Juugo, and Suigetsu jump away]
Madara: Hmm...Where's the spiral one?
Hiruzen: He'll be dead soon!
Madara: Ah, Hiruzen Sarutobi
Madara: Last time I saw you, you were just a child...
Hiruzen: And last time I saw you, you were more sensible!
Madara: No...I was plainly just ignorant!
Madara: Ignorant about the truths of this world
Madara: Ignorant about how I could change it!
Hiruzen: Did you come here to talk or to fight?!
Madara: Fine...Show me the power of the second God of Shinobi!
Hiruzen: No problem!
[Madara and Hiruzen lunge at each other]
[Scene switches to Karin, Orochimaru, Suigetsu, and Juugo]
Orochimaru: Karin keep his teeth clenched on your arm!
Orochimaru: Juugo, transplant part of your body into his wound!
Orochimaru: Suigetsu...What's the problem?
[Suigetsu is shown trying to pull the rods out of Tobirama]
Suigetsu: Sh!t...They're wedged in there pretty good!
Tobirama: It's too late for me...
Tobirama: Just save the Uchiha!
Karin: [crying] Come on Sasuke! Don't die on me!!!
[Scene switches to Guy and Spiral Zetsu]
[Guy is shown with two wooden spikes sticking out of his back and Spiral Zetsu is shown with several bruises]
Guy: (Sh!t! My body can't take much more of this!)
Spiral Zetsu: (He already destroyed three mini-wood dragons!)
Spiral Zetsu: (This guy's tough!)
Spiral Zetsu: (I wonder how he'll handle five a once!)
[Spiral Zetsu summons 5 mini-wood dragons]
Guy: (Grr! I can barely take one at this point!)
Guy: (I don't have a choice...)
[Guy gets into the 8 gates position]
Guy: (Gate of Death...)
Guy: (Open!!!)
[Guy opens the 8th gate and the terrain begins to crack around him]
Spiral Zetsu: (Oh God! This guy was just holding back!!)
[The dragons lunge at Guy]
[Guy quickly destroys all five by kicking each one]
Spiral Zetsu: (If I could...)
[Guy appears in front of Spiral Zetsu]
Spiral Zetsu: (I'd sh!t myself!!)
[Guy punches the head off of Spiral Zetsu]
[Spiral Zetsu's body is launched backwards a few feet and falls dead]
[Guy falls to the floor]
Guy: (Well Kakashi...)
Guy: (Looks like we won't get that rematch after all...)
???: Look what we have here...
[Kabuto is shown]
Kabuto: That little show was quite impressive...
Kabuto: Such skill with taijutsu alone...
Kabuto: You could potentially be useful in helping me kill Madara...
Kabuto: I think I'll try to save you
[Scene switches to Sakura, Naruto, Gaara, and Tsunade]
Sakura: I don't know how much longer he can last...
Gaara: Just a little longer!
[Minato appears]
Minato: Sorry I'm late!
Gaara: Quick! He doesn't have long!
Minato: You did good Naruto's friend...
Minato: But I'll take it from here!
Sakura: All right Fourth
Minato: I hope this works!
[Scene shows Naruto, Sasuke, and Guy]
{Their chances of survival have risen!}
{What is the fate of Might Guy??!?}
 

The Necromancer

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I didn't read... but based on your title... I think you're going to be disappointed.
 

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No way this is happening, but nice
 

Jako98146

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Yep...I went overboard on this one :p
 

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This is a good fanfic.
 

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haha not bad, fan service much?
 

Matt

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yea i just saw the title was like yea not gonna read
 

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Good fan fiction.
 

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This is what should happen :D
 

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Didn't read , keep dreaming U_U
 

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We're too far into the series for a side character like Gai to get the spotlight.
 

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Man, dis shit was sick, alot of yall just haters for real. Keep it up my G
 

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good fanfic.
 

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No not Guy sensei
 

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cool, imo Gai will go 8 gates and will kick Madaras ass but atm he is about to do finishing move his body will die and he will fail.
 

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Interesting.
 
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