[Predictions] 663: At the brink

elprince

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the scene start with both naruto and sasuke's hearts stop beating

karin *bursting into tears* : " his chakra flow stopped , he is ......dead "

orochimarou : ??!!!

juugo *running toward sasuke's place* : "sasuke , hold on , i cant let u die "

suigetsu *looking to orochimarou * : "what now , are we gonna leave sasuke .........."

orochimarou * thinking deeply * : " this is bad , and not even in the right time ..........*looks back at swirly zetsue* at this rate we will lose sasuke too " he close his eyes "change of plans , take karin with u and retrieve sasuke's body immediately "

suigetsu : "am on it " jumps following juugo then karin follow them

orochimarou *going out of his hide place and jump to stand next to sarutobi * : " your doing great old geezer " he smirk "but u need to watch closely now " he form hand seals

sarutobi : " what do u mean , orochimarou ............ " he looks to the statue as the swearly zetsue is freezed and shivering

W zetsue : " whats wrong !!! "

S zetsue : " he is resisting , it cant be " the tentacles unwrap slowly revealing the face under it

orochimarou : " i wasnt sure at first , but now am certain " he put his pals together " the one is using the mokton is none other than our old friend ........... "

konoha shinobi looks up in surprise to the friendly face revealed to them

tsunade : " it cant be .............yamato !!! "

yamato slowly open his eyes and look down to the battle field

W zetsue : " the bond were broken , but how could...." he looks down to see orochimarou next to sarutobi " this orochimarou snake , what have he done "

s zetsue : " stop resisting , there's no point on this "

yamato : " you damn thing again " he grind his teeth creating many wooden rods all over his body and pierce s zetsue tearing him apart

w zetsue : " enough with the struggle already " he jump to steals his body again but a sword pierce through his head

as he looks down he see orochimarou's kusanagi sword extended from his mouth to his head
yamato pant and fall on his knees at the top of the statue as w zetsue fall next to him
orochimarou and sarutobi jump to catch him and put him down next to tsunade

tsunade : "so thats why he was able to use the moukton ? "

yamato open his eyes to see some of the shinobi around him , he slowly set on the ground

yamato : " what happened , and where is naruto now " as he finish his sentence juugo jump in next to them along with sasuke between his arms , karin and suigetsu behind him

yamato : " sasuke !!! orochimarou !!! and the third hokage !!! , what's going on here "

tsunade * looking to sasuke * : " he even got u sasuke " she try to heal him but she stop as soon as she put her hand on his chest she stops

tsunade : " his heart beat ..............he is ...dead "


the scene change to minato as he look surprised into garra direction

minato : " it cant be , naruto ....... he lost kurama chakra " he evades afire attack from the Bzobito

minato looks down thinking : " theres no much time before naruto lose all his life chakra , i need to act fast "
as he run toward BZobito , madara land just next to him

madara : " what took u so long , i only sent u to collect my eyes and the other half of kyuubi chakra "

Bzobito : " this one is pretty tough as the fourth hogake , and i have trouble controlling obito as well "

minato looks to madara in rage : " am not going to forgive what have u done to my son , uchiha madara , strong or not , i will bring you down " he throw marked kunai all over the place

madara follow it with his eyes with he is crossing his arms " the same jutsue as tobirama "

minato : " its not , this is my ultimate jutsue "

then scene end with minato lunge toward madara and change to garra carrying sakura and naruto on his sand

garra : " just abit more sakura , we cant lose him now "

sakura set back on shock as her hands fall next to her

sakura : " its ........finished ...naruto is ........." her eyes widen without another word

garra looks back at naruto terrified from the though , then he close his eyes

garra : " it cant be , i must do it , i wont lets him die while am watching , even if there is the slightest chance "

he hurl the sand right toward the giant blooming flower and land on its leafs

garra : " it should be here , i hope u are right .......kurama "

garra moves away giant leafs like curtains into some kind of abig chamber while the sand is carrying naruto behind him
they both enter the chamber while the leafs close behind them again .

THE END


((sorry for my bad grammar , and any faults i may had ,i hope u guys enjoy it )) .
 

Itachi75

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I personally enjoyed it good job, you should do more :)
 
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