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opens with naruto seeing some shadow figures and one of them say It is good to see you again
Naruto:!!!! who are you
as the shadow figure step forward naruto is shock to see who is it
???: how can you forget about me
naruto: ero sennin
jiraiya: what are u doing here is not your time
naruto: im sorry ero sennin that I couldn't keep your promise or any of the promise that I made to everyone im just a failure
jiraiya: no you.............
???: no you are not ( as the shadow figure hit him on his head)
Naruto: m....mom
jiraiya: so you have meet your dad and mom (so he sealed his and kushina charka in the seal). naruto im sorry that I didn't tell you about your dad and mom
naruto: is ok
kushina: so we meet before huh.
naruto: yea mom, you told me everything what happen when I was born and about mask guy
kushina: smile, so have you meat your dad
naruto: yea and he told me about obito
kushina: yea obito was always like you, jiraiya told me everthing. is said that he died so young
naruto: no he his still alive, he was the one who attack the village,
kushina: shock, that not possible. if he was alive why didn't he come back to the village
naruto: is because he said that kakashi sensei killed rin
????: no wonder yahiko didn't believe him when we first meet, I was a fool to trust him
???: so your friend saw what we couldn't see, you had good friends nagato
naruto: nagato and itachi
itachi: is sasuke ok
naruto: yea he is helping us in the war against jubi and madara
nagato: naruto why are you keep saying madara when you said madara was obito
???: that because the real madara was brought back to edo
naruto: he live and used obito to use the rebirth justu
???: naruto is lady hinata
naruto: yea
naruto: im sorry everyone that I couldn't keep my promise, I let you all down and now because of me madara even got kurama and they other tail beast
kushina: who his kurama
naruto: the 9 tail fox
kushina,jiraiya ,nagato and itachi: !!! shock
???: what do u think you are doing crying over their
naruto: you two
???: yea us kakashi told me that you made a promise in front of our grave and now what
???: naruto I once told you that if you fight for someone else you get stronger and your sensei also told me what you did to zabuza thank you for that
naruto: zabuza and haku
naruto: how could I help when I couldn't even help kurama, and I give all them that I would protect them
jiraiya: but you could find a way to help
naruto: how can I help them when the madarm sealed them into the jubi
itachi: I already told you that every justu has a weakness, you must find a way to break the seal to get you friends back
naruto: but how, madara is too strong
???: so what
everyone look at the shadow figure
???: string doesn't come from how much chakra you have it comes from what is in your heart, just like what kurama and the other left u behind(walk toward the group)
naruto: but them have been sealed into the jubi
???: but kurama and everyone of them trust you more then even me
naruto: sage of 6 path
so6p: you don't need their chakra and power, they left you something even better, their heart
naruto: !! shock
so6p: I will help you but are you ready to accept my help
naruto: think for a minute then with a serious face yes
cut to the battle field
madara: zestu go and get the other eye now
zestu: ok
madara: so you want to help him live, then I shall end his life (you uzumaki always had some thing up your sleeve at the end but there is now way youll save him from me, as he make few hand sign )
suddenly a branches like prison come in between naruto and tsunade, Karin, and sakura, as they were force to move back leaving naruto in a wood prison
madara: make a hand signs and shot fire justu at naruto but is block by sand
gaara: is too strong I cant hold it
then a shield come behind the sand to hold the attack of(guessing itachi give they shield to sasuke)
sasuke: gaara let end his life
as sasuke goes in his complete(not final)susanoo and gaara is next to him on his sand
madara: which one of u will die first, make few hand signs
the end
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opens with naruto seeing some shadow figures and one of them say It is good to see you again
Naruto:!!!! who are you
as the shadow figure step forward naruto is shock to see who is it
???: how can you forget about me
naruto: ero sennin
jiraiya: what are u doing here is not your time
naruto: im sorry ero sennin that I couldn't keep your promise or any of the promise that I made to everyone im just a failure
jiraiya: no you.............
???: no you are not ( as the shadow figure hit him on his head)
Naruto: m....mom
jiraiya: so you have meet your dad and mom (so he sealed his and kushina charka in the seal). naruto im sorry that I didn't tell you about your dad and mom
naruto: is ok
kushina: so we meet before huh.
naruto: yea mom, you told me everything what happen when I was born and about mask guy
kushina: smile, so have you meat your dad
naruto: yea and he told me about obito
kushina: yea obito was always like you, jiraiya told me everthing. is said that he died so young
naruto: no he his still alive, he was the one who attack the village,
kushina: shock, that not possible. if he was alive why didn't he come back to the village
naruto: is because he said that kakashi sensei killed rin
????: no wonder yahiko didn't believe him when we first meet, I was a fool to trust him
???: so your friend saw what we couldn't see, you had good friends nagato
naruto: nagato and itachi
itachi: is sasuke ok
naruto: yea he is helping us in the war against jubi and madara
nagato: naruto why are you keep saying madara when you said madara was obito
???: that because the real madara was brought back to edo
naruto: he live and used obito to use the rebirth justu
???: naruto is lady hinata
naruto: yea
naruto: im sorry everyone that I couldn't keep my promise, I let you all down and now because of me madara even got kurama and they other tail beast
kushina: who his kurama
naruto: the 9 tail fox
kushina,jiraiya ,nagato and itachi: !!! shock
???: what do u think you are doing crying over their
naruto: you two
???: yea us kakashi told me that you made a promise in front of our grave and now what
???: naruto I once told you that if you fight for someone else you get stronger and your sensei also told me what you did to zabuza thank you for that
naruto: zabuza and haku
naruto: how could I help when I couldn't even help kurama, and I give all them that I would protect them
jiraiya: but you could find a way to help
naruto: how can I help them when the madarm sealed them into the jubi
itachi: I already told you that every justu has a weakness, you must find a way to break the seal to get you friends back
naruto: but how, madara is too strong
???: so what
everyone look at the shadow figure
???: string doesn't come from how much chakra you have it comes from what is in your heart, just like what kurama and the other left u behind(walk toward the group)
naruto: but them have been sealed into the jubi
???: but kurama and everyone of them trust you more then even me
naruto: sage of 6 path
so6p: you don't need their chakra and power, they left you something even better, their heart
naruto: !! shock
so6p: I will help you but are you ready to accept my help
naruto: think for a minute then with a serious face yes
cut to the battle field
madara: zestu go and get the other eye now
zestu: ok
madara: so you want to help him live, then I shall end his life (you uzumaki always had some thing up your sleeve at the end but there is now way youll save him from me, as he make few hand sign )
suddenly a branches like prison come in between naruto and tsunade, Karin, and sakura, as they were force to move back leaving naruto in a wood prison
madara: make a hand signs and shot fire justu at naruto but is block by sand
gaara: is too strong I cant hold it
then a shield come behind the sand to hold the attack of(guessing itachi give they shield to sasuke)
sasuke: gaara let end his life
as sasuke goes in his complete(not final)susanoo and gaara is next to him on his sand
madara: which one of u will die first, make few hand signs
the end
