[Predictions] 660: Goodbye Kurama!

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660: Goodbye Kurama!

{The Bijuu enchained!}
{What is Naruto's fate!??}

Naruto: Oh sh!t!!
Madara: This one still has some fight in him
Madara: [smirk] But he'll break eventually
[Scene switches to Kurama's subconscious]
[The two Kuramas are conversing]
Yang Kurama: Dammit! How do I get out of this??
Yin Kurama: Maybe I could send Minato over and-
Yang Kurama: No good, Naruto can't hold on that long...
Yin Kurama: Then...
Yang Kurama: Are you thinking what I'm thinking?
[Yin Kurama shakes his head somberly]
[Scene switches the the battlefield]
Naruto: (Sh!t, I can't hold on much longer!)
Kurama: (Naruto, switch with me...I have a plan)
Naruto: (Ok!)
[Scene switches to Naruto's subconscious]
Naruto: So what's this plan?
Kurama: [sad] I'm letting go...
Naruto: [Shocked] What!?!
Kurama: I'm leaving a small amount of my chakra to prolong your life...
Kurama: Then Minato will give you my other half...
Naruto: [frantic] No! There has to be another way!
Naruto: You can't-
Kurama: Naruto...If you can't get me back, I have to tell you...
Kurama: [somberly smiling] I'm glad you were my jinchurichi
Naruto: NO!!!
Kurama: Goodbye...
[Scene switches to the battlefield]
[Kurama's avatar is ripped from Naruto]
[Naruto falls to the ground]
Naruto: Ku-rama...
Kurama: (Konichiwa, Naruto...)
[Kurama is sucked into the Mauzou]
Madara: That's one down!
Madara: Now for the Hachibi!
Gyuuki: F*ck no!
[Scene switches to Obito, Kakashi, and Minato]
Yin Kurama: (My other half's gone)
Minato: Got it
Minato: Kakashi I need you to handle this
Kakashi: Alright sensei!
[Minato flees the scene]
Yin Kurama: (You know that your edo body will collapse from this process right?)
Minato: Yeah...
Yin Kurama: (So you still want to go through with this?)
Minato: I already gave my life for my son...
Minato: I'd do it again in a heartbeat
Yin Kurama: (You're a good man Minato)
Minato: [Smirk] And you're not the same ******* that killed me 17 years ago
[Scene switches to the battlefield]
Madara: [Angry] Break you damn mutt!
Madara: [Confused] Hmm??
[Madara sees Minato]
Madara: Ah, there's the Kyuubi's other half
[Naruto is seen lying on the ground motionless]
Yin Kurama: (Quick we need to do this now!)
[Madara jumps down saying:]
Madara: No so fast!
Minato: (Sh!t!)
Yin Kurama: (We don't have time!)
Yin Kurama: (His body's compatible with my chakra, so filter mine into his body!)
Minato: (Gotcha!)
[Madara rushes toward Minato]
Minato: !!!
[Shukaku's tail grabs Madara]
Shukaku: I may be indifferent to that damned fox...
Shukaku: But that kid's okay with me b!tch!!
[Shukaku throws Madara into a cliff]
Madara: (How inconvenient...)
[Minato launches a chakra arm into Naruto's back]
[Naruto begins to slowly stand]
Naruto: Dad!
Minato: This is only temporary!
Minato: Once we have some time I'll begin the transfer!
Naruto: [Angry] Alright but only after I kill this bastard!
Madara: That's it Naruto!
Madara: Show me your rage!
[Naruto creates a Rasengan and says:]
Naruto: You kidnapped my friend...
[Naruto lunges at Madara with a Massive Rasengan]
Naruto: ...So I won't hesitate to murder you!
[Naruto closes in on Madara]
[Madara activates his Susanoo ribcage]
Madara: This failed once, why do you suspect it will work this time?
Naruto: This time I'm not Kage Buushin!
[Madara's Susanoo ribcage cracks]
Madara: (Well what do you know...)
[Madara activates his stage 2 Susanoo]
[The stage 2 Susanoo begins to crack]
Madara: Enough of these games!]
[Madara activates his full Susanoo and Narruto is pushes away]
Naruto: [Pained] Damn!
Madara: Face reality kid!
Madara: The only reason I kept you alive was because of that infernal beast you kept in you!
Madara: And now that it's gone I can put you to sleep!
[An enton arrow pierces the Gedo Mauzou's head]
Madara: [surprised] What!
[The Bijuu are released from the chains]
Mauzou: [Pained] GWWWWAAAAAAAAHHH!!!!
Sasuke: That should do it!
Madara: (I might be able to save it if I can reach it in time!)
{The Gedo Mauzou mortally wounded!!!}
{How does Madara plan to rejuvenate the Kurama's cage!!??}

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ANiMUS

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Well, that was fun:hooray:
 
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No...doesn't work like that. I don't see Minato giving naruto the other half nor do I see naruto giving up the fox. Sasuke will cut the chains and have another feat for his susanoo sword.

I mean even if he gave him the other half whats the point? No new feats...just the darker half with a dark cloak.
Though its not the same process as the other half he'll have to start over and since the darker half is darker...and the lighter half wasn't.

Sh!ts gonna go down...again.

Naruto also won't be light anymore..he'll be dark like sasuke which isn't the resentments of the sage as many of you think.
Dark and Darkness on teams
 

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That was strangely sad...
 

VongolaX

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Your convinced that Madara will extract him.

You do realize that Minato can interfere?
 

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I doubt Kurama will be extracted, or that Gedo Mazo will be destroyed that easily.
 

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It was interesting but I don't think it would turn out like this.
 

rakitha

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nice dude enjoyed :eww:
 

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I seriously liked it a lot but the end was a bit off. I mean to defeat gedo in such a way would be quite aniticlimatic.
 

Jako98146

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I seriously liked it a lot but the end was a bit off. I mean to defeat gedo in such a way would be quite aniticlimatic.

Thanks for the comment

But in the ending it wasn't acctually defeated, Madara's thought was a foreshadow to him saving it. It would be anticlimactic if it was beaten that cheaply though
 
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