[Predictions] 654 - Obito's tragedy

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naruto: so what doy ou say? i'm sure kakashi sensei would want you to just come home.
obito: and what would find waiting for me? chains?
naruto: you could better understand yourself. make amends for everything. become a loyal shinobi of the leaf.
obito: will of fire huh...do you want to just erase everything ive done?
naruto: no but being sorry would be a good start. also freeing rin from her prison.

*flashback*
rin opens her eyes, her wound closing up due to isobu's chakra as obito is holding her.
obito: rin i....you were...
rin: huh...who's there?
obito lets go of her and hides his face. zetsu closes around him
obito: my name is tobi.

*real time*
obito: kakashi once asked me why. why did i become this way? he wondered if it was because rin died. but thats not true. its because this world is full of misery death and hate. i knew that from the very moment i killed my first mist ninja. rin, mortally wounded, never saw it and she never should have to. so i killed her for the 3 tails, had nagato revive her with the rinne tensei, and kept her safe inside the rain village.

*flashback*
obitos roots plunge into the mist ninja. his mask falls off. he is a boy, no older than obito. obitos eyes widen in surprise and he howls with rage and sorrow.

*real time*
naruto: but...
obito: naruto when i was returning to madara's side i confirmed everything for myself. i found out the cruel plot behind rin's murder and kakashi's suffering. i found only misery and hatred around me. everywhere in this horrible hell of a reality. once i knew how fragile life was, how everyone, not just me were being forced to kill to survive every day, i lost hope.
obito: if you want to know why i attacked konoha that night and tried to kill you, thats my reasoning. because why should konoha be subjected to this? why suffer endlessly when a quick death would be so much easier and more merciful? i can retract that kindness and mercy if you want me to.
nartuo is astounded by this
naruto: your insane...there really is no redeeming you.
obito: ...really?
*obito looks sad*
obito: everyone dies. even me. its what we do before we die that matters. if you were in my position, and had my power, wouldnt you have started to think less like a human and more like a god, dispensing justice wherever you go?
naruto: and i thought you sounded like pain before...heh.

*back to the real world*
kakashi warps in.
kakashi: looks like my chakra replenished
sakura: kakashi sensei! i thought you were...
kakashi places his hand on her chest.
kakashi: i'm alright.

*elsewhere*
madara cuts hashiramas mokuton in half and pins him against a wall.
madara: im out of time. i want to end this war right now!
he powers up to perfect susano and begins sucking up senjutsu from hashirama's corpse.
the big sword rises up and swings down. the shockwave heads right for all the alliance shinobi. suddenly the shockwave is diverted by a blast of suiton.
fodder: was that the mist village?
kakashi: no they were occupied with the bijuu tug of war. this is-
suddenly people start raining down in front of them.
voice: rain village, arrived.
voice: grass village arrived.
even more jump down
voice; waterfall village arrived!
madara: whats this?
one of the rain ninjas walk up to them and takes off her gas mask. revealing...
rin. fully adult and battle scarred.
rin: obito what is this madness?

text: rin's return! and madara...?
 
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man..I thought it was a new chapter..
 

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totally absurd! totally impossible! i used to think like that! but nice and was worth a minute! keeo it up
 

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Lol what a twist XD
 

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This was quite fun to read tbh, seeing how it might never happen, thus still pretty fun.
 

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MADARA : :what: more reinforcements? I'm doomed :NO:
 

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Very good I liked the rin and reinforcements part
 

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kakashi places his hand on her chest. -dafuq is this
 
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