[Predictions] 652: Revenge

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Obito falls to the ground...

As Naruto and Sasuke head towards the blooming flower, Madara jumps in front of them

Both stop & Madara looks at Sasuke in the jewel of the Susanoo clad Kyuubi

Madara: How nostalgic.

Sasuke: ...

Naruto: Move!!!

Naruto and Sasuke, inside Susanoo Kyuubi lunge towards Madara.

Madara blasts them backwards with a large Shinra Tensei.

Naruto: Damn it!! We don't have time for this!

Naruto!

Naruto enters his subconscious, now facing Kurama

Kurama: Switch with me.

Naruto: Eh?!

Kurama: I have a surprise for Madara.

Naruto, smiling: ...

Kurama switches with Naruto.

Madara sees Naruto's expression change.

Madara: ...

Kurama, looking at Madara: ...

Naruto's BM and cloak dissolves and both Kurama as Naruto and Sasuke land on the ground.

Madara: ..!

Sasuke: ?! What are you doing?

Naruto, in Kurama's voice: Get back, Uchiha brat.

Sasuke, thinking to himself: ...this voice...

Sasuke leaps away from Naruto.

Naruto, to Kurama, surprised: What are you going to do?

Kurama: Sorry, but I'm going to get rough.

Naruto, smirking: Heh!

Madara: Are you ready to be my pet again, Kyuubi?

Kurama makes an evil grin at Madara, thinking back to their first meeting...

Kurama: What fortune, to think I'd get to take revenge against you...

Madara: So you've learned to speak, beast.

Kurama, visibly angry: !!

Kurama, thinking to himself: To be friendly with my Jinchuuriki and immune to that wretched clan's power, what are the odds...

Kurama transforms Naruto into version 2, with exoskeleton and 9 Tails

Hinata, Sakura, Rest of Cloud Nine: !!

Killer Bee, looking over: !!

Kurama, to Naruto: I told you I'd have to get rough

Madara: ...

Kurama, now in version 2, performs hand seals: Ram → Monkey → Bird → Dog → Boar

Madara, shocked: !!

Kurama: Obey!

Gkyaku Kuchiyose!

Madara: GUH!!

Madara falls on his hands and knees, shaking...

Madara starts lifting himself up, then looks at Kurama

Madara: ...you...

Kurama: How about some more of my chakra?!

Kurama does performs a release hand seal

Madara: !! GUOH!!!!

Madara falls again, clenching his body as it feels like it's burning from the inside...

Kurama: To think it could be useful at a time like this.

Madara: GUUUOOOOH!!!!

Lee, looking at Naruto v2, then Madara: What's happening?!

Shikamaru: ...

Sakura: So that's it...

Choji, everyone else: ?!

Sakura: When the Kyuubi takes over Naruto's body, it surrounds his body in a foul chakra...

Sakura: When I got some of that chakra into a small wound, it was like a burning poison...

Sakura: My techniques couldn't heal it, and the pain could be so bad I couldn't move.

Ino: What does that have to do with Madara falling over?

Shino: I see.

Ten-Ten: Shino?!

Shino: At some point, Madara made a contract with the Kyuubi, a contract like the one I made with my bugs.

Shino: To perform a summon, you offer the animal some of your chakra in exchange. The animal takes in that chakra to keep the summon active. When the chakra runs out, the summon disappears.

Shikamaru: This works both ways. In addition to Madara being able to summon the Kyuubi, the Kyuubi could summon Madara with a reverse summoning.

Lee: So the Kyuubi tried to summon Madara?

Shikamaru: Yes, and this forced Madara to take in some of the Kyuubi's chakra.

Hinata, looking at Madara's body: The Kyuubi's chakra is spread throughout his body...

Choji, looking at his own hand in chakra cloak: Then why isn't this chakra hurting us?

Hinata: The Kyuubi gave us chakra with Naruto-kun as a medium, so this is really Naruto-kun's chakra.

Choji: Oh...

Back to Madara, who is again on the ground, now with bloodlust in his eyes

Madara, breathing heavily: ...you...ignorant...beast...

Kurama: Keh! Still acting tough?

Gaara moves in to seal Madara

Gaara: !!

Madara summons Perfect Susanoo and lunges towards Kurama

Madara, looking around: ...where's the Uchiha boy?

Madara looks at the flower: !!

Hashirama appears and Shinsuusenju punches Madara's Susanoo, pushing it away from Kurama

Hashirama: Did you forget about me already, Madara?

Hashirama looks at the flower: !!

Sasuke, smiling in a close-up, thinking to himself: so that was the Kyuubi's plan...

CS Susanoo shown holding onto one of the flower's petals

Sasuke uses the Kyuubi's chakra to create a giant amaterasu sword, and starts to swing it down onto the flower

--- IS THIS THE END OF THE MOON'S EYE PLAN? ---

END OF CHAPTER
 
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I liked this, but in part 1 Neji said Shino didn't summon bugs they just live on him...

so far he only summoned giant bugs...
 

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I.... LOVED THIS. it's about time Madara notices an uchiha is among the alliance. we get to see madara getting knocked around for a change. And seeing Kurama getting back at madara is very entertaining. Though there is one problem... Kishi tweeted that madara will reveal something big in the next chapter and you didn't say anything about that.
 

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Obito falls to the ground...

As Naruto and Sasuke head towards the blooming flower, Madara jumps in front of them

Both stop & Madara looks at Sasuke in the jewel of the Susanoo clad Kyuubi

Madara: How nostalgic.

Sasuke: ...

Naruto: Move!!!

Naruto and Sasuke, inside Susanoo Kyuubi lunge towards Madara.

Madara blasts them backwards with a large Shinra Tensei.

Naruto: Damn it!! We don't have time for this!

Naruto!

Naruto enters his subconscious, now facing Kurama

Kurama: Switch with me.

Naruto: Eh?!

Kurama: I have a surprise for Madara.

Naruto, smiling: ...

Kurama switches with Naruto.

Madara sees Naruto's expression change.

Madara: ...

Kurama, looking at Madara: ...

Naruto's BM and cloak dissolves and both Kurama as Naruto and Sasuke land on the ground.

Madara: ..!

Sasuke: ?! What are you doing?

Naruto, in Kurama's voice: Get back, Uchiha brat.

Sasuke, thinking to himself: ...this voice...

Sasuke leaps away from Naruto.

Naruto, to Kurama, surprised: What are you going to do?

Kurama: Sorry, but I'm going to get rough.

Naruto, smirking: Heh!

Madara: Are you ready to be my pet again, Kyuubi?

Kurama makes an evil grin at Madara, thinking back to their first meeting...

Kurama: What fortune, to think I'd get to take revenge against you...

Madara: So you've learned to speak, beast.

Kurama, visibly angry: !!

Kurama, thinking to himself: To be friendly with my Jinchuuriki and immune to that wretched clan's power, what are the odds...

Kurama transforms Naruto into version 2, with exoskeleton and 9 Tails

Hinata, Sakura, Rest of Cloud Nine: !!

Killer Bee, looking over: !!

Kurama, to Naruto: I told you I'd have to get rough

Madara: ...

Kurama, now in version 2, performs hand seals: Ram → Monkey → Bird → Dog → Boar

Madara, shocked: !!

Kurama: Obey!

Gkyaku Kuchiyose!

Madara: GUH!!

Madara falls on his hands and knees, shaking...

Madara starts lifting himself up, then looks at Kurama

Madara: ...you...

Kurama: How about some more of my chakra?!

Kurama does performs a release hand seal

Madara: !! GUOH!!!!

Madara falls again, clenching his body as it feels like it's burning from the inside...

Kurama: To think it could be useful at a time like this.

Madara: GUUUOOOOH!!!!

Lee, looking at Naruto v2, then Madara: What's happening?!

Shikamaru: ...

Sakura: So that's it...

Choji, everyone else: ?!

Sakura: When the Kyuubi takes over Naruto's body, it surrounds his body in a foul chakra...

Sakura: When I got some of that chakra into a small wound, it was like a burning poison...

Sakura: My techniques couldn't heal it, and the pain could be so bad I couldn't move.

Ino: What does that have to do with Madara falling over?

Shino: I see.

Ten-Ten: Shino?!

Shino: At some point, Madara made a contract with the Kyuubi, a contract like the one I made with my bugs.

Shino: To perform a summon, you offer the animal some of your chakra in exchange. The animal takes in that chakra to keep the summon active. When the chakra runs out, the summon disappears.

Shikamaru: This works both ways. In addition to Madara being able to summon the Kyuubi, the Kyuubi could summon Madara with a reverse summoning.

Lee: So the Kyuubi tried to summon Madara?

Shikamaru: Yes, and this forced Madara to take in some of the Kyuubi's chakra.

Hinata, looking at Madara's body: The Kyuubi's chakra is spread throughout his body...

Choji, looking at his own hand in chakra cloak: Then why isn't this chakra hurting us?

Hinata: The Kyuubi gave us chakra with Naruto-kun as a medium, so this is really Naruto-kun's chakra.

Choji: Oh...

Back to Madara, who is again on the ground, now with bloodlust in his eyes

Madara, breathing heavily: ...you...ignorant...beast...

Kurama: Keh! Still acting tough?

Gaara moves in to seal Madara

Gaara: !!

Madara summons Perfect Susanoo and lunges towards Kurama

Madara, looking around: ...where's the Uchiha boy?

Madara looks at the flower: !!

Hashirama appears and Shinsuusenju punches Madara's Susanoo, pushing it away from Kurama

Hashirama: Did you forget about me already, Madara?

Hashirama looks at the flower: !!

Sasuke, smiling in a close-up, thinking to himself: so that was the Kyuubi's plan...

CS Susanoo shown holding onto one of the flower's petals

Sasuke uses the Kyuubi's chakra to create a giant amaterasu sword, and starts to swing it down onto the flower

--- IS THIS THE END OF THE MOON'S EYE PLAN? ---

END OF CHAPTER
Excellent. prediction
 
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