[Predictions] 635.Darkness That Awaits

Kishi Uzumaki

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Everything in this might really not happen in next chapter.enjoy

**(flashbacks)
Page 1
(Tsunade's body is attached together and katsuyu clone healing her)
Orichimaru: princess tsunade or should i call you old lady tsunade.
Tsunade: !?
A: (in pain)damn you . orichimaru . always persistence as a snake .
Orichimaru: should i've take it as a compliment .
Gaara: You were killed ?
Mei: by that sasuke .
Onoki: Did you stopped kabuto ? orichimaru .
Orichimaru: Tsuchikage . long time no see . No i didn't it's sasuke and someone who was with akatsuki who's from konaha just like me .
Tsunade: (weakly) sasuke-kun stopped kabuto (breaths heavily and thinks ) someone from leaf Is it itachi .

Page 2
Orichimaru: Karin . help her .
(kages try to stand but can't) (shows in 4 seperate panels)
Katsuyu clone: no . you won't (get in the way of orichimaru and karin)
Orichimaru: (creepy smile) kuku .

Page 3
Tsunade: it's ok . katsuyu .
Katsuyu clone: but
Tsunade: I know him from a long time . he came to help us .
Kages: (Surprised look)What are you saying tsunade .
Orichimaru: I think it's true.tsunade . after hiruzan-sensei you are the one who
understood me even it's a little that idiot didn't understood me at all .(nods to karin)
Karin: yes(begins transparing chakra)
(tsunade's youthful apperence returning slowly)
Katsuyu clone: (thinks) this might be helpful . tsunade-sama .

Page 4
Tsunade: i didn't understood you that much either heh. jiraiya you mean .
he spent his life going after you .
Orichimaru: and after you too . your the one who didn't like to go on a date with him .
Tsunade: (remembers)
*Jiraiya : But if i come back alive .
tsunade: (looking at him tears welling in eyes)
Jiraiya: Haha . i'm just kidding*
Tsunade:(smiles)i would have if he came back alive . It's enough .karin .
Karin: But i'm not done yet .

Page 5
Tsunade: you know i'm a medic ninja too . help the others (Thinks)she has red hair . is she an uzumaki .
Karin: yeah .
Orichimaru: kuku . are you going to use that technique. (thinks) i must examine it . might come handy .
(tsunade uses creation rebirth to heal her major wounds)
Suigetsu: (asks gaara)what happened here anyway .
Gaara: We fought madara.he defeated us and went retrive the nine-tails .
Orichimaru: first and hokages will take care of him . sasuke is there too .

Page 6
All kages and tsunade: What ?
Suigetsu: (thinks) even kages defeated . i won't stand a chance. i'm probably gonna die .
(scene changes to battlefield)
Naruto: did we defeated it sasuke ? (think) you have become more strong .
Sasuke: hm . i think we did(think)he's strong .but not as me .
Sakura: what sasuke-kun will do . (remembers)
*Sasuke: (to naruto)then i'll kill you first.*

Page 7
Juugo: i don't know. i can't read his mind .
Sai: (stern look) yes . you can't but you've been with him for while .
Juugo: (thinks) this guy he's good . (jump closer to where sasuke is) what we're gonna do now . sasuke .
Sasuke: juubi's gone . next it's madara .
Madara: kid. do you think it's easy . juubi is not dead it can't be killed .
(everybody is shocked)
Hashirama: (releases barrier) What do you mean old friend .

Page 8
Madara: why do you think sage seperated it to 9 beasts and sealed it in the moon .
Alliance: (shocked)
team 7 :(shocked)why
Madara :because it can't be killed . it will wake up again even stronger .
Minato: There must be a way to defeat it . every one has a weakness so juubi has one too ?
Tobirama: (angrily) madara ! just what your trying to do ?
Madara: (ignores him) one thing can be done it's to seal it in someone but only someone with rinnegan can seal it . namely me and obito can do it .
Minato: Obito ! how can he alive ? he died long time ago .
Madara: 4th hokage ! do you remember the one attacked the village ? it's obito uhiha .

Page 9
Minato: (little shocked) He's the masked man .
Sasuke: So his name is obito uhiha .
(in kamui demension)
Obito: you won't get rid of them . (shouts)only place you can be happy is the dream world
so i don't care a damn about them .
Kakashi: (grabs him by coller) Do you really think that .
Obito: Hahaha . Yes
(kakashi punches him on face sending him flying.obito hits on a box.)

Page 10
Obito: you know nothing . all who live in this world is trash .
Kakashi: * (remembers what obito said to him when he trying to abandon rin)

Obito: Those who break the rules are trash, but those who abandon their
comrades are worse than trash ! If I'm going to be called trash either
way , I'd rather break the rules ! And if that somehow makes me
anything less than a real shinobi , then I'll crush all of the so -
called " real " shinobi *
Kakashi: those who live in this world is trash , but those who don't care about
their friends feelings are worse than trash . i'm already trash anyway
so i don't care been trash but i'll crush all trash who don't care their
friends feelings. (kamui's himself to the battlefield)
Obito: (sits up) ok. kakashi if you won't gonna abandon this world.then let's settle this once and for all and see who's right . (follows kakashi)

Page 11
Tsunade: grandpa ! how?Hiruzan sensei . sealed them in death god .even minato .
Orichimaru: Yes . but if someone can break the reaper death seal with the cost of his life .
Kages: who'll do something like that .
Orichimaru: kuku .
Tsunade: you did that . who did you kill this time .
Orichimaru: No one . i used few zetsu to brought them back and one for me .
Tsunade: so you've senju dna now .
Orichimaru: kuku . yes . no time to explain let's go to the battlefield .
A: minato ! this would be interesting .

page 12
(in battlefield)
Naruto: dad . who's this obito guy .
Minato: He's kakashi's best friend and my student.
Sasuke: (thinks) dad . so he's your dad . naruto .
Sakura: then why he's doing this and why did he attack the village 15 years ago .
hiruzan: he died saving kakashi and rin their other teammate atleast that what
we thought if madara is right . why ?
Madara: because he loved that girl who was killed by that kakashi just like i
lost my brother . that's what made him do everything .
(team seven and others are shocked)

Page 13
Naruto: that mean he's fighting for the girl he loved ( looks at sakura )
Minato: it's my fault . i wasn't there for them.when they needed me the most .
(kamui demension opens)
Minato: get ready every one he's coming .
Naruto: Dad . that might be kakashi-sensei .
(kakashi come out)
Kakashi: naruto and sakura are you . ok .
(falls to the ground.before he fall minato come to him)
Kakashi: naruto
Minato: it's me kakashi .

Page 14
( naruto , sakura and sasuke come closer )
Kakashi: ( shocked ) sensei . how ?
Naruto: sensei . sasuke's here too . ( looks at sakura ) sakura-chan . can you heal him .
Sakura: yes . katsuyu - sama
( katsuyu clone attach to kakashi )
( kamui demension opens again )
Obito: hello . sensei
Minato: ( stands) is this because of rin . i'm sorry for not been there . obito .
Obito: it doesn't matter . sensei . ( madly ) this world is what make me suffer . i'm gonna destroy it .

Page 15
Hashirama: madara . is this what you want too .
Madara: it depends on if you can win against me .
Hashirama: then i'll defeat you first .
Madara: don't be cocky . hashirama ... i'm not the one who you use to know . i've become a god .
( hashirama jumps where madara is.madara stand up . they get in to a taijutsu fight )

page 16
Naruto: you're doing this for the girl you loved.is this she would want .
Obito: haha . you trying to do the same thing you did with nagato.i'll kill you
just like i killed konan.before that i'll kill that girl there.( points
at sakura )and every single friend of yours .
Naruto: ( Angrily look at him ) You can try that if you can .
Obito: you love her don't you i'll show you . how it feels when you lose one you love .
( they goes at each other as naruto close in obito uses shinra tensei and send him flying )
Everyone: naruto !!!
Sakura: naruto !

page 17
(but before he hit the ground minato catches him)
Minato: we're here too. naruto . don't try to handle him alone .
Sasuke: idiot . i'm here too .
Naruto: yeah . sorry . when he said that i went overboard .
Sakura: i'm coming with you too . naruto . shizune-senpai .
Shizune: i'll take care of kakashi - san .
Naruto: ( looks at her )stay closer to me . ( looks at hinata )you stay closer to
dad . hinata . i promised neji i'll protect you .
minato: i'll protect her . naruto .
Minato and naruto: let's begin this .
others of konaha 11: yeah .
(Alliance looks in awe as they go to fight obito)

End.(in every dark cloud there's silver line.let's hope they find it)
 
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Mr Hiru

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Decent. The cliffhanger needed to be more shocking.

You need to press spacebar after every comma or point because it's hard to read.

3.5/5
 

SeBa

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very very very good
i like that part with sakura ;) 5/5
 

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Wow nice prediction I like the part about NaruSaku
 
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Nice prediction but i found it a bit funny :p
 

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The grammar nazi in me wants to scream lol. xd
Once I got past it and entered your plot substance, that peeve died away rather quickly.
There are a few spots in your prediction that actually gave me goosebumps.
Not all these things were accurate and some of the characters don't seem like themselves, but this is a stalwart effort.
4.5/5
 
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