[Predictions] 629

questin1

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Naruto: what... is this power

the whirlwinds are throwing the alliance every which way, but Naruto and Bee are using their tails to stay grounded

8-tails: the power of the Juubi

Bee: yo it seems tha control they had held it at bay

8-tails: no rap bee?

Bee: not when it gets this serious fool ya fool

Naruto: how are we going to stop this, the Juubi flew up in the air

Madara: so it seems the Juubi can use the paths of the rinnegan

Naruto: what?!?!?!?! he can use the paths??

Bee: Naruto, we must take out Madara first, I'm sure he wont let us go near the Juubi

Naruto: how are we going to do it, the sealing corp went flying around??

Madara: even the kage couldnt seal me

Naruto has a pissed face

To the 5 Kage

Katsuya: Lady Tsunade

Tsunade: Katsuya, im going to send all my chakra to you to heal them

Tsuanade remembers what Dan said about not coming just yet

Tsunade: how did Dan know that I would need the chakra to heal the Kage, thats why he told me not to die yet

Katsuya: Dan-sama (she met him before the Edo tensie was released)

Katsuya starts to heal the Kage

Tsunade: one more thing

Scene change to Kakashi and Obito

Obito: Hmmm so you brought us here

Kakashi: here you cant become intangable

Obito: hm seems your right, and if I would the Juubi's destruction would be sure to hit me

Kakashi: the Juubi's destruction?

Obito: we were holding him down, but with our bond broken, lets just say the SA wont stand a chance

Obitos face is a rape face much like Madaras face last chapter

Switch back to Naruto and co

Naruto: how dare you talk about them like nothing

Naruto forms a mini RasenShuriken

Madara makes signs

Naruto throws the RasenShuriken

Madara: fire style: great dragon fire dance

the 2 jutsu clash, more on Naruto's side, the RasenShuriken only makes Madara's fire that much stronger

the fire starts to come Naruto's way

???? places a hand on Naruto's back

???: Susano'o

???: channels Susano'o to both Naruto and Bee

Naruto turns

Sasuke: still need my help huh Scardy cat

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pandu

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That was way too much action for a single chap U_U
Still I loved this part

???? places a hand on Naruto's back

???: Susano'o

???: channels Susano'o to both Naruto and Bee

Naruto turns

Sasuke: still need my help huh Scardy cat

Nice try ;)
 

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I loved it! Especially the sasuke part is really well done, obito rape face and madara rape face in just 2 chapter is overkill tho :p
 

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The last bit- Minato using FTG and rescuing Naruto would be just as cool
 

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nice work mehn... good job
 

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This is how an Double issue should be ....Sooo long and epic
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loved it ;)
 

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Scaredy cat part O_O =D. i wouldn't mind if you wrote chapter 629 just to get that part.
 
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