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Naruto 621 Prediction: Valley of the End

Clash! Hashirama vs Madara!

Hashirama: !? this is...
Madara: Perfect Susano!
Hashirama: It's enormous, even bigger than the kyuubi! Madara, the amount of hatred in your heart is shown clearly to me now...
Madara: You know nothing about my hatred, you who has everything will never know despair.
Hashirama: Why!? It doesn't have to come to this. There's still time to turn back Madara!
Madara: Impossible. Even if I stopped, I would be targeted every night for assassination, I wouldn't be surprised if it would be your coward brother.

Hashirama: Don't talk as if he's a nobody, he's my brother dammit!
Madara: And a coward who uses the Uchiha like dogs.
Hashirama: That's not t--
Madara: It's one hundred percent true! You, my closest friend, betrayed me!
Hashirama: !!?
Madara: If someone as close as you would do it, why wouldn't the world!
Madara takes out his sword from perfect susano
Hashirama: *Shit, I can't dodge*
Madara swings and destroys the wood dragon
Hashirama's body is shown ripped in pieces
Madara: .... I'm not satisfied yet friend.
The 9 tails starts charging up it's bijuu-dama aiming at the body pieces
Suddenly the 9 tails collapses
Madara: !? What?
Madara: !!!?
Madara's eyes start to shut
Hashirama comes out the ground like a tree
Madara: I..see.. a wood clone......but ..when?
Hashirama: When you gazed your eyes on my seals for the wood dragon, that gave me the opportunity to slip into the ground. You let your guard down.
Madara's perfect Susano fades and he slams on the ground near Hashirama
Madara: Then why....am I sleepy....
Hashirama: The clone you destroyed was my flower clone, it released a chemical in the air, putting you and the 9 tails to sleep. It's over.
Madara: ...ha.....good to know. Thanks.
Madara bursts into flames
Hashirama: A fire clone!?
Madara comes out of the kyuubi's mouth

Hashirama: !? How did you..
Madara's eyes are bleeding
Hashirama: No way! You used that?
Madara: Of course, it's my signature move after all.
Hashirama: Dammit...*No matter what I do...he always manages to pull off his backtrack jutsu...I can't....no..I have to.*
Madara: I will defeat you.
Madara reforms Perfect Susano
Hashirama: I won't allow it.
Hashirama starts to create flower world
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Hashirama: And...we continued to fight for the next few days...that is..until he ran out of chakra.
Sasuke: And you killed you, right?
Hashirama: No, I didn't.
Minato and Hiruzen: !?
Tobirama: !? What?
Hashirama: Allow me to explain.
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Madara impaled with swords
Hashirama on his knees with a bloody face in front of Madara
Madara: I...can't believe it....you ....
Hashirama: This entire time...I was stalling....to figure out a way....to get passed your backtrack....
Madara: How....my eyes allow me to rewind any situation at my will....explain...
Hashirama: Genjutsu.
Madara: !?? Bullshit, no one can use genjutsu on me... not even Izuna...
Hashirama: It's true...I used a secret jutsu known only to my wife...it allows me to channel illusion waves into my pollen, I made you think you re-winded an event that resulted in your death, when in reality you did no such thing...
Madara: A senju...to best me in genjutsu.....unheard
Hashirama:.....
Madara: Just...finish me....like a dog.
Hashirama grabs Madara by the arm and starts healing him
Madara: !? What? Why?
Hashirama: Because that's what shinobi do to other shinobi of the leaf.
Madara: !
Hashirama: You are not a dog....my rank may be higher, but to me everyone in the leaf are equals and should be treated no differently than others...
Madara puts his hand on Hashirama shoulder
Madara clenches it
Hashirama: What are you...
Madara: YOU ARE NOT IN THE POSITION TO BE SHOWING MERCY RIGHT NOW!
Marara rips a sword out of his chest and tries to impale Hashirama, but as he does that he freezes and collapses from the amount of blood loss
Hashirama: Disappointing....maybe I should keep you here..I won't kill you...but I won't save you.
Hashirama walks away
End panel shows Madara licking the blood of Hashirama from his hand with sinister eyes
 

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Not bad. I liked the bit of humor you added. ^.^
 

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Kishimoto should be taking advice from u
 

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Hashi helping Madara. That's a great prediction ;)
 

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FMD that was really nice to read
i do hope kishi's nxt chapter turn's out to be as close as this
+ rep bro
 

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Good read even though I don't think that there will be too much dialogue.
 

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too much dialogue, i hate fights with constant talking, attacks used wasn't great either (leave it to kishi to show what else hashirama and madara can do) but for the rest it wasn't bad
 

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i would love if the real manga would turn out like this good job
 

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Sounds epic....just hoping the questions part of everything doesn't last too much longer....I'm still curious as to what Naruto, Hinata, and the alliance are doing.
 

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Great Prediction
Hashirama healing Madara, Unexpected
Great Job
 
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