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tsunade: thank you...dan.
she flashes to naruto and nawaki.
madara: sorry kages but i'll be winning this one and taking the kyuubi jinchuriki with me. the world will fall in infinite tsukiyomi..now that i'm unbeatable.
he reactivates perfect susano.
madara: fall like all creation!
mei: s-shit!
gaara: I WON'T LET YOU TAKE NARUTO!
tsunade: kazekage...
gaara tries lifting his sand but collapses in exhaustion.
mei: lava release: magma missiles!
raikage: lightning release: hell current!
A's lightning cracks up the ground, elecrocuting anything standing on it.
madara: im going numb?
the missiles collide with the base of susano and it cracks a little.
mei: oh no...only a crack after all that?
A is punched away by the susano, and mei is hit by madara's fireballs.
mei: this'll be my last jutsu. onoki's dead on his feet. and i dont have any sealing techniques that will work on him.
onoki: tsunade, heal gaara. he is our only hope.
tsunade: naruto and dan left this to us. i'll give everything they have given me, if it will further our chances.
she pours all her chakra into gaara, healing his injuries. meanwhile onoki slaps his hands on the ground, and it destabalises.
madara: what the hell...
onoki: i made the ground around here lighter. this way, young kazekage can make more sand, and since he can fly, and you can't...we've got the advantage.
madara: interesting. but useless.
*ASURA PATH*
out of madara's arms, shoulder rockets form and blast where the kages are, just as susano retreats to a skeletal form. but suddenly a wall of sand has appeared, protecting them and stopping the rockets. tsunade's byakogou disappears again, and she falls, smiling.
tsunade: i hope....gaara can protect naruto....for i couldn't...sorry dan.
gaara: where'd he go...
mei: madara's gone?
sure enough there is nothing but trees where madara was.
onoki: everyone! be on guard! mada-
a susano sword portrudes from his chest, madara behind him, having fused with the trees on the ground. onoki spits up blood, but it hit his heart. he died instantly. madara picks up his body and throws it away like it was a dead rat.
madara: that's one down. trash.
he starts to laugh maniacally. gaara's fist crunches into a ball, of sand.
gaara: you...rotten..undead...!
madara: go away, pipsqueak.
madara tries to impale gaara with his mokuton but it seemingly goes right through him.
madara: what's this?
gaara: the last ability my mother gave me. the sand kekkei genkai grants the user to control sand, and i can make more by grinding up minerals in the ground. but what i haven't shown is that i can BECOME sand.
as gaara said, madara brings his trees back and they go right through. gaara's face hardens in bloodlusted determination.
gaara: for killing tsuchikage-sama...you'll suffer in eternal darkness miles below the earth. you'll pay for each person you've hurt. EACH ONE!
the ground swirls and begins turning into...
madara: quicksand! i underestimated him...
text: the tide turns? gaara's righteous rage!
 

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No offense but have you ever thought about spacing your sentences out? It's hard to read them when there all bunched together like that.
 

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The Gokage can try all they want but Madara can not be beaten by the likes of them no matter how much will of fire/sand/lightning/water/stone they have.
 

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Nice one, and i really liked the Gaara part.
Although i doubt it will happen. Tsunade just got her chakra back, and for her to use it like this... i am hoping she will do something impressive, that she will be the one playing the big role, living up to her name.
 

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i think we'll briefly see whats up with sasuke before it heads back into the fight with "Tobi," Naruto, Gai, and Kakashi. Either that or most of the next ch will be dedicated to a newly ready to go Madara :D
 
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