2 months later after Pain Part 2

What do you think of Part 2?

  • Its cool

    Votes: 14 60.9%
  • possible/maybe

    Votes: 5 21.7%
  • Lame

    Votes: 4 17.4%

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Part 2:

Naruto: Danzo!that bastard.....tsunade warned us about him..

Sakura: *starts tearing again*tsunade...she tried to save the village by taking on pain alone...she knew...she knew she was no match but........she wanted to fight anyway to protect us and give us time to run away....*makes mad face*she will be avenged.....

Naruto:she was defeated by pain as well im guessing?

Sakura:...no...well pain was the one who gave the final blow but she managed to heavly damage another akatsuki and she was female akatsuki...*thinks*i think her name was konan...and then after konan did some move they both ended up on the ground but pain stabbed the sword into her.....I let her die....it was my fault *starts pounding the wall making huge craks and earthquakes*

Naruto:*grabs sakuras hand before she get pound again*...sakura chan it was not your fault....there was nothing you could have done...they were beyond your level..they are akatsuki...but...ive gotten stronger and i promise you! you will never witness something like that again i will put an end to this...war..i promise....

Sakura:NARUTO IM SICK OF YOUR PROMISES! WHAT ABOUT THE ONE WHERE YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO BRING BACK SASUKE HUH!? WHAT ABOUT THAT?*SCREAMING*

Shikamaru:*steps in* stop it sakura...its not his fault...all of us will fufill our promises when the time comes..and i kno for a fact narutos not the type to give up on something

Naruto:....*sad*im sorry...i will try harder...

Shikamaru:forget about that rite now, now naruto you are going to explain to us where
were you during the destruction of konoha *lee and neji, temari, hinata and other step in from the dark*

*scene changes to akatsuki base*

Tobi: So he wasnt there?

Pain: No..he is somewhere i have no data about....but they said he will be back we will hunt him down later...

Tobi: Indeed...

Pain: Konan and me destroyed the village so when he comes back to it he should be pissed off and it he will come to us..but anyway were gona extract the 8 tails now where is the body?

Kisame:*steps in along with zetsu and sasuke* sasuke captured him but a made a mistake and the body turned into a tentacle...

Pain:!a tentacle...why did you fall for such a simple trick..?*looks at sasuke*

Sasuke: shut up anybody could have made that mistake!

Pain:*looks at sasuke with rinnegan and starts walking towards him slowely taking out
his black sword*....tobi im gona get rid of him he makes to many mistakes, you know we
can afford those..

Sasuke:!?*takes out his chidori blade*so you want to fight is that it?*

Pain:*makes angry face*your starting to get on my nerve*charges at sasuke and raises
his sword*

Sasuke:*sees the pains rinnegan and is petrified like kakashi*shit..what is this....*activates mangekyo sharingan and uses amaeratsu*

Pain:*the ameratsu bounces off pains sheild and goes back at sasuke*

Sasuke: *Stops the black flame coming towards at him*!?wtf are you?

Pain: *swings his sword at sasuke*

*the next thing you see is tobi appearing infront of both of them stopping the sword*

Tobi:stop it, this is not the time..anyway he recaptured it the body is in the back come on lets extract it

Pain:*looks at sasuke then turns away, as he walks away he says* I am god you cant kill me with your simple attacks sasuke...

Sasuke:ill..show you...!*charges at pain but pain quickly turns and kicks sasuke in the stomach*

Kisame:loser come on your no match for our leader....*walks away*

Sasuke:is on the ground *the body poofs away*good thing that was a clone...

*scene changes to raikage*

Raikage: what the hell they took my brother again and this time its for real! and they destroyed konoha THOSE BASTARDS!!! THIS TIME IM GOING AFTER THEM IM GOING TO TAKE CARE OF THEM ONCE AND FOR ALL!!

*advisers come in*:you cant leave your village your hokage...

Raikage:then im not hokage anymore i wont let me brother die....*throws hat off his head and picks up swords and puts them on his back*im leaving...

*Raikage runs with intense speed out of the front door of the village*

Raikage: THIS WILL TAKE TO LONG DAMN IT!*summens a dragon*

Dragon: what is it this time raikage?

Raikage: its my brother they have takin him....were going to resucue him*hops on dragons back*

Dragon:*flies off* ohh...ok im sorry to hear that....

Raikage: go with superspeed this is important!

Dragon:got it *flaps wings and goes flying and disapears in an instant*

*Scene changes back to akatsuki base as we see 8 tails being extracted*

Kisame:this is taking very long...

Tobi:..yes..since we have fewer members...

Zetsu: tobi raikage seems to coming towards here...do you want me to take care of him?

Tobi: no i will and then i will come back and help again *disappears*

*tobi appears outside the akatsuki layer standing on rocks*

*something crashes into the ground with intense speed and makes a big boom*

Dragon:...*gets up*

Raikage: *jumps out of the dust*

Raikage:*notices tobi dressed in akatsuki clothes*

Raikage:you bastard you took my brother! *takes at warhammer from his back*
Give him BACK!!!!*SMASHESH IT ON THE GROUND AND IT HUGE EARTHQUAKE OCCOURS*

Tobi:...so your are as strong as they say interesting...

Raikage: flame him till he dies dragon!

Dragon: got it!*creates giant flame coming towards tobi*

Tobi: *deflects it with his hands**apears in front of dragon looks into its eyes*

Raikage:FLAME HIM AGAIN!

*DRAGON IGNORES RAIKAGE*

Raikage: I said flame him! ughhhh w/e jumps in the sky raising hammer over his head and tries to hit tobi*

Tobi: *looks up* you have a nice dragon its a shame it doesnt obey you anymore...

Raikage:*turns his head at dragon*NOOO!? *looks at dragons eyes and it has a sharingan*

Dragon:...sor..sorr...s----*makes even bigger flame and it hits raikage*

Raikage:!?*raikage goes flying into boulders*

*Scene changes to Shikamaru and Naruto and others gathered around a table*

Shikamaru:..wow..you trained with fuka ive only heard legends of that sort of training...

Naruto:*smiles*yeah....its pertty cool when you say it like that....

Shikamaru:anyway naruto what will we do now theres no way we can defeat pain!

Naruto: what? we can ive trained for this im sure i can beat him....

Sakura:...shikamaru we are going to pain and thats it *slams the table*

Naruto: No...your not coming im going alone...

Sakura:!?*looks at naruto*

Shikamaru:!?

The end of Part 2!

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Everything would be okay but Dragon stuff is very very cheap... and it's after two monts? I would make it like 2 weeks later, but ofcourse it's your story
 

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Everything would be okay but Dragon stuff is very very cheap... and it's after two monts? I would make it like 2 weeks later, but ofcourse it's your story
ye the dragon i used because on foot i thought it might take long to get there and plus it gives tobi a cool look that he can control stuff with his sharingan but thanks for the advice
 

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Part 2:

Naruto: Danzo!that bastard.....tsunade warned us about him..

Sakura: *starts tearing again*tsunade...she tried to save the village by taking on pain alone...she knew...she knew she was no match but........she wanted to fight anyway to protect us and give us time to run away....*makes mad face*she will be avenged.....

Naruto:she was defeated by pain as well im guessing?

Sakura:...no...well pain was the one who gave the final blow but she managed to heavly damage another akatsuki and she was female akatsuki...*thinks*i think her name was konan...and then after konan did some move they both ended up on the ground but pain stabbed the sword into her.....I let her die....it was my fault *starts pounding the wall making huge craks and earthquakes*

Naruto:*grabs sakuras hand before she get pound again*...sakura chan it was not your fault....there was nothing you could have done...they were beyond your level..they are akatsuki...but...ive gotten stronger and i promise you! you will never witness something like that again i will put an end to this...war..i promise....

Sakura:NARUTO IM SICK OF YOUR PROMISES! WHAT ABOUT THE ONE WHERE YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO BRING BACK SASUKE HUH!? WHAT ABOUT THAT?*SCREAMING*

Shikamaru:*steps in* stop it sakura...its not his fault...all of us will fufill our promises when the time comes..and i kno for a fact narutos not the type to give up on something

Naruto:....*sad*im sorry...i will try harder...

Shikamaru:forget about that rite now, now naruto you are going to explain to us where
were you during the destruction of konoha *lee and neji, temari, hinata and other step in from the dark*

*scene changes to akatsuki base*

Tobi: So he wasnt there?

Pain: No..he is somewhere i have no data about....but they said he will be back we will hunt him down later...

Tobi: Indeed...

Pain: Konan and me destroyed the village so when he comes back to it he should be pissed off and it he will come to us..but anyway were gona extract the 8 tails now where is the body?

Kisame:*steps in along with zetsu and sasuke* sasuke captured him but a made a mistake and the body turned into a tentacle...

Pain:!a tentacle...why did you fall for such a simple trick..?*looks at sasuke*

Sasuke: shut up anybody could have made that mistake!

Pain:*looks at sasuke with rinnegan and starts walking towards him slowely taking out
his black sword*....tobi im gona get rid of him he makes to many mistakes, you know we
can afford those..

Sasuke:!?*takes out his chidori blade*so you want to fight is that it?*

Pain:*makes angry face*your starting to get on my nerve*charges at sasuke and raises
his sword*

Sasuke:*sees the pains rinnegan and is petrified like kakashi*shit..what is this....*activates mangekyo sharingan and uses amaeratsu*

Pain:*the ameratsu bounces off pains sheild and goes back at sasuke*

Sasuke: *Stops the black flame coming towards at him*!?wtf are you?

Pain: *swings his sword at sasuke*

*the next thing you see is tobi appearing infront of both of them stopping the sword*

Tobi:stop it, this is not the time..anyway he recaptured it the body is in the back come on lets extract it

Pain:*looks at sasuke then turns away, as he walks away he says* I am god you cant kill me with your simple attacks sasuke...

Sasuke:ill..show you...!*charges at pain but pain quickly turns and kicks sasuke in the stomach*

Kisame:loser come on your no match for our leader....*walks away*

Sasuke:is on the ground *the body poofs away*good thing that was a clone...

*scene changes to raikage*

Raikage: what the hell they took my brother again and this time its for real! and they destroyed konoha THOSE BASTARDS!!! THIS TIME IM GOING AFTER THEM IM GOING TO TAKE CARE OF THEM ONCE AND FOR ALL!!

*advisers come in*:you cant leave your village your hokage...

Raikage:then im not hokage anymore i wont let me brother die....*throws hat off his head and picks up swords and puts them on his back*im leaving...

*Raikage runs with intense speed out of the front door of the village*

Raikage: THIS WILL TAKE TO LONG DAMN IT!*summens a dragon*

Dragon: what is it this time raikage?

Raikage: its my brother they have takin him....were going to resucue him*hops on dragons back*

Dragon:*flies off* ohh...ok im sorry to hear that....

Raikage: go with superspeed this is important!

Dragon:got it *flaps wings and goes flying and disapears in an instant*

*Scene changes back to akatsuki base as we see 8 tails being extracted*

Kisame:this is taking very long...

Tobi:..yes..since we have fewer members...

Zetsu: tobi raikage seems to coming towards here...do you want me to take care of him?

Tobi: no i will and then i will come back and help again *disappears*

*tobi appears outside the akatsuki layer standing on rocks*

*something crashes into the ground with intense speed and makes a big boom*

Dragon:...*gets up*

Raikage: *jumps out of the dust*

Raikage:*notices tobi dressed in akatsuki clothes*

Raikage:you bastard you took my brother! *takes at warhammer from his back*
Give him BACK!!!!*SMASHESH IT ON THE GROUND AND IT HUGE EARTHQUAKE OCCOURS*

Tobi:...so your are as strong as they say interesting...

Raikage: flame him till he dies dragon!

Dragon: got it!*creates giant flame coming towards tobi*

Tobi: *deflects it with his hands**apears in front of dragon looks into its eyes*

Raikage:FLAME HIM AGAIN!

*DRAGON IGNORES RAIKAGE*

Raikage: I said flame him! ughhhh w/e jumps in the sky raising hammer over his head and tries to hit tobi*

Tobi: *looks up* you have a nice dragon its a shame it doesnt obey you anymore...

Raikage:*turns his head at dragon*NOOO!? *looks at dragons eyes and it has a sharingan*

Dragon:...sor..sorr...s----*makes even bigger flame and it hits raikage*

Raikage:!?*raikage goes flying into boulders*

*Scene changes to Shikamaru and Naruto and others gathered around a table*

Shikamaru:..wow..you trained with fuka ive only heard legends of that sort of training...

Naruto:*smiles*yeah....its pertty cool when you say it like that....

Shikamaru:anyway naruto what will we do now theres no way we can defeat pain!

Naruto: what? we can ive trained for this im sure i can beat him....

Sakura:...shikamaru we are going to pain and thats it *slams the table*

Naruto: No...your not coming im going alone...

Sakura:!?*looks at naruto*

Shikamaru:!?

The end of Part 2!

Tell me what you think
lol gud job
bu t iwill hate u if this is tru
because there is no kabuto
and how pain is giving saskue shit like come on
saskue can just use sussanon on peins ass
 

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Part 2:

Naruto: Danzo!that bastard.....tsunade warned us about him..

Sakura: *starts tearing again*tsunade...she tried to save the village by taking on pain alone...she knew...she knew she was no match but........she wanted to fight anyway to protect us and give us time to run away....*makes mad face*she will be avenged.....

Naruto:she was defeated by pain as well im guessing?

Sakura:...no...well pain was the one who gave the final blow but she managed to heavly damage another akatsuki and she was female akatsuki...*thinks*i think her name was konan...and then after konan did some move they both ended up on the ground but pain stabbed the sword into her.....I let her die....it was my fault *starts pounding the wall making huge craks and earthquakes*

Naruto:*grabs sakuras hand before she get pound again*...sakura chan it was not your fault....there was nothing you could have done...they were beyond your level..they are akatsuki...but...ive gotten stronger and i promise you! you will never witness something like that again i will put an end to this...war..i promise....

Sakura:NARUTO IM SICK OF YOUR PROMISES! WHAT ABOUT THE ONE WHERE YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO BRING BACK SASUKE HUH!? WHAT ABOUT THAT?*SCREAMING*

Shikamaru:*steps in* stop it sakura...its not his fault...all of us will fufill our promises when the time comes..and i kno for a fact narutos not the type to give up on something

Naruto:....*sad*im sorry...i will try harder...

Shikamaru:forget about that rite now, now naruto you are going to explain to us where
were you during the destruction of konoha *lee and neji, temari, hinata and other step in from the dark*

*scene changes to akatsuki base*

Tobi: So he wasnt there?

Pain: No..he is somewhere i have no data about....but they said he will be back we will hunt him down later...

Tobi: Indeed...

Pain: Konan and me destroyed the village so when he comes back to it he should be pissed off and it he will come to us..but anyway were gona extract the 8 tails now where is the body?

Kisame:*steps in along with zetsu and sasuke* sasuke captured him but a made a mistake and the body turned into a tentacle...

Pain:!a tentacle...why did you fall for such a simple trick..?*looks at sasuke*

Sasuke: shut up anybody could have made that mistake!

Pain:*looks at sasuke with rinnegan and starts walking towards him slowely taking out
his black sword*....tobi im gona get rid of him he makes to many mistakes, you know we
can afford those..

Sasuke:!?*takes out his chidori blade*so you want to fight is that it?*

Pain:*makes angry face*your starting to get on my nerve*charges at sasuke and raises
his sword*

Sasuke:*sees the pains rinnegan and is petrified like kakashi*shit..what is this....*activates mangekyo sharingan and uses amaeratsu*

Pain:*the ameratsu bounces off pains sheild and goes back at sasuke*

Sasuke: *Stops the black flame coming towards at him*!?wtf are you?

Pain: *swings his sword at sasuke*

*the next thing you see is tobi appearing infront of both of them stopping the sword*

Tobi:stop it, this is not the time..anyway he recaptured it the body is in the back come on lets extract it

Pain:*looks at sasuke then turns away, as he walks away he says* I am god you cant kill me with your simple attacks sasuke...

Sasuke:ill..show you...!*charges at pain but pain quickly turns and kicks sasuke in the stomach*

Kisame:loser come on your no match for our leader....*walks away*

Sasuke:is on the ground *the body poofs away*good thing that was a clone...

*scene changes to raikage*

Raikage: what the hell they took my brother again and this time its for real! and they destroyed konoha THOSE BASTARDS!!! THIS TIME IM GOING AFTER THEM IM GOING TO TAKE CARE OF THEM ONCE AND FOR ALL!!

*advisers come in*:you cant leave your village your hokage...

Raikage:then im not hokage anymore i wont let me brother die....*throws hat off his head and picks up swords and puts them on his back*im leaving...

*Raikage runs with intense speed out of the front door of the village*

Raikage: THIS WILL TAKE TO LONG DAMN IT!*summens a dragon*

Dragon: what is it this time raikage?

Raikage: its my brother they have takin him....were going to resucue him*hops on dragons back*

Dragon:*flies off* ohh...ok im sorry to hear that....

Raikage: go with superspeed this is important!

Dragon:got it *flaps wings and goes flying and disapears in an instant*

*Scene changes back to akatsuki base as we see 8 tails being extracted*

Kisame:this is taking very long...

Tobi:..yes..since we have fewer members...

Zetsu: tobi raikage seems to coming towards here...do you want me to take care of him?

Tobi: no i will and then i will come back and help again *disappears*

*tobi appears outside the akatsuki layer standing on rocks*

*something crashes into the ground with intense speed and makes a big boom*

Dragon:...*gets up*

Raikage: *jumps out of the dust*

Raikage:*notices tobi dressed in akatsuki clothes*

Raikage:you bastard you took my brother! *takes at warhammer from his back*
Give him BACK!!!!*SMASHESH IT ON THE GROUND AND IT HUGE EARTHQUAKE OCCOURS*

Tobi:...so your are as strong as they say interesting...

Raikage: flame him till he dies dragon!

Dragon: got it!*creates giant flame coming towards tobi*

Tobi: *deflects it with his hands**apears in front of dragon looks into its eyes*

Raikage:FLAME HIM AGAIN!

*DRAGON IGNORES RAIKAGE*

Raikage: I said flame him! ughhhh w/e jumps in the sky raising hammer over his head and tries to hit tobi*

Tobi: *looks up* you have a nice dragon its a shame it doesnt obey you anymore...

Raikage:*turns his head at dragon*NOOO!? *looks at dragons eyes and it has a sharingan*

Dragon:...sor..sorr...s----*makes even bigger flame and it hits raikage*

Raikage:!?*raikage goes flying into boulders*

*Scene changes to Shikamaru and Naruto and others gathered around a table*

Shikamaru:..wow..you trained with fuka ive only heard legends of that sort of training...

Naruto:*smiles*yeah....its pertty cool when you say it like that....

Shikamaru:anyway naruto what will we do now theres no way we can defeat pain!

Naruto: what? we can ive trained for this im sure i can beat him....

Sakura:...shikamaru we are going to pain and thats it *slams the table*

Naruto: No...your not coming im going alone...

Sakura:!?*looks at naruto*

Shikamaru:!?

The end of Part 2!

Tell me what you think
if it's a prediction then it's lame
if it's just for fun it's very good i'm impressed
 

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awesome...
but 1 question How does shika know about fuka?
u should of let kiba hit naruto and naruto just not even be effected by the hits.
 
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