[1st RolePlayer Critique] - Penguin

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RolePlayer Critique Chat
♦ Greetings to all RPers! Welcome one and all, old gen and new gen, veterans and rookies to the first ever Naruto RP Critique Chat! Through the course of this project numerous Roleplayers will voice their opinions and reviews of the subject of this fated day..none other than Penguin. Leave your comments and suggestions for the next victim and RP Critique below, and may you never fall pray to our cause. Do note that we have received prior consent of Penguin himself, and he agrees to volunteer for this trial run and has no complaints. ♦


Now without further hold ups, we present the Critics's reviews: Penguin


Nemesis/Kerry:
Penguin is a punny individual. He loves to water you down when you're alone. He strives for water, being thirstier than your average guy. However penguin has been slacking on his puns lately, though rp wise he's a pretty good water user. THOUGH, he needs some improvements! Go Punguin, go!​

Thank you Nemeis, for your kind words. Drop trip on your thirst brother.

Afro:
Penguin, the small minded moniker behind the Midwest dreamer. However odd his fascination with the useless arctic birds, his role playing prowess cannot be overlooked. Having passed Tobirama and demonstrating skill in water use, he is a Rp'er gaining momentum. But does anyone really understand the Penguin? His penguin obsession not just stopping at the name, but even continuing into his custom Justus and reportedly seducing Negative Knoght in an endeavor to gain the Penguin contract. Is he trans-Penguin or did a trip to the zoo have way too much importance to a young "Penguin"​

Loki:
Penguin has for the majority of his relevance in our coomunity been the one person to make cause for laughter. Be it his failed attempts at both water usage and puns. Right? I joke about the former, his water skills are acknowledged by many. From his own made up album revolving around other failure excuses of roleplayers to his self-proclaimed mastery of Space/Time. Though do not mistake our reviews of this person who dedicates half of his day to come up with CJ names that always include his name, what we are doing is putting him on the map. His signature bio Tobirama has made him a force to be reckoned with, if not now then in the near future. Make no doubt about his potential.​
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Jakai:
Very enjoyable to read through the RPs he makes. Despite be such an outgoing person who makes (mildly funny) puns, he can RP as the serious, level-head Second Hokage, Tobirama. I commend his skill and usage in water, sticking true to the RP. My only concern is his infatuation with flightless birds. (Those CJ Names)​

Riker Slade:

The first word that comes to mind to describe Penguin's fighting style is nonchalant. In an RP where many can find themselves overthinking or delving too deep, taking it a bit too seriously, Penguin seems to be able to avoid that line. Able to take victories with modesty and defeats in stride, he seems unfazed by any successes and losses. While plaguing the RP chat threads with amusingly bad puns(His puns are the Nicolas Cage movies of puns. So bad, you can't help but love the charm), he's made good use of his main style of Suition, consistently remaining loyal to the field of water and making it work for himself. It's amusing to see how many Penguin themed custom jutsus he's capable of making and doesn't seem to be running out of steam anytime soon.​

Under no circumstances is the public and viewers allowed to make a "roast" session out of this nor take "shots" at either the hosts or the subject/person. The RP Critique has received permission from the subject to make this happen. That aside anyone is free to comment below on the subject or the RP Critique, and how they believe it can be improved.​
 
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Black Butler

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I nominate Zero Kelvin :) he seems like he's willing to take a verbal beating.
 

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This is pretty damn funny. GJ
 

Akuma

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Thanks, it's a work in progress.
 

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I like and welcome the idea. More humor is always welcomed. Very funny Afro XD
 

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I feel like you should have a separate thread where we nominate people, then this thread would be purely for those critiques to be posted, so it's not cluttered.

But I like the idea, it's different.
 

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All suggestions are well received, thanks Rezo. You are definitely not next.
 

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This is pretty unique. Gj gj
 

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I should be on the list aswell ;___; lol nice job man
 

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Hey the Kiri Mixtape made it on here!

#Mistfits
 

21 Savage

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Awesome.... I nominate Osmon for next
 

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Thanks man. I appreciate all of your kind words ;-;

I ****ing hate you all though. I have excellent puns. :|

I also think there are a select few people who nominate others. Not the public nominating xD
 

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Thanks man. I appreciate all of your kind words ;-;

I ****ing hate you all though. I have excellent puns. :|

I also think there are a select few people who nominate others. Not the public nominating xD
I told you, you're getting better ;___;
 

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Its pretty cool. Kind of like the NB Podcast, only less vulgar and controversial :)
 

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So if we're not allowed to take shots or say mean things about somebody...that basically means that we have no choice but to compliment them?
I don't get it....
 

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So if we're not allowed to take shots or say mean things about somebody...that basically means that we have no choice but to compliment them?
I don't get it....

I nominate Scaze and for one time only, we're allowed to take shots.
 

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So if we're not allowed to take shots or say mean things about somebody...that basically means that we have no choice but to compliment them?
I don't get it....

You can say mean things if you wish. Just don't attack me personally. This is a role-play critique, not a roast.

So no, you are not forced to compliment me.
 
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