i can read it alright... but i had to watch the gif run like 5 times to catch everything =p
and don't tell me you got it in 1 try... you'd be lying to yourself.
I agree with the people ... you need to slow it down and also smooth the whole gif. The more fps you get the better, try to either make it 25/29.97/30 fps and it would look perfect. Nice first attempt though, therefore keep up the good work mate!