[Approved] 1st Bio.

JojocIaw

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Nice bio, looks clean.

Good luck in your RP career. Play fair and listen to your elders if they give you advice. Follow the rules and you will do well.
 

Mephistopheles

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Specify you don't have EIGs, that is a must.
Also, you could try to add more history and remove one of the two elements, as far as I know you can only have one element there you want to start with. Though I could be mistaking ^^

Other than that is looks good ^_^
 

CleverMonkey

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Specify you don't have EIGs, that is a must.
Also, you could try to add more history and remove one of the two elements, as far as I know you can only have one element there you want to start with. Though I could be mistaking ^^

Other than that is looks good ^_^

You are allowed to have two elements in Chuunin rank ^^
 

Gèckö

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Nice bio i think it needs a little more pictures imo
but overall well done
 
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