1st Bio - Yoru :]

spotteddawn

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Basic Information
Name: Mayonaka Hozuki (meaning, 'Midnight Demon Lantern')
Nickname: Yoru (meaning, 'Night')
Gender: Female
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Age: 17
Clan:

Looks: Llight blue hair, crimson eyes, pale skin, toned muscles
Personality: She is very shy, and prefers to stick to the shadows (hence her name). She is loyal to her village, and does what she is told. She can be weird at times, but only if you know her well enough.

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Kirigakure
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Village of Alliance: Kirigakure
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Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank:
Specialty:
Elements: Water
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Your ninjutsu:


Background Info.
History: Her belief was that her parants abandoned her as a child, but she's not sure what really happened. Although it was never important to her because for a long time in her life, all she was trying to focus on was surviving on her own. She would eat scraps and bites that others threw away or left behind. She rarely found a generous offer of food, but shelter was a bigger problem. She lived like this until the age of around 8-9, when she found a tiny and completely abandoned cottage at the edge of a waterfall near the outskirts of Kirigakure. This changed her life thereafter.
Around the age of 10, she relized her abilities, and decided to start a life of training to become strong. She was only lucky enought to find a fishing rod to get food, but it was all she needed.

Other

Picture:

Theme Song and Background Music: I'm not a big fan of "theme songs," but if i had to pick, it would be this:


Battles

Won: N/A
Lost: N/A
 
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Akuma

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You need 39 more posts to be able to make a Bio :p so i sudgest you post up, and:

Erase everything under speciality you haven't trained in anything there
-Erase everything you have under "Your ninjutsu" you haven't learned any of those either xd
-Erase the clan, you need atleast 2,400 posts for a Hozuki i think
-Erase your rank, your not even genin.
 

~Anubis~

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You need 39 more posts to be able to make a Bio :p so i sudgest you post up, and nice bio. ^^

do what he says.

And after you reach 50 posts. Remove Kenjutsu and Taijutsu as your specialties you haven't learned them yet . There's some rules for hozuki clan bio here

Remove that won part .
 

spotteddawn

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lol thanks! (i think)
I'll just save this as my "goal" for my character. I didn't relize all the rules before... I guess I was looking at the wong parts. heh.
Thank you again!
 

spotteddawn

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do what he says.

And after you reach 50 posts. Remove Kenjutsu and Taijutsu as your specialties you haven't learned them yet . There's some rules for hozuki clan bio here

Remove that won part .

Is this good? I'm not exactly sure how much should be up there, but I did what you guys told me so far :eek:
 

Scytho

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Looks acceptable to me, but I don't know the rules as well as I should lol Get those posts and resubmit and I'm fairly sure you'll be accepted. good bio!
 
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