first shot at this, so don't be to harsh haha.
i would love some advise though, I've looked up a few youtube videos on how to but still trying to improve a lot lol
Very good for the first try
I suggest you smooth out the shading by shade twice or use tissue
There's a couple of ways I'd shade my drawings
Either shade it real dark or shade it real light twice
Hope you understand what I'm trying to say lol I'm not good at giving advice