[Adventure] 00:00 Last Dawn

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Before starting I'd like to clear a few things up if you just want to skip this go to the next indention. This is my first real serious fanfic (my Juubi fanfic is just for fun and laughs. This is also completely original. Feedback would be much appreciated so I can make it better. Thanks

[00:00] Last Dawn: (00:01)-Sunrise

Prologue
In the year 2750 the world nearly escaped its own destruction. All of its technology, and all of its advancements were lost. For the next half of a millennia people struggled to live in the new world until advanced technology was discovered deep beneath the Earth's surface. Humans began to use this technology to rebuild the Earth. The three great nations Valardia, Lakeous, and Arkania built towers that reached the Moon, or rather they reached the three large man made satelites that surround the moon; Endeavor, Hope, and, Prometheous, this was all part of the Earth Preservation Project known as L.E.A.F.

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Eventually people who lived in these satellites adapted to their envronment, gained new abilities, and developed a race known as lunarians. They believed they were the superior race and should be in charge of the Earth Preservation Project; this lead to a war between the Earth and the Moon. The Lunarians were defeated and their leader Evenos in a final attempt to win the war developed a virus meant to make the host stronger, but it failed and consequently developed monsters known as nightmares that roam bothe worlds. Most of the lunarians are extinct due to this virus.
The satellites of the moon are now hosts to poor people,others that might be infected by the virus, and criminals while L.E.A.F, now a military group, is based in Valardia and on the moon itself. The technology uncovered from the past, known as the "Age of Enlightenment" has been used to reconstruct the Earth though it may be generations before they get back to the advance place it once was. It is now the year 4000.


(00:01)

A man wearing an all black robe with a hood over his head walks across what looks like the remains of a temple."So this is all...." He continues to walk over the rubble slowly as he stops between two statues. One looks like an angel praying, the other is holding a book. The mysterious man gazes at the ocean in front of him as the sun starts to rise.
"Sunrise....It will begin soon."

(In an entirely different location)-"Sigh, why can't these guys ever get the name right? It's Reaper dammit Reaper. But you gotta admit, I look good. They captured my good side." The young man is holding a picture that appears to say WANTED DEAD OR ALIVE. He has spikey red hair with slver strands on the left side, he is wearing a long grey and red jacket with black pants. He has all black gloves on as well. Below the warning is the name Rheon Ladora: 1,000,000,000 dollar bounty.

A small person wearing an orange hood that covers his face jumps up. "Rheon are you going to talk to yourself all day cause if you are im getting out of here!"

Rheon:"Eko look at this picture im sexy dammit."

Eko starts running in the other direction, "thats it im outta of here. GAAAAAHHHHH"
Rheon begins to take out two guns out from his jacket, one black and red, and the other white and red.

Rheon:"Fine I didnt need you anyway. Tell the others ill be there in time for dinner. Haha." Rheon jumps over a metal wall at of what appears to be a military post. He begins charging forward.
Officer:"I-Is that the Reaper!? Its an intruder! Everyone this is an emergancy the-"
There are four loud noises then silence. Rheon blows off his guns as he walks inside the gates. "I prefer the term guest not intruder...Sheesh people are so judgemental these days."
Sirens start to sound as a voice over the intercom starts to speak. Emergency lock down! Emergency lock down! Level 10 Security measures being deployed. Large steel doors start to slide down blocking all entrances and exits.

"Like we all haven't seen this before...." Rheon puts his guns back in the holsters and holds his right arm out. A dark aura surrounds his arm and a blade black as night appears. It is as tall as he is and about a foot and a half wide. There are also chains that wrap around the sword. Rheon grips the sword tight and makes a single lunge, all of the doors are destroyed in a matter of seconds. Rheon begins to walk towards a closed door asking for a passcode.

Intercom:"Unauthorized personal detected, locking all-"

Rheon destroys the lock on the door with his fist creating a minor explosion. "Man i swear that's the same lady who is on all automated machines." He continues to walk forward until he reaches a box. Upon touching the box a unit of about 15 officers surround him.

Officers: "You're surrounded we will shoot to kill."

Rheon just smirks and turns around, "hahaha, give me a hell of a show."

Outside Eko is still running but because he has short stubby legs he hasnt gotten very far. He looks back at the base only to see a mass explosion go off that decimates nearly 3/4 of the building.

EKO: "What the heck is he doing!?" He begins running back to the area but after 5 steps he quits. "GUUHHHH I cant do this no more", he begins eating a candy bar. Amazingly he isnt fat. It turns out he has only ran 10 meters from where he first was. He begins to lean on a tree as he sees a figure appearing from a cloud of smoke.

Rheon appears out of the smoke holding a box in one hand and a sword in the other with little to no scratches still maintaining that boyish grin. He then looks down at EKO and his grin disappears. "Why are you still here? I thought you ran away a few minutes ago?"

EKO: I did but I experienced some technical difficulties....
He finishes his candy bar and pulls out another one. He points to his foot prints showing where he ran, came back, and stopped.

Rheon: You idiot (face palms), lets get back to the rest of the gang.

EKO: (Spitting out his candy bar) HAHAHAHAHA, Did you just say gang?! No one says that. Update your slang man like for real. Hahaha, He said gang.

Rheon cocks his gun and points it at EKO.

Rheon: What was that?

EKO: I was just saying how more people should be like you with your immaculate vocabulary.<br>

Rheon: Ah shut up lets go.

In another military base located on the moon they get news of a sattelite base being destroyed

Kaiser: Another one? They are becoming more frequent. How many men survived?

Officer: Uh....zero sir..they were all wiped out.

Kaiser: Do we have any footage left.

Officer: Just this one tape sir.(Begins to play the tape...sounds of screams, explosions, fill the room)

Kaiser:Hmm pause it right there.....Rheon Ladora huh? Wait! That sword.......

Officer: Colonel Kaiser are you okay.

Kaiser: Yes im fine...don't worry men ill be on my way to Satellite Endeavor...ill stop him myself.

Kaiser walks out the room and boards his air ship. They then fly in the direction of Satellite Endeavor.
To be continued

L.E.A.F-Earth preservation organization later converted into an earth military organization.<br>
Note this is my first fanfic i took seriously if you could comment and give constructive criticism where needed i'd appreciate it. If you liked somethin doesn't hurt to say that either. LOL. Thanks

P.S next chapter should be out in about 4 days
 
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This isn't bad I would recommend you try to organize and make the FF look a little bit more cool, Like a different format and some colors, Probably pics for us to see just to have a good picture in our mind.
I liked it though and hope you make more in the future !
 

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It's interesting, but there are things I don't quit understand. I already started to imagine it and I like the concept. Keep it up :win:
 
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