[Approved] 猿飛ヒルゼン - Sarutobi Hiruzen

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Name: Sarutobi Hiruzen
Nickname: Saru ("Monkey")
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Clan: Sarutobi

Appearence:

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Hiruzen is a tan-skinned man of below-average stature with dark brown spiked hair. Since his time training the Sannin, he have a small goatee. He also have a single line running vertically under outer corners of each eye.

Prior to becoming Hokage, he wore a grey steel breastplate with shoulder guards, grey arm guards, faulds covering his upper legs, a pouch strapped to his lower back with bandages, a standard forehead protector, and a kunai holster on his upper right leg. Later, during his reign as Hokage, Hiruzen would commonly wear the official uniform — consisting of the customary hat and haori, along with a red, full-length kimono that was tied using a white sash. With age, had also taken to smoking a pipe. He also occasionally wore an orange shirt, with the kanji for fire (火, hi) on its back. His combat attire consisted of a black jumpsuit, which featured mesh segments over the lower portions of his limbs, and a green gauntlet that covered his right wrist, forearm and elbow. He also wore an armoured hood with a bandanna-like Konoha forehead protector over this, which featured two long straps.
The kanji for "Third Hokage" was inscribed onto an additional piece of metal plating on the back of his outfit, although at the time of Kurama's attack when he retired the post, it merely had the kanji for "fire" (火, hi).
He also had two shuriken holsters strapped to either side of his back.

Personality:

Hiruzen is a pacifist by nature, always looking to avoid bloodshed and violence in his confrontations.

According to Kakashi Hatake, Hiruzen loved his students deeply, including Orochimaru, no matter how far he had fallen. This ideal stems from his belief that Konoha's next generation is a precious resource that must be protected. However, it was the same belief that forced Hiruzen to allow Orochimaru to escape after uncovering his experiments in replicating Hashirama's DNA at the cost of many lives, thus unknowingly allowing his former student to commit even more tragedies. By his own admission, Hiruzen noted that he was too compassionate and indulging of a person.

Hiruzen was also bit lecherous as well, as he enjoyed spending much of his free time talking to young girls, which was his favourite pastime, and when Jiraiya was still his student, he offered to help Jiraiya test the technique that would allow the user to spy on naked women unnoticed. Even Jiraiya, in this instance, noted his sensei's perverted qualities.

He was also know for his sense of humour.

Village Info

Village of Birth: Konohagakure
Village of Alliance: Konohagakure

Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank: Jonin
Specialty: N/A
Elements:

Doton: Needs training

Katon: Needs training


Your ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

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History:


Born into the Sarutobi clan to Sasuke, Hiruzen was a prodigy who truly stood out because of his talent. He and his former team-mates, Homura Mitokado and Koharu Utatane, were students of Tobirama Senju, the Second Hokage, and Hiruzen was also trained by Hashirama Senju, the First Hokage directly. While once a close friend of Danzō Shimura during their early childhood, Danzō developed a one-sided rivalry with Hiruzen who always managed to be a step ahead of him. Shortly after the foundation of the village, Hiruzen and Danzō spar, with some of their friends watching. During the First Shinobi World War, Team Tobirama along with Danzō, Kagami Uchiha and Torifu Akimichi were pursued by enemy Kumogakure ninja. Knowing that one of them would need to be a sacrificial decoy so the others can escape, Hiruzen volunteered. However, Tobirama chose to be the decoy instead, naming Hiruzen his successor while driving a further wedge between his student and Danzō. Later in his life, he married Biwako and fathered at least two children, Asuma Sarutobi and another who has yet to be seen. His children would later make him a grandfather to at least two grandchildren: Konohamaru and Mirai.

Prior to the Second Shinobi World War, Hiruzen became the teacher of Jiraiya, Orochimaru, and Tsunade. In the anime, another one of his students was Kosuke Maruboshi, whom he taught some of his signature techniques. As Jiraiya began slacking off in his training, Hiruzen attempted to motivate Jiraiya by showing of his signature skills in the Summoning Technique, calling forth Enma. Amazed by Hiruzen's summoning, Jiraiya was indeed inspired to work harder, ultimately leading the young ninja to learn senjutsu. Coming to appreciate Orochimaru's natural talent, Hiruzen saw him as a once in a lifetime genius.He also saw the emotional pain Orochimaru went through after losing his parents. However, while explaining to Orochimaru the symbolic significance of a white snake the boy found near his parents' grave, Hiruzen unknowing caused his pupil to go down a dark road while attempting to steer him away from it. After serving as Hokage for many years, Hiruzen started looking for a successor to the title. While he hoped to be able to give the position to Orochimaru, he saw that he only was interested in the power it offered and initially he turned to Jiraiya. At the end of the Third Shinobi World War, Hiruzen sought to end the bloodshed and form a peace treaty with Iwagakure. Danzō was disgusted by this idea as so many Konoha shinobi died to win this war. Deciding to take responsibility personally for these losses, despite many in Konoha not liking the idea, Hiruzen decided to step down as Hokage. Ultimately, Hiruzen named Jiraiya's student Minato Namikaze as his successor.



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You cant specialize in kenjutsu because you haven't been trained in it and kenjutsu refers to swords not staffs. Fix that so its approvable. Besides that and some minor coding issues, cool bio. You can add 3 more elements if you like due to your rank which is Jonin not chuunin.
 

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You cant specialize in kenjutsu because you haven't been trained in it and kenjutsu refers to swords not staffs. Fix that so its approvable. Besides that and some minor coding issues, cool bio. You can add 3 more elements if you like due to your rank which is Jonin not chuunin.
the only reason i can't get into Rp, is because i've never been able to see what a sparing matching is like. Every time i see one get posted, after like 2 responses a piece, the thread dies. where can i see some good fights?
 

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You cant specialize in kenjutsu because you haven't been trained in it and kenjutsu refers to swords not staffs. Fix that so its approvable. Besides that and some minor coding issues, cool bio. You can add 3 more elements if you like due to your rank which is Jonin not chuunin.
Can I edit the bio? Or I have to make a new one?

It's mostly fine, but you can't have kenjutsu as your specialty, especially given a staff is bukijutsu.​
Can I switch to bukijutsu then?
 
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the only reason i can't get into Rp, is because i've never been able to see what a sparing matching is like. Every time i see one get posted, after like 2 responses a piece, the thread dies. where can i see some good fights?
Just find one that has more than 2 posts
Not that hard .-.
 

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the only reason i can't get into Rp, is because i've never been able to see what a sparing matching is like. Every time i see one get posted, after like 2 responses a piece, the thread dies. where can i see some good fights?
Go read a battle test. Some of those are beastly.

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No Kenjutsu speciality. And you're a Jounin. Just edit that, and your bio will be fine. Also, there's coding at the bottom you need to fix.
 

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Looks good. You can't specialize in elemental ninjutsu though because you need training in it. Even then you're only allowed to specialize in two elements. In general you can't have any specialties because you don't have any training. The elemental kanjis are a tad big. Other than that, you're ready to go.

You're allowed to have up to two bios so you could make another one if you like. Be sure to participate in Konoha town and the RP chat. Play the forum game section to get your post count up faster. Once your bio is approved, hit up some sensei and senpai for training.
 

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the only reason i can't get into Rp, is because i've never been able to see what a sparing matching is like. Every time i see one get posted, after like 2 responses a piece, the thread dies. where can i see some good fights?
Go read a battle test. Some of those are beastly.

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No Kenjutsu speciality. And you're a Jounin. Just edit that, and your bio will be fine. Also, there's coding at the bottom you need to fix.
Battle tests by far are the best kinds of fights you should take some time to read. But as far as regular sparring matches go, yeah some of them do die out fast. Yanks suggested you look for the ones with more posts but some of them end up being spammed so be careful choosing which ones to read. If you are curious, you can always ask one of the senseis to link you to one of their battles since most of them get in spars. I hope that you really consider joining the rp as it is a great experience and a great way to meet new people. If you are ever interested, I would like to help walk you through it and get you started.

And to the op, Hiruzen is a wonderful character to rp with and a nice summon. If you ever decide to make an update for Hiruzen, I already have a nice looking bio made for you to use. Take care, have some fun training, and work hard so that one day you can best you can be. :3
 
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