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"Vengeance isn't a reason to fight! But you hurt people who were very dear to me! And you're going to pay for it!"


~*---Basic Information---*~

Name: ネリエル・トゥ・オーデルシュヴァンク, Nelliel Tu Odelschwanck| Nara
Nickname: Hotty ;)
Gender: 200% Female, no lesbian
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Age: 20+
Clan: Nara
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Looks: Nel is a female women that has hazel eyes and short green hair. When she was a child, her eyes incredibly wide, the canines on her lower jaw were larger than usual, and she wears a cartoon-like skull on her head. A crack runs along the left side of the skull and four teeth on the left side of the skull are broken off. She has a large scar coming down from her forehead to her nose and a crimson line that stretches horizontally across her face below her eyes. Her clothing consists of a simple green gown with a hood which covers her entire body.
When she grew into an adult, she becomes a curvacious woman with long waving green-blue hair, retaining similar features to her child form, including the scar and the crimson line that runs across her face, but her bottom canines aren't quite as pronounced. Her gown is now torn into a skirt and a top, and her skull mask differs slightly, its features appearing sharper and less cartoonish with a pair of curved horns but still missing some of its teeth. A large "3" is tattooed on her back, her favourite number.

Personality: When Nel was young, her appearance was in stark contrast to her vocabulary, which contains a number of bizarre phrases and words one wouldn't expect such a small child to know, such as calling her uvula a "throat penis" and referring to herself as a masochist. This is supposedly because of Nel's young hobby of liking to eavesdrop on adults conversation, thus learning a few words. Along with a superior intellect, she managed to remember many terms and big words. :cool: She seems to speak with a lisp when she was a child, frequently pronouncing "S"s as "T"s.
As an adult, she is much more mature, composed, logical, sophisticated, and intelligent than her child form. She is also relatively level-headed in terms of how to fight, stating that if one's excuse for a battle is to fight out of hatred, prejudice, or simple competition, then it is merely instinctual and animalistic, and that it makes the challenger look "childish," "unworthy," and "not much of a warrior". Nelliel is somewhat pacifistic, and according to her, has despised engaging in combat even when she has grown up. However, this is nothing more as an excuse to not fight as she is simply to lazy too. Unless it involves self-defense and protecting those dear to her heart, Nel would never pick a fight and would rather settle it calmly. She refuses to finish off weaker or injured opponents, and will stop fighting them once they've been disabled or incapacitated. She finds it to tiring to do and that it is not honourable.
Nelliel is relatively calm and silent when fighting, preferring to speak only when spoken to. She takes her time thinking up strategies to fight using her superior intellect. She is even shown to enjoy reading, somewhat an uncommon habit for the naturally lazy Nara Clan.
Nelliel is a loyal, respectful, and trustworthy warrior, who will diligently follow the orders of her commander, provided said commander has proven his worth.
She's also knowledgeable, analytical, easygoing, fairly compassionate (usually towards her friends), humorous in her own right, and exhibits a cheerful, energetic demeanor when off-duty.

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Village Information

Village of Birth:
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Konohagakure
Village of Alliance: N/A

Rank/Chakra Information

Ninja Rank: Jounin
Specialty: Medical training in progress
Elements:
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Your ninjutsu:
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-B-rank|
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-C-rank
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

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Back Ground Information​
History:

The Tale of Nelliel Tu Odelschwanck

Nel was born roughly a few years before the Kyuubi attacked and rampaged upon Konoha. Her parents died in their efforts to subdue the Tailed Beast and Nel was left an orphan, although that was not before Nel learned a few classy words from them. She grew up together with the Nara Family. Although she was well cared for and led a good life, she always felt out of place. As such, to make her feel better, she tries to act funny and cheerful like Naruto. It was inevitable that she would still be jealous. Whenever she was envious of others having parents, she would run away from the Nara Family for a few days. When she matured, she tries not to act childish and becomes more quiet and silent. She spends most of her time in the forest, as a child and as an adult, away from the family and tended to the deer. She went to the academy as per normal, and graduated at the age of 12 as one of the bottom in class. Although she had a superior intellect, she was just too lazy to try and score well.
Nel led a normal life, rather lonely, for over 20 years. When she turned 21, she fell in love with a rich man in the village. The rich man wanted to marry Nel, and thus their marriage was arranged. However, on the day of the wedding, the rich man found out about Nel's bad family background and that she was an orphan. The rich man's parents disallowed their marriage and they were forced to part. Nel, unable to contain her feelings, ran away from the Hidden Leaf Village for 5 years.


Nel comes back to the Hidden Leaf
Nel returned to the Hidden Leaf Village, 5 years after she ran away. On her journey, she has put away her past and put her unfortunate childhood behind her. She has seen ninjas that have suffered the same fate, much worse, and Nel thinks that if they can forgo their past, why can't her? When she returns to the Hidden Leaf, the Nara Clan prepared a feast for her, trying to cheer her up and welcome her back. From that day on, Nel became more friendly, but still retains that cool personality :cool:. She spends most of her time in the forest still, and wonders everyday about the next day. To be Continued.....................


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Nel carries a sword with her that is strapped to her waist at all times.
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Her sword is a standard katana with a green sheath and a tsuba that resembles a pair of crescent moons joined together at the back. It has no special abilities.
Theme Song and Background Music:


Battle Information

Won: ...
Lost: ...

Note: This will be my second bio. The history is rushed alright, it will get longer as I update this bio.


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-Medical training note added-
 
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We have no active Nara senpai's unfortunately, you may want to hold off on submitting this.
 

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Re: (ネリエル・トゥ・オーデルシュヴァ? ??ク), Nelliel Tu Odelschw

We have no active Nara senpai's unfortunately, you may want to hold off on submitting this.
I don't mind lol...Caliburn will take some time on approving the bios since apparently he is taking a break for the New Years.
 

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Shikarmaru: Welcome back! We've been waiting for you!! :D
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Nice bio man
 

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Nice bio.
 

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i like tits...
 

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wow awesome bio
 

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I'm not all too sure if this is true, but considering this bio says it's an orphan into the Nara clan, and not technically a part of it you wouldn't even be able to learn the techniques. Someone may know more about it though, but it's just my logic. :3
 

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Re: (ネリエル・トゥ・オーデルシュヴァ? ??), Nelliel Tu Odelschw

Shikarmaru: Welcome back! We've been waiting for you!! :D
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Nice bio man
Thanks you
You dont mind waiting 3 months to maybe get trained? O_O
Nope. When you have the passion for the clan, you will wait U_U
Nice bio.
Cheers!!! :D
i like tits...
Agreed xd
wow awesome bio
I noe :cool: Thx
This conflict is getting worse and worse
There wasn't a conflict!!! :rolleyes:
I'm not all too sure if this is true, but considering this bio says it's an orphan into the Nara clan, and not technically a part of it you wouldn't even be able to learn the techniques. Someone may know more about it though, but it's just my logic. :3
No...Her parents were from the Nara Clan, and when they died, the Nara Family just continued to look after her, geddit?
 

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meh im going to demolish this with my bio update
 

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Awesome bio. ^.^
 

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Awesome bio ^_^
One thing I noticed you was when you said
"Nel carries a sword around him that is strapped to her waist at all times."
You need to make him to her
 

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Re: (ネリエル・トゥ・オーデルシュヴァ? ??), Nelliel Tu Odelschw

meh im going to demolish this with my bio update
Don't kill me, pretty pretty please. :pwease:
Awesome bio. ^.^
Thx xd
Awesome bio ^_^
One thing I noticed you was when you said
"Nel carries a sword around him that is strapped to her waist at all times."
You need to make him to her
Fixed it. Thx dude :D
 

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Nice bio man good luck
:)
 
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