[NW] うずまきメンマ - Uzumaki Menma v2


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Basic Information
| 基本情報 |

Name| Menma
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Clan: Uzumaki

A P P E A R A N C E |
Menma looks virtually identical to Naruto, though his blond hair has become black having given into hatred, and he wears it in a longer and more shaggy-looking style, similar to his father's. He also has darker and more feral-looking whisker marks, and dark circles under his eyes. He also does not have the Eight Trigrams Seal on his abdomen.

When initially appearing as the mysterious "Masked Man," he wore a white kitsune mask, a dark blue-grey robe with grey lining and a fur collar, and a tattered grey-blue cape emblazoned with his personal emblem: a mandala comprised of nine reddish-brown circles of varying sizes atop a larger green-grey circle. After revealing his identity, he discarded the robe and mask, beneath which he wore no shirt, fingerless opera-length black gloves wrapped in studded red-brown leather straps, baggy black pants, and red-brown sandals.

P E R S O N A L I T Y | Unlike his counterpart, Menma is cold, vengeful, and arrogant. He has a deep hatred for the people who treated him badly for no apparent reason, just for simply being the Jinchūriki of Kurama. However, he does not blame Kurama for his pain, despite his negative traits, Menma has a sense of honor. He only wants to get revenge on the people who treated him badly, not the ones who are innocent. As a Jinchūriki, the only thing Menma cares about is his own kind; other Jinchūrikis or people who are similar to Jinchūrikis; being outcasts, he dislikes people in general who don't care about there comrades/allies or are only using them for their own ends.

Land of Fire
Rising Cloud (175)

Chakra Information
| ランク |

HP: 160 | CP: 2600

土遁, Doton
火遁, Katon
雷遁, Raiton
水遁, Suiton
風遁, Fūton
漿遁, Purton
業火, Jigokuton
漿遁, Pursmaodoton
油, Toads
白澤, Hakutaku
忍術, Ninjutsu
剣術, Kenjutsu
体術, Taijutsu

幻術, Genjutsu
隼, Bijutsu
体術, NB Taijutsu
体術, Satsui no Hado
体術, Drunken Monkey Fist
体術, Bullet Arts
体術, Infinite Sword Style
体術, Way of the Barrier
封印, Fūinjutsu
禁術, Kinjutsu
医療, Medical Ninjutsu
仙人, Sage Mode

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  • Single Handseal Specialist:
    You can perform techniques of the skill you chose to specialize in by performing a single ( 1 ) handseal, that is still double-handed except when specifically stated otherwise in the technique. This can be applied to Advanced and Custom Elements that are composed of basic elemental affinities. (Wind Release)
  • Increased Damage Resistance:
    Your body is capable of reducing D rank damage ( 20 damage ) from Ninjutsu/Taijutsu attacks, from physical elements and ninjutsu skills and taijutsu skills that you specialize in.
  • Apex Clone Specialist:
    Limited to Ninjutsu-related Specialties. You can have Shadow Clones and variants that return up to 75% more chakra when dispersed. This also allows you to utilize the Forbidden Shadow Clone jutsu without requiring Kinjutsu.
  • Sage Master:
    The user is able to enter Sage Mode passively, no longer counting towards their allowed moves per turn OR the user is able to gain 20% more chakra when entering Sage Mode. // Naruto Uzumaki bios are able to instantly activate with 20% of their maximum reserve and up to 50% of their reserve. He is also able to use Sage Mode with his Bijuu Modes, the effects stacking together barring speed increases.
  • Assassination Fist CFS:
    Users of this style gain +4 boost to their base speed and gain a cloak of dark nature chakra of their own color when under the style's influence.
Nine Tails Jinchuuriki

  • Kurama has an enormous supply of chakra compared to even other Bijuu and Jinchuriki. Due to his massive chakra pools, the Jinchuriki gains an additional 1000 chakra.
  • Kurama is unique in that he has alternative Incomplete/Complete Modes that covers his Jinchuriki in golden chakra and black seals when incomplete and in complete form it changes into a golden Kyuubi with even more black seals, respectively deemed Nine Tailed Chakra Mode and Tailed Beast Mode.
  • Complete mastery over the Wind and Fire elements without the use of handseals in the Tailed Beast Mode.
  • The ability to sense the "evil" intent in people when in all chakra modes, no matter how good the opponent is disguised or hid his chakra, over incredible large distances, sensing beings entire countries away ( up to 5 landmarks away ).
  • The ability to shape the chakra around him of all chakra modes to create chakra arms that can extend very far, for a variety of techniques, mainly Rasengan variations or create a large arm that can be used to throw heavy boulders.

Nature Transformation
Menma has mastered all five of the basic elements and can easily convert his chakras to one of those elements when the need arises.. He has an affinity for the Wind Release, and is easily capable of preforming techniques of the nature with a single handseal. He has also learned to combine these natures into much more powerful elements. With the combination of Lightning and Fire he could create Plasma, and while jampacking his fire chakra with raw chakra he would superheat his fire in order to create the Hellfire Release. By combining all elemental natures he can create Plasmoid, and can utilize Moondust by combining Earth, Wind, and Lightning.

Menma is one of the very few ninjas to have such a high aptitude for hand to hand combat that he was deemed worthy to obtain the Elder Kaito's teachings and receive the Sixth Sense. He can easily dispatch numerous foes quickly, using a variety of martial arts to overwhelm them. He has mastered the Satsui no Hado, (Assassination Fist) and is labeled a Master of the style. Due to his past, he can quickly access the dark-nature chakra to improve his hand-to-hand significantly. When consumed by the desire to win and utterly destroy the opponent, his dark intent floods into his chakra making it dark and corrupting. This symbolized by the change of his chakra into a black hue. As a master and specialist of Menma is much faster than the average master level strong fist user gaining an additional +4 to his base speed. When complete strength is needed, Menma has mastered the of the Bullet Arts fighting style. He uses Scarborough Fair to deal devastating blows combined with gunfire.

Menma spent a great deal of time training and studying ninjutsu. He is a master of the Sage Arts and has a summoning contract with the Toads of Mt. Myobokzan. Menma has learned medical ninjutsu and seeks to use it as a means of redemption. Menma's proficiency in ninjutsu is second to none, and as Shadow Clone specialist, Menma can not only create one additional clone but also receives a larger portion of his chakra back than normal shinobi. Menma is one of the few capable of using the Rasengan and it's various techniques.

Warring States Era
Scientific Tools:
( Abusōbu Ude ) - Absorption Arm
Type: Tool
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A ( 40 chakra per use )
Damage: N/A
Description: A cyborg attachment to the user's body, the user has a robotic limb that allows for him to create spheres of energy that are capable of absorbing chakra up to S rank level. These spheres are capable of dealing brute force on impact as well, growing to large heights, up to 4 meters in radius. Starting at roughly rasengan size, these spheres grow proportionally to the size of the technique absorbed. Normal Ninja are able to make use of one of these devices via specialized gloves that allow them to absorb 1 Ninjutsu per turn up to S rank while Cyborgs have these attachments and are able to absorb up to Forbidden powered attacks and 1 from each arm per turn.

Note: Can be used a max of 3 times for Ninja and 6 for Cyborgs.
( Kemuri Senkōdama ) - Smoke-Flash Bombs
Type: Tool
Rank: N/A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Similar in use to the smoke and flash bombs respectively, this tech dazes the senses by emitting a powerful sound and light. It was powerful enough to block even enhanced senses of sight and hearing, leaving those with vision and sound based sensing useless. It's major downside, however, is that due to affecting a wide area, allies could also be caught in the blast radius if not warned beforehand. Due to the mass amount of chakra released from the explosion, chakra based sensing dilate also left useless. These are also able to negate B rank and below technological sensing devices as well.
Note: User can have up to 3 max while Cyborgs have up to 6.

Seruvitora - Servitora
Type: Tool
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 5 per copy
Damage: N/A
Description: Servitora is a unique ninja tool split into small series of mirrors shaped like regular octahedrons, floating thanks to a ring of the user's chakra. When activated, they create three-dimensional copies of the user. Should a mirror be destroyed, its corresponding copy will disappear, too. As the user's chakra interacts with the mirrors, they reflect the chakra like they would light waves projecting a three-dimensional copy of them, however, these copies are only optical illusions similar to the E-ranked Clone Technique. As such, they cannot harm an opponent but are useful in disorienting them since they will be unable to discern which is the real one or where the next attack will come from. Each clone also possesses the user's chakra signature making it difficult for chakra sensors and even a Sharingan user to determine which is the real one. Since the duplicates are reflections, left and right will be inverted; however, if a copy is reflected, left and right will be inverted again, thus matching the user's image perfectly. Further confusion can be created if the user switches their own left and right with a disguising technique. This tool automatically creates up to 4 of these optical illusion clones at the beginning of every battle unless the user chooses not to activate it.
Regular ninja may carry four of these into battle, only two copies allowed on the field at one time.
Cyborgs may carry up to 8 and are capable of having four copies on the field at one time.

Senryuu | Whirling Dragon
Type: Tool
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40 per bullet
Damage: 80 per bullet
Description: Senryuu is a firearm ninja tool that was developed with a unique firing mechanism that allows its jutsu bullets to be shot with cannon like force traveling to mid range extremely quickly. By whirling the weapon around, the firing pin is able to rotate the barrel allowing it to fire its next bullet. This whirling motion is how the weapon got its name. The weapon has six loading chambers for the user's chakra. When the weapon is fired, it draws upon additional chakra for the firing mechanism building up the force behind the blast and a ring of kanji propels the bullet forward. Due to the force of the blast, the user is only capable of firing one chakra bullet a turn, counting as a move otherwise they would risk recoil damage. The blast is so powerful it is capable of completely neutralizing up to S-rank jutsu (within reason). Although the bullets are powerful, they have no penetrative force, but can still cause significant blunt force trauma if the target were to take a direct hit. Senryuu is a unique weapon due to the fact it can utilize other bullet ninjutsu that's only possible with a firearm. Senryuu's main ability is also derived from its name. After performing the whirling motion to prepare the technique, the user can shoot their own preexisting basic elemental jutsu or surface (naturally occuring) on the field which fills that medium with the chakra from the user's chakra bullet transferring said chakra into the medium. This then causes a dragon to be created out of that medium with the same elemental properties of the jutsu or area shot and counts towards the user's move count. These dragons are equal to S-rank and will last a maximum of two turns, however they are fully sustained by the injection of chakra during the time they are used. While the dragons are in use, the user may not use any additional elemental technique that is of the same chakra nature as the dragon which would follow the strengths and weakness of the respective element.
-Only one dragon may be on the field at a time.
-Only one jutsu bullet per turn, which travels at the speed of the average Lightning jutsu, the chakra bullets can only be used to neutralize up to three S-rank techniques per battle.
-The user must wait two turns between using the dragon technique, this ability may only be used three times per battle.
-Senryuu is also capable of using other bullet ninjutsu.

Sukābarafea | Scarborough Fair
Rank: S
Type: Tool
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 10-40
Damage: 20-80
Description: The Scarborough Fair is a set of four large caliber handguns that act as the user conduits for chakra. These handguns are based upon the Derringer a gun capable of rapid fire, simple, and rugged. These four guns have been crowned with the names Parsley, Sage, Rosemary, and Thyme. Pushing the user's hand to hand ability to its limits, when combined with the user's chakra, the guns' rate of fire and stopping power are incredible. The user will makes use of these four weapons by holding two in their hands and two connected to the back of the user's feet which are fired through the use of chakra. To stay loaded at all times, the guns passively drain up to 40 chakra (10 each) per turn. Each weapon holds up to 40 chakra magazine at which points the weapon will stop draining/accepting additional chakra. During development, Ninja Scientists recognized that some situations may require more immediate offensive output, so chakra can be actively loaded by the user by sacrificing one of their moves to fuel one or more of the handguns with chakra. This chakra can be spread among the weapons to load multiple at a time, but can only distribute up to 40 chakra between the weapons and can be done within the time frame of another technique. This allows the user to quickly stockpile the bullets damage resulting in a more powerful bullets as the need arises. Naturally, as long as the weapons are loaded with chakra they can fire chakra bullets up to S-rank depending on the amount of chakra used. It should be noted, that the user may also not expend more than 40 chakra from Scarborough Fair per turn which may be spread among the handguns as needed. These chakra bullets may be elemental or raw chakra, but this must be stated prior to the release as only a single element may be used in a turn. In the turn the user fires bullets from one of the weapons, they expend one of their moves per turn but may fire multiple simultaneously. This means the user will not be able to fire more than three of the weapons per turn. The main focus however behind these weapons lies in the fact they are held and mounted in such a way, they can be used to aid the user's melee combat. Users can supplement some taijutsu by firing the weapons in a way they act as propulsion for their movements. The propulsion increases the speed of the technique, which in turn increases the damage by half the amount of normally ranked jutsu at the expense of chakra within the weapon and thus a move allowing for more powerful strikes. For example, if the using an A-rank taijutsu, the user can supplement it by firing 10 chakra from the chosen handgun. This translates to +10 extra damage to the technique alongside additional flurries of chakra bullets which may cause collateral damage for those in close-range of the propulsion blast. This happens within the same time frame of the taijutsu when used this way, and one or more weapons may be fired if the technique permits it, each weapon fired counting as a move. There is a maximum to this however, as the user may not exceed a +40 damage threshold (S-rank) added to the taijutsu.
Bullets respect the elemental strengths and weaknesses but as mentioned the user may not expend more than 40 chakra from this weapon per turn. This can be done in single fire or semi automatic fashion. When fired semi auto, the resulting damage will be spread among the number of bullets fired as mentioned by the user during their turn.
S-rank applications cause Scarborough Fair to go into a cool down sequence, preventing usage for two turns.
(Chōten Zeitaku) – Apex Opulence
Type: Weapon
Rank: Forbidden
Range: N/A
Chakra: 150 (-40 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: A magnificent diamond that was presented as a wedding gift at an unknown Daijo-daijin’s wedding over four centuries ago. The Apex Opulence is a priceless artifact that even the wealthiest of Daimyo and Warlords feel pressured in buying. At the time of the Daijo-daijin’s death, he sealed his and his wife’s soul within the diamond that would, in effect, allow them to be together for eternity in the grandeur that was the Freehold. The gemstone was passed down from administration to administration until it was finally lost when the Kyuubi razed Chungsu, leading the Apex Opulence into the hands of the Witchwood Company. The gem allows the user to summon the souls of the two unnamed rulers into battle to serve the user for six turns in exchange for an immense amount of chakra. While the Apex Opulence is active and their souls are summoned, the user cannot have other summonings on the battlefield. If there are summonings present when the Apex Opulence is used, they will be automatically dispersed. The two souls are bound as one; this means that while they operate as two entities, should one be dispersed then the other will be as well. As spiritual entities, the souls of Apex Opulence can only be interacted with by Yin-Yang or Senjutsu, much like the Hands of Sloth. However, they can be perceived as normal spectral beings. Neither speak or communicate with the user, but they share a mental bond that allows the user to issue their commands. The Apex Opulence is immune to Fuuinjutsu of all types, and can perform elemental Ninjutsu without hand seals, including all elements that the user knows. These techniques are enhanced by 30 additional damage, and do not draw upon the user’s chakra reserves. Unlike the spirit’s incorporeal form, the techniques they produce can be interacted with as normal. Both spirits move at quadruple the speed of a Jounin shinobi. The Apex Opulence can be used twice per arc.
( Guru'dan no Zugaikotsu ) – The Skull of Gul'dan
Type: Artifact
Rank: A
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 100
Description: Thought to be the calcified skull of a prominent cultist and self-proclaimed warlock the Skull of Gul'dan is an artifact of renown. Appearing as a bone-white, weathered skull merely holding the skull in one's grasp causes a cold chill to radiate through the body and down the spine as if the skull is trying to take control of the wielder. Three times per arc, with a four turn cooldown the wielder is able to hold the skull aloft sacrificing a portion of their health to call upon the latent power that remains in the skull. By extending it toward their opponent the wielder can spend forty health to summon forth two beams of wicked diseased energy that bursts forth from the empty sockets of the eyes in a straight line. This energy travels at 2.0x the user's current speed and is able to make sharp turns at a right angle allowing the beams to change direction in the middle of their travel. The beams deal a cumulative 100 damage to anyone stricken by them and leave the stricken person feeling sick, and lethargic reducing their speed by half for two turns.
| 歴史 |

Menma was born as the son of his world's version of Minato Namikaze and Kushina Uzumaki. However, unlike Naruto, the events of the Nine-Tailed Demon Fox's Attack didn't result in his parent's deaths and Menma has his parents in his life. He had a stable and loving childhood with his parents. He enrolled into the Academy and became a genin and then a chūnin. At some point, the Black Nine-Tails was safely removed from Kushina without her death and soon after sealed inside Menma, who later mastered its power.

For unknown reasons, Menma became a missing-nin, though this was notably something fairly recent since both Menma's parents and his friends were unaware that he had left the village and that Naruto had taken Menma's place in Konoha. In addition, Menma kidnapped shinobi with unique abilities, which attracted attention from other villages and deemed him as an S-ranked criminal. He soon met Tobi who tells him all about his Eye of the Moon Plan and agreed to help him. From there, targeting the jinchūriki of his world, Menma defeated his reality's Yugito Nii.
Wins | Lost
2 | 1

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