I prefer this style wayy more compared to your "darker" style, Gothic Daniel has blossomed into rainbow and unicorn Daniel
I'm not really finding alot of things to talk about on the negative aspect about this tag, so that's a good thing on your part, or because the tag size is small
Alright, the size of this tag is a bit on the negative side in terms of showing off your skills because there's a smaller amount of canvas area to work with.
I don't see a main lighting area in this tag, or maybe
I'm getting older :3
To enhance your lighting, fill a new layer with black and set it on linear dodge, then use a soft brush with the color that you wanna highlight and after adding lights, adjust the opacity to your liking. Also, you could try highlighting focal points in the tag, or points where the areas that need light by using a white softbrush on the specific areas and setting the layer to overlay.
I really like what you're doing with the depth, with the foreground C4D's being blurred and the background being blurred (though the background is a tad too intense), nice touch anyways
Alright, now you know what brings this tag down already; yes its the text

The font choice for the word "medieval" is alright, but the other one is just horrible...Vivaldi? What were you thinking?

Anyways, you'll get better with experience

The render's better suited for a vertical tag, not a long vert though, but the placement is against the focal rule.. but meh..
KIU and thanks for trying to improve the quality of the DH threads!