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the bags under her eyes make her look old, also im unsure why you drew the entire ear, if you where going for slight realisticness then the hair would hide the ear, but its looks amazing well done
 

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I agree I think the ear should be covered by the hair and that her neck is a bit too long. Besides that there's something weird about her arm? I mean it looks like it's curving in a c-like form which would be unnatural for most humans ;)

Other than that I think it's pretty and has potential. I like her hair and the “subtle” shadows on her neck and in her face. With that said I don't think the bags/shadows under her eyes are too much. It gives more depth to the character that she isn't “too perfect”.
So all in all I think it's a nice drawing :)
 

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It looks defiantly good, but like the other says. The ear and neck is way to noticeable. As well it looks like she have a really big 'Adam's apple' or what it is called in English.

But amazing job ^^
 

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Ok if someone already said the critic you dont need to repeat it again. Nice work btw. And im pretty sure 90% of the people that posted here dosent even draw and their just sad that they dont have this wonderful talent so they decide to critic other people work.
 
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the bags under her eyes make her look old, also im unsure why you drew the entire ear, if you where going for slight realisticness then the hair would hide the ear, but its looks amazing well done
xD
her neck looks way too long. she is like Oro in a female body xD
lol
Good job! :win:
^_^
I agree I think the ear should be covered by the hair and that her neck is a bit too long. Besides that there's something weird about her arm? I mean it looks like it's curving in a c-like form which would be unnatural for most humans ;)

Other than that I think it's pretty and has potential. I like her hair and the “subtle” shadows on her neck and in her face. With that said I don't think the bags/shadows under her eyes are too much. It gives more depth to the character that she isn't “too perfect”.
So all in all I think it's a nice drawing :)
fuk you! ^^
It looks defiantly good, but like the other says. The ear and neck is way to noticeable. As well it looks like she have a really big 'Adam's apple' or what it is called in English.

But amazing job ^^
you too! ^^
damn, you guys are getting so critical. it's good drawing, keep working at it
ty ^^
Nice job the necks length is way too noticeable but it's amazing.
fuk u too! ^^
Ok if someone already said the critic you dont need to repeat it again. Nice work btw. And im pretty sure 90% of the people that posted here dosent even draw and their just sad that they dont have this wonderful talent so they decide to critic other people work.
^_^
Loving it, the face is well done, awesome work! :win:
thanks!
 

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<div class="bbWrapper">Now this is beautiful! I love her face, and her hair. The only issue I have is the lame tattoo on her shoulder. I think you should've left that out, but what do I know! Hahaha! Excellent job as ALWAYS! &lt;3</div>
 

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this is seriously good (awesome use of the pencil and very clean), am a fan. keep up the good work *_*

not trying to take anything away from your great work (just an advice), if you have the patience to change it then think bout making the neck a bit shorter. maybe going over the main lines with a black water coloring pen (sharp/clean black lines), the last thing i have to say is YOU GOT STYLE lol.
 
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Now this is beautiful! I love her face, and her hair. The only issue I have is the lame tattoo on her shoulder. I think you should've left that out, but what do I know! Hahaha! Excellent job as ALWAYS! <3
lame lol :p it serves muti-purpose,for general,its a Ace of Spade! ;)
great work...^^
thanks man! =D
Awesome work, keep it up ^^
ty ^_^
this is seriously good (awesome use of the pencil and very clean), am a fan. keep up the good work *_*

not trying to take anything away from your great work (just an advice), if you have the patience to change it then think bout making the neck a bit shorter. maybe going over the main lines with a black water coloring pen (sharp/clean black lines), the last thing i have to say is YOU GOT STYLE lol.

ahan...thanks!
xd
 

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Hi SuuI. Nice ava. =D
Me thinks it's ok to see some ear cuz I know that even when some hair covers my ears, my ear can still show through. The arm is ok, she is just a very thin gurl. And ya the neck, blah blah ... :dunno:
keep at it. you're doing guud. :ilu:
 

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Hi SuuI. Nice ava. =D
Me thinks it's ok to see some ear cuz I know that even when some hair covers my ears, my ear can still show through. The arm is ok, she is just a very thin gurl. And ya the neck, blah blah ... :dunno:
keep at it. you're doing guud. :ilu:

Oh cassi :hug: lol that awesome moment when you find someone with same font style as urs!! xD
still alive? hows it going..!! :D
well, Arm isnt in a curved shape, its just the hairs are falling at edges of the arm making it looks like this, its slightly disappeared by the hairs...thanks anyway ^^ yeah, i love my avy too... ;D
 
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