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  1. Avani

    Oi , guys... i have a question. I am making my own isekai story .. Will it be worth to continue and complete it ? :D Here is the piece of that ! xD

    I hope you do not take the suggestion negatively but you should add some spacing between two paragraphs or when the POV changes. You can edit it and fix that issue. Yes I noticed the * symbol- it would help you to notice where to add space. But right now it's hard to read it. To answer...
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