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I thought it would bee cooler if I left it ambiguous as for Obito. As for the hokages a part of me wants to go to the battlefield already but I know that this may not happen for quite some time.

Well that can be easily true. COnsidering how many years Obito lived with Madara and how the latter knew about Kakashi and Rin it would be only but logical to know as well about Minato.

Lol I like its humorous aspects and ending was LMAO. How Minato didn't recognise Guy was likeXDXDXDXDXDXD

Well not exactly but yeah it has som small similarities.

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Well I suppose that Minato will give the other half chakra to Naruto when the other Hokages come and help him by fighting in his position against madara so Mianto will have the time to unlock the seal. I don't think that it was Kurama who sensed him. It's a possibility but personally I believe...

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In kamui dimension Obito looking at Kakashi's eyes: (That look, he's not kidding around anymore. I have to be more careful) So you decided to get serious I see, you really intend to kill me don't you? I was hoping that as my comrade you used to be, you would be able to understand how I feel but...

I really liked its beginning.

I liked it but quite frankly you spent quite a lot of time in flashbacks and to tell you the truth wee need some action from here on.

Lol LMAO XD

I liked it but seriously it was way too short.

You have to work a litttle on the dialogues. Most of the reactions didn't seem natural. For instance, Obito said to Kakashi that he talked to much while he didn't talk any less. In the previous chapter Naruto was full of confidence and here at the beginning you have him to cry out of the blew...

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bad transletion

It wasn't bad but you made some mistakes there. Right now Madara doesn't control Juubi and probably can't in the first palce since in a previous chapter he had a difficulty in controlling the Juubi along with Obito. Think now that Madara is on his own and the Juubi has evolved even further...

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Lol Hashirama is too kind hearted, he wouldn't want Sasuke to do something like that because of revenge. Plus Sasuke even with rinnegan still doesn't stand a chance against Madara on one vs one.

So we know that senju was stronger than uchiha, like Hashirama said and we also know that the 2 of them, after years of conflicts, they finally made peace with Hashirama becoming the first hokage while Tobirama, his brother, the second. So my question is this: how despite the fact that the 2...