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Very nicely done.=D

Hello this is my sequel of my fan fic "Juubi's conterattack" For those who hadn't read it, here is the link: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=392057 On the battlefield. Obito laughs satanically as he slowly stops to talk: Way to go Naruto. I couldn't have done it better. Naruto...

Till page 9 I read it was great but then... Obito will die after using rinnei tensei and whily you having him before falling down ready to die, at the next second he becomes perfectly fine, revives everyone and has such a quick change of heart? It would be a huge letdown.

That was rather interesting althought I don't see it happening. Anyway, rep.

I think it's highly unlikely. First, Obito has never trusted Madara and that was shown by saying that he never considered him an ally. Secondly, you made him capable of overcoming Maadara's control like it was nothing while at the last panel he was shown in great pain.

I liked it but at the end of the day Orochimaru can't take Obito's body. If he does, he will be controlled the same way since Obito's body will still have Madara's will.

I think that making Madara summonig the Juubi was a mistake. No matter how strong he is, he doesn't have what it takes to do something like that. Nobody does. Apart from that, I think that Obito will die after using rinnei tensei since he's not an uzumaki, I might be wrong. What were you...

Personally I really loved the ending. All this time I thought that Madara was far too calm and that would have caused him problems but the last page WOW! Now that's a true villain! He had Obito siince the beginning at his hands and he could have killed him many times till now just on a whim...

I liked the action and the dialogues. Good job.

Re: Naruto manga 636 : I will never leave you alone. interesting.

I liked it=D Way to go=D Btw, you haven't told me, have you read any of my fan fics so far?

Hello, I'm relatively new here and I would like to join to a fan fic competition but I have some questions first. 1. Does each competition has a specific topic? 2. I have written 3 chapters as it's required but they're unrelated to this competion and I have already posted them so I don't get if...

Hello guys this is my first poem, I write in english so don't go too hard on me=D Diamonds...how beautiful you really are! The purest form of beauty that exists in this world can only be compared to the soul of a new born baby. Clean, so clean, without even the tiniest crack on them they have a...

Hello this is my sequel of my fan fic "The tale of the sage" For those who hadn't read it, here is the link: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=389727 In the battlefield. Obito clashes against Minato and Madara against Hashirama. Juubi continues staring at Naruto inside of the...

To tell you the truth I didn't really like your approach to the whole subject. I have already made a fan made about that so you know my opinion about Sage's past. Personally, I way more prefer your predictions on a weekly-basis. You certainly have good writting skills. I think that your approach...

very good, I liked the flashback=D

I liked the ending, clever.

Well since you have only seen it in anime you never know. Besides, his father against Shukaku could use water style so why his son cannot as well?

I liked the exchange of summonings=D

Really interesting one!=D