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Ohhh yeah I can definitely feel it , the winds of change are flowing .

Not bad at all

I loved it

****en dying of laughter here man lol

Wicked, now you got me interested please write more.

Excellent prediction my friend

In the end Kakashi start writting books ,ooh boy .

Excellent besides that work on your spelling will you .

good and as for you bashers , try writing something before you criticize someone for doing something.

I never thought Gai sensei would be the one that would die.

Truthfully I loved all three parts , you've written it quite like Kishi yet kept some of your ideals.

too short man , make it longer

Short but never the less good

I would love to see how Kushina fights ,wouldn't that be a treat . Just imagine father and mother ,once again together again along side their son fighting for the greater good. Kishi you better make this happen or suffer the thousand dragons

Great keep it up

There were some good points but it still needs some work . Don't worry you'll get it

I specially loved that ending line , it was so deep damn . It hit right in the old knocker , whose to say that some of us have been someone else in our past lives. Indeed that last line was deep

Nicely done , a great death for Might Gai .

Great prediction but needs a bit more work . So far so good , but it needs that special detail that makes it all worth while.

I agree with Chaos Control , this is good for points but a real script is needed to make us understand the finer details of this prediction.