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with all his sweet jutsus he easily defeats all the people who are left if he studies under kabuto and gets all the bonuses kabuto has then becomes the juubihamaru. if and when that happens nobody could can stop him.

im on the fence between when Kamina came back, when kamina died, or maybe when simone got his own gllasses, there are just so many super crazy epic moments what are you peoples favorite or most epic/memorable moment(s).

dialogue made me want to puke, the only star i kno of is blackstar and hes the biggest star around HAHAHAHAAHAHA. thats about it tho, and ur dialogue is a little worse then kishimotos, which is alot worse than it used to be.when u are trying to emulate his writing its obviously going to be a bad...

its just the truth, what can oonoki do to them. his back is a ticking time bomb and in a 1v1 tsunade is too good at dodging and revocering for oonoki to hit anything that would kill her, and A is to fast period. its a matter of time and to be honest that time is probably about 20 seconds...

its not bible. its a direct rip off of that one dbz movie which used the bible. +onepiece

well.... i had a really nice post ready... with links and images and shit.... but than i lost the whole thing. basically moriah is with absalom and probably hogback, hes in the new world, and he will probably become allied with kaidou or BB

I do not understand the age difference of whitebeads and rogers crew. Roger was the same age as whitebeard i think, but it seems to me that the avg age of whitebeards crew, and more specifically his commanders, is alot younger than that of rogers crew. Rayleigh is an old man, crocus is an old...

im wondering what you people think, especially the obito fangirls. Honestly Son Goku( of dragonball, at the height of his power level, which was in GT) wins this with zero difficulty, and he has a few ways this is possible. Obito cant be hurt by non sage attacks. The argument that blowing up the...

WOLF FANG FIST!Times three, or somthing? GAYYYYYY

Dont forget your dilogues bad. U should put more shitty things into ur prediction like sasuke hugging naruto and apologizing. That wud make the kiddies like u cream urselfs

That was gay. Sasukes reaction wont happen. Stop being a bad dialogue writer and stop treating naruto and sasuke like the 13 again. Ur grammar everywhere was bad. The fight between obito and kakashi was ok. The dialogue there was kinda bad though. This isnt a spanish drama show.. and i dont...

This prediction is not like the other ones you and i bave read so far. Simply i am sick of the sasuke dialogue people have been predicting. Its uncharacteristic of his personality and makes him look like hes ****n 10 again. "Oh hey loser" "scaredy cat" "long time no see loser" things like this...

It sounds nice but will nvr happen 1st there was to much developement in one chapter. Second it will prob. B 2-3 b4 sasuke arrives. 3Rdumade the fight to ez for the alliance force. Still well written tho good job

First off sakura survived when pain did that to the village. Second he was splitting his chakra up at the end of the fight against naruto. third planetary devastation is the only way nagato wins

This is more argueable wen looking at the anime based on the recent feats of itachi. Mainly his ability to defeat pain with little assistance. But in the manga he is also recieving alot of hype. I think its kishis attemp to make it clear that itachi is still greater than sasuke. And arguably as...