[Predictions] Naruto 615 - A Saddening Death

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Naruto 615 - A Saddening Death

Obito: Didn't you say that you wouldn't let your friends die....Naruto!
Naruto: I'm... I'm going to ****ing kill you!!!!!!!
Shikamaru: Naruto, calm down. We can't have you going apeshit mode, it will ruin the whole strategy!
Naruto: BUT HE JUST KILLED NEJI!!
Shikamaru:....
Kakashi: Shikamaru is right, Naruto. Stay calm and let's prevent the next casualty.
Naruto: grrrrr...
Hinata: Neji-niisan...

Flash Back - Neji & Hinata in the Hyuuga Manor Before the War

Neji: Hinata-sama, there's something I need to speak with you about regarding the upcoming war...
Hinata: What is it, Neji-san?
Neji: I won't be able to protect you as I've done in the past, we'll both be situated at different locations and I can't disobey the orders...
Hinata: Neji-san, stop. Don't you worry, I'm much stronger than I used to be. *I'll show you, Naruto!*
Neji: That's good. But promise me that if you end up against an opponent that you cannot defeat, that you will run away and live on life and aboveall keep the Hyuuga lineage alive!
Hinata: .... I will never give up. We will win this war. And the Hyuuga's won't fail. We're the Konohas strongest after all!
Neji: *Smirks* Heh... You're right. That reminds me. There's something I must ask of you...
Hinata: It's the eyes, isn't it?
Neji: Yes... Since we are the strongest of Konoha, and wield superb eye techniques that many people wishes to get their hands on, we cannot allow anyone to take it from us, especially since the War may not be over after the masked man has been defeated... The Villages may go back to their original status in which case our eye techniques will be crucial in the saving of Konoha.
Hinata: I understand Nii-san, but if worst comes to worse and one of us ends up a casulty, how will we proceed?
Neji: *Naruto: Because You're a genuis!* ... If I die, I want you to give my eyes to Naruto. I have faith in him, he changed the way I used to be, brought me light to this world, and I believe he will be the savior of it all. He deserves this and if I can contribute to his cause even in death, then that is something I will gladly do.
Hinata: Nii-san.....

Back to Present

Naruto: ARRRRGHHGHHHHH!!!
Hinata: Sakura-san, please come over here. Nejii nii-san had a final request in the event where he would die....
Naruto: ?!
Sakura is shown landing beside Nejiis body
Sakura: What is it, Hinata?
Hinata: His dying wish was that Naruto would inheriate his Eye techniques. He wants to support Naruto and the ninja world even in his death. It's an honorable thing for a Hyuuga to do, give up their eyes for the better cause. Please start right away.
Sakura: *Neji...* I will. Naruto, sit absolutely still while I'm doing this eye transplant.
Naruto: I will.... *Neji, I can't thank you enough. Your death will not have been in vain, I will be your eyes, and I will save this world, you just watch me!!*

Obito: Nostalgic, isn't it, Kakashi? Kind of reminds me of the old days... *As if I'm going to let history repeat itself!*
Obito: Katon: Gouryuuka No Jutsu *Targets Naruto, Sakura, Hinata and the dead Nejii*
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Kakashi: *Naive as ever, Obito...* Suiton: Water Encampment Wall!
The Water wall blocks the Katon jutsu completely, and steam is shown heading towards the sky...
Kakashi: Everyone, protect Naruto! If he can get the Kyuubi's chakra as well as the Byuakugan there's no telling what his power will be, it's a bet we'll have to take!
Everyone: Yes, Captain!
Shikamaru: Hit them with all you've got, use nature combinations if you can!

Sution Users: Suiton: Suikoudan no Jutsu
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Katon Users: Katon: Endan!
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Doton Users: Doton: Yomi Numa *Puts the juubi out of balance*
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Lightning Users: Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu!
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Darui: Fuuton Users, sync up with me, it'll be deadly, yo!
Fuuton Users: Fuuton: Kezegaeshi Darui: Black Lightning: Double Black Panther
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Madara: *Annoying pests...* Obito, you know what to do...
Obito: Yeah...

Madara and Obito both control the Juubi to an extent where they manage to get 8 out of 10 tails to block the incoming Jutsu, but the Juubi is still out of balance due to the Doton and is damaged just a small bit..

Kiba: All that and we barely scratched him!
Gai: This is called stalling, shut your piehole and keep attacking, for Neji!


Naruto's Mind

Kurama: Naruto... My chakra is ready, but I have to speak with you first...
Naruto: What is it, Kurama?
Kurama: You just got yourself a new pair of eyes, one of the three most valuable eyes in the history of the world.. There's no telling how my Chakra nor how your own body will react to it, are you sure you're ready to fight?
Naruto: I'll be fine. I won't lose this, we'll work together, all of us, and we'll win this. For Neji. I'll be his eyes until I'm dead myself.
Kurama: *Heh, so noble all of a sudden...* Alright, let's do this Naruto! I'll chunk out the most stable of Chakra I possess.
Naruto: What does that mean???
Kurama: *But still an idiot, meh...* It means since I just gathered all this chakra, it's much more stable than the previous large tank of my Chakra that you used, which means the length of your Kyuubi Mode is now at least five times as long, or for an idiot like you, 25-30 minutes.
Naruto: Teheh, let's win this!

Back to present

Naruto is shown over 4 panels on a whole page.
Panel 1: Sage Mode markings that look kind of crippled are showing on the closed-eyed Naruto
Panel 2: Naruto Stands up
Panel 3: Naruto opens his eyes and reveals Sage Mode / Byakuugan
Naruto: Guys, Kurama is ready! *Let's do this!*
Kurama: *Heh...*
Panel 4: Kyuubi Mode is activated - Sage Mode / Byakuugan 'crippled' markings + Kyuubi Mode + Vertical Kyuubi EyeLine is shown
Everyone: Let's win this shit!


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To be continued...
 
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no....just no.. i guess after that everyone decides to pitch thei kkg and then naruto will become the first hokage with every kkg in the whole Naruverse!!
 

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Ummm i don't know... It was good, but seems unlikely, cuz once neji dies, the byakugan seals away forever. You should do more of these though. The way you tell it is very good!
 

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You lost your cool when you put Neji's last wish of giving his eyes to Naruto. It would have been better if Neji ask Hinata to destroy his eyes on the spot if he dies so that no one can steal the byakugan.
Your presentation was superb even for a first prediction.
You handled the flashbacks/scenes nicely. Keep it up. Good Job.
These were your good points that made me to read it till the end even after Neji's last wish. + rep
 
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You lost your cool when you put Neji's last wish of giving his eyes to Naruto. It would have been better if Neji ask Hinata to destroy his eyes on the spot if he dies so that no one can steal the byakugan.
Your presentation was superb even for a first prediction.
You handled the flashbacks/scenes nicely. Keep it up. Good Job.
These were your good points that made me to read it till the end even after Neji's last wish. + rep
It isn't my first prediction. I made several others a while back, all receiving dense feedback. Why do I lower myself to this standard? Well, it's quite simple. Some random Mod of this section likes to be an utter prick and remove topics for no apparent reason. So ultimately, I'm only making predictions based on troll-theories from hereon out, including this one. I personally would never have predicted this to happen, it's just based on people's post in the Naruto section. :)

The Mod is to blame!
 

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Good except the eyes part. It'd be disrespectful to the dead for him to try and transplant Neji's eyes. And in the middle of battle? Add to that the forehead mark sealed them on his death.
 
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