Hater Ftw

Donald J Trump

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Hi guys this is my first ever bio. I litrelly dont understand the ninja rank and jutsu things at all so if i get it wrong please tell me so i can improve.
"cowardice will not tolerate "

Name:HaterFtw

Nickname: DARIUS

Gender: Male

Age: 19

Looks
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Hater has black hair with dark black eyes.He wears a red cape and steel armor. Hater bears a big black bull skull tattoo on his back. He obtained a big long scar on his left eye after a fight with a grizzly bear.
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Personality:
Hater never has and never will retreat from a battle.He has not been defetated and he belives in killing the weak.Legends has it that his axe can cut through carbonado dimond and has never failed cut a neck with one swipe.He was raised in a orphanage, he had to fight to survive and eat.



Background:He left Konaha village at age of 15. He belived it was not his way to follow the rules and orders from someone he though who was weaker than him.He had to defend his meal from wolves and cougars. He trained everyday to become stronger and stronger.The more blood that got on his axe, the stronger it became.He swore to take revenge and never to retreat after his little brother got slaughterd from a mist ninja.
Villige info:
Village of Birth: Konoha,later becomes a road ninja
Rank//Chakra Info.

Ninja Rank:Genin

Specialty:Lightning

Elements:Lighting

Weapons:Steel axe with a dimond edge. Looks kind of like this
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Tsuki

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There are few things missing.

Here's the template you should follow ^^
 

-Albel-

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It's not that bad, but you can't have lightning as your specialty since you haven't mastered it yet. Also, where is your characters history at? I don't see it at all and you need to have one or it wont get approved. o.o
 

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You have missed allot out and you have allot of things that shouldn't be in.
Go to the forums section and try having a look at a few of the approved bio.
 

Donald J Trump

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It's not that bad, but you can't have lightning as your specialty since you haven't mastered it yet. Also, where is your characters history at? I don't see it at all and you need to have one or it wont get approved. o.o

Than what do i put instead of lighting?
 

-Albel-

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Than what do i put instead of lighting?

You put nothing in your specialty. You only put something under that part when you have actually trained with a Sensei or Senpai and mastered that ability.
 

Donald J Trump

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You put nothing in your specialty. You only put something under that part when you have actually trained with a Sensei or Senpai and mastered that ability.

how do i rep and like u? its not availabel for some reason
 

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decent Attempt but i suggest you follow the template oh and for the sake of simply being an eye sore plz put your large pics in a spoiler
 

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these might be of help






enjoy the rp bro
 

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The picture of your axe made me lol :lmao:

You have a lot of things to change if you want this to be approved. Send me a profile message and i'll help you out in doing so.
 
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