Do these drawings fit?

[Supermacaquecool]

Hahahaha Currently I have two projects on-going:
1. A little comic, called "Regrets". This has the story and the characters already settled. Now I have to draw it xd Which is what I'm doing.
2. And a "manga" called "Descend to Black"(I'm not sure...I'd be more comfortable with a comic format xd). This one seems to be long and it's collaborative. Due this, I decided that my partner's style would be more suiting for the story. Since we kinda agreed (I said "Let's use your style"...and he replied "If you want..." xd lol), I'm drawing the characters with the said style:
(lol Sorry, I feel to lazy as to scan it xd Took an horrible photo, but it's visible):

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(for some reason the image is huge, don't want to mess up with the window).
I think the guy (Mark) suits better my partner's style:

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And that the girl (J) needs something to fit better, but I don't know what is it xd
So, if you could give me some CnC and your thoughts, I'd appreciate that a lot.

 

[Killer Vision]

its great but if you are going to incorporate it on a manga, characters should be less detailed so the artist wont strain too much on a particular page.

so basically its up to you anid your partner to decide which is for applicable.

 

[Supermacaquecool]

its great but if you are going to incorporate it on a manga, characters should be less detailed so the artist wont strain too much on a particular page.

so basically its up to you anid your partner to decide which is for applicable.

YEs..I know xd My hyper-simplified style actually has that quality (to be drawn quickly) but my pal's looks more bada$$ and...xd HAhaha I don't think he can emulate my style xd

 

[Rorasa]

both look great but i love your style

 

[Supermacaquecool]

both look great but i love your style

ok xd

 

[MilicaS]

its great but if you are going to incorporate it on a manga, characters should be less detailed so the artist wont strain too much on a particular page.

so basically its up to you anid your partner to decide which is for applicable.

both look great but i love your style

This, I really like your drawings, they're great! And what do you mean "something to fit better"? Like what?

 

[Supermacaquecool]

This, I really like your drawings, they're great! And what do you mean "something to fit better"? Like what?

Honestly, I have no idea. Anyway, my pal seems to like my drawings, and he says they suits his style. He just told me to keep practicing...:| So really, I'll just move on.

 

[+Kyon+]

Nice & nice

 

[Thoth]

Both pretty good.