[fire/wind training]-dm1202

[Wakizashi]

-waits patiently for sempai while sitting on the ground with legs crossed-

(teno sempai says i completed b-rank on fire and wind)

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[Omnom]

-waits patiently for sempai while sitting on the ground with legs crossed-

(teno sempai says i completed b-rank on fire and wind)

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Pick which one you want to start with, and link me to the previous thread.

 

[Wakizashi]

i will pick wind.

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[Omnom]

i will pick wind.

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Fire / Wind in the same thread? That's weird...

(Fūton: Kamikaze) - Wind Release: Divine Wind
Rank: C
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30(+10 if used with a fire type)
Description: The user releases a gust of wind that forms several small tornadoes. Combined with Fire Release: Running Fire that forms a circle on ground level, this creates a massive flaming hurricane.

Preform that technique for me.

 

[Wakizashi]

-i gather a significant amount of chakra before focusing it to my hands via chakra network. once located at my hands i use nature change and chakra control to release the wind from my hands and chakra control to shape the wind into three small tornadoes. i then cause the tornadoes to disperse after executing the jutsu-

how was that omnom sempai?

 

[Omnom]

-i gather a significant amount of chakra before focusing it to my hands via chakra network. once located at my hands i use nature change and chakra control to release the wind from my hands and chakra control to shape the wind into three small tornadoes. i then cause the tornadoes to disperse after executing the jutsu-

how was that omnom sempai?

Not bad, but a little more detail next time.

(Fūton: Kami Oroshi) - Wind Release: Godly Wind From The Mountain
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique after performing the required hand seals Tiger → Snake → Ram creates a vortex of wind to blast at a target. It can be used in a combo with Fire Release: Running Fire and Earth Release: Earth Corridor to release a massive inferno at the opponents while they are trapped within the confined space of the earth.

Gather your chakra and preform the needed hand seals, then gather chakra in front of you. Release it into a vortex, that should travel powerfully towards your opponent.

 

[Wakizashi]

-i then gather a good amount of chakra while concentrating very hard. after quickly weaving three handseals i then take the chakra and i focus it all to the front of me. after getting the chakra in front of me i then invision i am sharpening two blade to cause my chakra to change nature into wind. once i have focused the chakra in front of me and have change the nature to wind, i then release the wind nature chakra in the form of wind to create a vortex. i keep releasing the wind until the vortex is powerful enough to travel and does a considerable amount of damage to my opponent.-

 

[Omnom]

-i then gather a good amount of chakra while concentrating very hard. after quickly weaving three handseals i then take the chakra and i focus it all to the front of me. after getting the chakra in front of me i then invision i am sharpening two blade to cause my chakra to change nature into wind. once i have focused the chakra in front of me and have change the nature to wind, i then release the wind nature chakra in the form of wind to create a vortex. i keep releasing the wind until the vortex is powerful enough to travel and does a considerable amount of damage to my opponent.-

Good good. That's the amount of detail I want.

(Fūton: Jūha Shō) - Wind Release: Beast Wave Strike
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A powerful technique of wind nature chakra that can cut and slash through any material. The user activates it by summoning chakra in his right hand, and then swipes a slicing chakra wave which appears to be controlled by the users will and thoughts. They are also able to use the technique in a rapid-fire, successive motion creating up to three cresent blades of wind.

Gather wind chakra to your right hand, and from there will it to slice through those trees in front of you.

 

[Wakizashi]

-i then gather a significant amount of chakra. after gathering enough chakra i then take the chakra i gathered and focus it to my hand thru my chakra network. once my chakra has reached my hand i then do as i did before and concentrate hard while i invision 2 blades sharpening each other to cause the chakra to make a nature change to wind. the wind then surrounds my hand as it changes. with wind now at my hands i then swipe my hand covered in wind in a downward diagonal motion. as i swing my hand i release a slicing wave which travels to the tree in front of me before cutting it in half. i then continue by swinging my hand once in a horizontal motion following with a vertical swing which releases two more cutting waves which cuts 2 more trees.-

 

[Omnom]

-i then gather a significant amount of chakra. after gathering enough chakra i then take the chakra i gathered and focus it to my hand thru my chakra network. once my chakra has reached my hand i then do as i did before and concentrate hard while i invision 2 blades sharpening each other to cause the chakra to make a nature change to wind. the wind then surrounds my hand as it changes. with wind now at my hands i then swipe my hand covered in wind in a downward diagonal motion. as i swing my hand i release a slicing wave which travels to the tree in front of me before cutting it in half. i then continue by swinging my hand once in a horizontal motion following with a vertical swing which releases two more cutting waves which cuts 2 more trees.-

Good job.

(Fūton: Kazekiri) - Wind Style: Wind Cutter
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User will create a slicing wind gust which is used to divide and neutralize a Wind attack launched against him. It splits an incoming wind attack of lower or equal strength and makes it harmless.

Gather wind chakra, usually to a sword or your hand, and slice forward, releasing the wind to split any incoming Wind attack of C-rank or lower.

 

[Wakizashi]

-i then gather a significant amount of chakra. after gathering enough chakra i then take the chakra i gathered and focus it to my hand thru my chakra network. once my chakra has reached my hand i then do as i did before and concentrate hard while i invision 2 blades sharpening each other to cause the chakra to make a nature change to wind. the wind then surrounds my hand as it changes. with wind now at my hands i then swipe my hand covered in wind in a downward vertical motion. as i swing my hand i release a slicing wave which splits the wind technique that is heading towards me in half.-

 

[Omnom]

-i then gather a significant amount of chakra. after gathering enough chakra i then take the chakra i gathered and focus it to my hand thru my chakra network. once my chakra has reached my hand i then do as i did before and concentrate hard while i invision 2 blades sharpening each other to cause the chakra to make a nature change to wind. the wind then surrounds my hand as it changes. with wind now at my hands i then swipe my hand covered in wind in a downward vertical motion. as i swing my hand i release a slicing wave which splits the wind technique that is heading towards me in half.-

Well done. Remember it only blocks C-rank and below techniques.

Next up

(Fūton: Hanachiri no Mai) - Wind Release: Flower Scattering Dance
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 15(+3)
Damage Points: 30(+5 for each addition wind vortex)
Description: This technique after performing the required hand seals Tiger → Hare → Dragon allows the user to summon a cyclone of petals to attack their opponent. The user can remain in one spot for the use of the technique, because he or she can direct it anywhere they desire. Therefore, the user can increase the direction and power of the technique to the maximum as a last resort.

Gather your chakra, and use it to spin the wind around or in front your opponent, and using the wind, summon petals. You can then send it at the opponent, and when desired, cause it to expand, trapping them.

 

[Wakizashi]

-i then gather a significant amount of chakra. after gathering my chakra i the channel it throughout my body once my chakra has reached the entire vicinity of my body i then do as i did before and concentrate hard while i invision 2 blades sharpening each other to cause the chakra to make a nature change to wind. i then weave the necessary handseals after changing the nature of my chakra throughout my body. i then release my wind chakra and use it to cause the wind around my opponent to spin. while the wind is spinning i use that wind to summon petals that both surround and attack the opponent.-

 

[Omnom]

-i then gather a significant amount of chakra. after gathering my chakra i the channel it throughout my body once my chakra has reached the entire vicinity of my body i then do as i did before and concentrate hard while i invision 2 blades sharpening each other to cause the chakra to make a nature change to wind. i then weave the necessary handseals after changing the nature of my chakra throughout my body. i then release my wind chakra and use it to cause the wind around my opponent to spin. while the wind is spinning i use that wind to summon petals that both surround and attack the opponent.-

If you could, copy and paste the name of the technique at the top of your response.

(Fūton: Kaze Shingai) - Wind Release: Wind Terror
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user unleashes a wave of wind that slashes at the opponent.

(Fūton: Kujaku Senpū) - Wind Release: Peacock Whirlwind
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: This technique utilizes wind chakra into the users sword and then they swing it to create a powerful whirlwind of gusts of wind by releasing the wind chakra in sync with the swing of the sword.

The first one is kinda crazy simple, I don't think it's worth taking the time to go over just that one. For the second one, gather futon chakra to your sword, and release it by swinging the sword, creating a gust of wind .

 

[Wakizashi]

(Fūton: Kujaku Senpū) - Wind Release: Peacock Whirlwind
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: This technique utilizes wind chakra into the users sword and then they swing it to create a powerful whirlwind of gusts of wind by releasing the wind chakra in sync with the swing of the sword.

-i gather my chakra to a sufficient amount. once i have enough chakra i then channel my chakra thru my chakra network to my and holding my wakizashi. once the chakra reaches my hand i then concentrate hard enough while i visualize two shapening blades to cause the chakra to change it's nature to wind. once my chakra is changed to wind chakra. i then focus my wind chakra to the blade of my wakizashi from my hand. once the wind chakra in covering my blade i then release the wind chakra from my blade as i swing my wakizashi vertically downwards causing the wind to create a powerful whirlwind of gusts of wind.-

was that good omnom-sempai?

 

[Omnom]

-i gather my chakra to a sufficient amount. once i have enough chakra i then channel my chakra thru my chakra network to my and holding my wakizashi. once the chakra reaches my hand i then concentrate hard enough while i visualize two shapening blades to cause the chakra to change it's nature to wind. once my chakra is changed to wind chakra. i then focus my wind chakra to the blade of my wakizashi from my hand. once the wind chakra in covering my blade i then release the wind chakra from my blade as i swing my wakizashi vertically downwards causing the wind to create a powerful whirlwind of gusts of wind.-

was that good omnom-sempai?

Nice job. On a side note, work on punctuation and correct capitalization. It seems frivoulus, but it will help you efficiently get your point across.

(Fūton: Kaze Rasen Yaiba no justu) - Wind Release: Wind Spinning Blade Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user uses their Giant Folding fan or Giant Fan and swing it forwards at the target creating a single spinning disk of wind that ressembles a demon wind shuriken. A non wielder of the Giant Folding Fan or Giant Fan can perform this technique with use of two hand seals and releasing wind from their mouth and using shape manipulation to form the disk of wind.

Since you aren't using a giant fan, preform two quick hand seals, and release wind from your mouth. Then, add shape manipulation into the wind, forming it into a disc, that you can then send at your opponent.

 

[Wakizashi]

(Fūton: Kaze Rasen Yaiba no justu) - Wind Release: Wind Spinning Blade Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user uses their Giant Folding fan or Giant Fan and swing it forwards at the target creating a single spinning disk of wind that ressembles a demon wind shuriken. A non wielder of the Giant Folding Fan or Giant Fan can perform this technique with use of two hand seals and releasing wind from their mouth and using shape manipulation to form the disk of wind.

-I then gather some more chakra and make sure it's enough for the next technique. Afterwards i then focus hard enough to visualize sharpening blades to make sure i change the nature of the chakra to wind. Then i take the nature changed wind chakra and channel thru my chakra network to my mouth before weaving the necessary handseals. As i finished the required handseals, i use shape manipulation of my chakra to shape if like a rotating disk before spewing if from my mouth that flys to a nearby boulder and cut the boulder in half.-

i hope that's better

 

[Omnom]

-I then gather some more chakra and make sure it's enough for the next technique. Afterwards i then focus hard enough to visualize sharpening blades to make sure i change the nature of the chakra to wind. Then i take the nature changed wind chakra and channel thru my chakra network to my mouth before weaving the necessary handseals. As i finished the required handseals, i use shape manipulation of my chakra to shape if like a rotating disk before spewing if from my mouth that flys to a nearby boulder and cut the boulder in half.-

i hope that's better

You actually spew out the wind, and THEN add your shape manipulation. Not before. But tis good enough!

(Futon: Reppuu Bakufuu no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Gale Blast Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will swing their giant folding fan or giant war fan at their target to create a blast of wind sending the target flying, other users can use this technique by making a string of 2 hand seals and releasing their wind chakra to create a blast of wind.

Gather your chakra, and preform two quick hand seals, which will release a small blast of wind at the target. Fairly simple.

 

[Wakizashi]

(Futon: Reppuu Bakufuu no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Gale Blast Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will swing their giant folding fan or giant war fan at their target to create a blast of wind sending the target flying, other users can use this technique by making a string of 2 hand seals and releasing their wind chakra to create a blast of wind.

-after i successfully execute my previous attack i proceed to gather more chakra to a sufficient amount to allow me to successfully execute this one. I then channel the chakra to my hands thru my chakra network. Once i use the chakra network to channel the chakra to my hand i then invision sharpening blades to aid me in changing the nature of my chakra into wind. once my chakra's nature has changed, I then weave two handseals to aid me in focusing my chakra before i release a small blast of wind towards the direction of the trees.-

 

[Omnom]

-after i successfully execute my previous attack i proceed to gather more chakra to a sufficient amount to allow me to successfully execute this one. I then channel the chakra to my hands thru my chakra network. Once i use the chakra network to channel the chakra to my hand i then invision sharpening blades to aid me in changing the nature of my chakra into wind. once my chakra's nature has changed, I then weave two handseals to aid me in focusing my chakra before i release a small blast of wind towards the direction of the trees.-

Try less description on how you do the jutsu, and rather the jutsu itself. We all know how to focus chakra through the body, but once it reaches the point in your body, how you use it from there is important. Try it on this next one.

(Futon: Ressenpū) - Wind Release: Violent Whirlwind
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user gushes a powerful stream of wind from their mouth towards their enemy.

Except you get this technique... Well. Give me the best you can