Megan Fox LA

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cool stuff bro
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Pretty cool, though it looks unfinished.
 
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thanks for liking my work but i meant to estimate my work and not Megan -_-
 

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Nope, didn't click this time..

For the reasons;
1: I kinda hate the small presences of cyan light right under her hair, makes it look un-blended and i'd prefered a darkening of the area around the parts and then maybe make some lightbolts around her..
2: Upper right corner looks terribly dead; add more shit there!
3: WTF happened with her right eyebrow? It looks like it's going to fly to outer space O_O
4: The black 1px thick border of the text.. It makes it looks very pix-elated and lq.. Either remove that or the text entirely..
5: Also text related.. The lighten up part in the word "FOX" where the light source is above the text but it's reflection of it is disorientated. Not really that important, but meh..


Things i like thus are the flow with the motion blur, and the overall colours has blended nice.
 

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Hmm..

The colours are a bit off and the render doesn't merge that well overall.

It's good, but needs more work.
 
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Nope, didn't click this time..

For the reasons;
1: I kinda hate the small presences of cyan light right under her hair, makes it look un-blended and i'd prefered a darkening of the area around the parts and then maybe make some lightbolts around her..
2: Upper right corner looks terribly dead; add more shit there!
3: WTF happened with her right eyebrow? It looks like it's going to fly to outer space O_O
4: The black 1px thick border of the text.. It makes it looks very pix-elated and lq.. Either remove that or the text entirely..
5: Also text related.. The lighten up part in the word "FOX" where the light source is above the text but it's reflection of it is disorientated. Not really that important, but meh..


Things i like thus are the flow with the motion blur, and the overall colours has blended nice.

1 - yea now i see it, just wanted to add lights so blah..
2 - i know that.. i was out of ideas
3 - u think that i raised that eyebrow? lol render was like that , idk wtf wrong with that xD
4 - didnt noticed that either
actually my piece is unfinished.. just wanted some good CNC to make some changes there.. so will do it later, thanks anyways
 

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Nice job DM I think it looks good maybe a few tweks here and ther but overall it was a great outcome.
 
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