[Discussion] The "write your own manga if you are not happy" guys.. here it comes

sephirothh

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I often read " if you are not happy write your own mange " (stupid argument)..

so i'll try to write ideas... From chapter 600 till the end of naruto... of Ideas that would have been much more better

(you can aswell write your own "Storyline" for the last arcs)


-Revelation of Tobi : Izuna is under the mask > Everyone wonders, Kurama says “this is the same chakra as Madara, who is this guy”

-Izuna reveals everything: He got revived at Madaras death by the RInnegan, and Madara sacrified his life to revive his brother, he managed to let enough information’s for his plan.

-So Izuna takes Madaras Rinnegan, and give them to baby Nagato (in order to revive Madara in many years), to complete the plan, both Uchiha brothers leading the world with infinite Tsuko.

-Izuna gets a Senju DNA Boosts, because of the Gedo Mazo, casted by Madara before his death. The mazou creates white Zetsu, and Izuna gives him a sharingan (to record all battles and informations), he gets half dark.

-Inbetween, Izuna uses normal Sharigan, and finaly manage to detect a powerfull Eye... Obitos Eye

-Then we have a chapter, with Zetsu, managing everything for kakashi Gaiden, for finaly trapping obito under the rocks, to steal this powerfull eye.

-Unfortunately, Zetsu only gets one of the eyes (because kakashi has the other one)

-Izuna trains his new eye, and get badass with it (madara chakra with a new super eye)

-Izuna prepares his plan to get revenge on Konoha. He learns all the informations about Kyuby and Konoha, and attacks the village (thanks to his brother) (chapter 500 and so) But he almost die vs Minato (too badass for him), and only one eye.

-because he needs help, he create a clone from madara made out of Zetsu (perfect chakra copying), to convice Kisame (long hairs) to look like Madara. Because Madaras chakra is so dark, all people believes it, this is the real Madara (even Itachi).

-Nagato gets old, Izuna need him to revive madara later on, and create Akatsuki, but nagato uses his Rine Tensei for Konoha.

-Because Nagato is dead and the Rinnegan Lost... he needs to find a way to create a “new” rinnegan on himself.

-This is the reason why Izuna trains Sasuke, until he gets EMS. Izuna needs the EMS to steal them, and thanks to Senja DNA he will get a new own rinnegan.

-But Sasuke is too strong, Fight Izuna vs Sasuke, and Sasuke steals Izunas eye and gets Senju DNA due to Mazou connection. Sasuke gets Rinnegan.

-Sasuke creates a war with kabutos help (war arc)

-Final Fight, Naruto perfect kyuby mode vs Sasuke Rinnegan.

-The end


I know its far not perfect ( I wrote this very quickly, but the main plot is much more interesting then the shit Kishi is giving us at the moment each week).

What are your ideas
 
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how do gai and kakashi know izuna's face .__.? ok i get 600 but... but that dont effect anyone in the storyline emotional like kakashi, and give him development but nice though!
 

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how do gai and kakashi know izuna's face .__.? ok i get 600 but... but that dont effect anyone in the storyline emotional like kakashi, and give him development but nice though!
there is no need to have a fight between kakashi and Gai and Izuna... this is another story...
 
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Bottom line is, nobody is the same. Everyone is going to have different ideas and thoughts. If you told 1000 people to write a short story, but give them the theme, the characters and a general guidline to follow, chances are, there will be big differences between all.

What I'm saying is that everyone's ideas and thoughs are going to be different than Kishi's own. You just have to appreciate what Kishi gives us and respect his ideas, even though we may disagree with them.
 

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didn't read. it's too damn long. anybody summarize, please!
 

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a high intelligent guy always make a short thread but meaningful. just saying. no offense
 

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How I would do it

~NEVER REVEAL TOBI'S IDENTITY (this keeps us interested in the character. Once he was revealed I was no longer interested.)

~Nagato's Rinnegan are his own Natural eyes (fanboy reasons)
 

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How I would do it

~NEVER REVEAL TOBI'S IDENTITY (this keeps us interested in the character. Once he was revealed I was no longer interested.)

~Nagato's Rinnegan are his own Natural eyes (fanboy reasons)

thats true, this would have been so badass... Manga ending without knowing for Tobi... because he died in explosion or somehting like this... the fans would have been crazy
 

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and a more highly intelligent guy doesnt put such a big signature picture to annoy people
this is called human's RIGHT or freedom. i have right to do everything if it doesn't abuse others. calm down, bro! i didn't flam your thread. i just spoke what is inside of me. I'm a good guy(never hurt other). we can be friend, can't we? :)
 
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this is called human's RIGHT or freedom. i have right to do everything if it doesn't abuse others. calm down, bro! i didn't flam your thread. i just spoke what is inside of me. I'm a good guy(never hurt other). we can be friend, can't we? :)

read the topic and you're my friend
 

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Your interpretation of Zetsu is what I was thinking Tobi was before he was revealed as Obito. I just think it's ridiculous to come on a forum about a manga and complain about it and insult the writer, saying that he is lazy and stupid, that he forgot his own plot. That's when I'll tell someone to go write their own manga. It's a lot harder then most people think, especially one as long and in depth as Naruto.
 

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I would like that story, except a few things...Kabuto is down by that time already, Madara is on the field as well, nothing heard from him?
And Sasuke defeating Izuna?
Come on.

I'd say the same except:
Juubi is being formed already, Madara arrives at the scene, insta slices Bee's head off and seals the hachibi within the gedo as well.
Juubi is formed, it goes on a rampage, shoots a TBB, Madara deflects it so it flies far away, the TBB hits Sasuke's group and Sasuke, Taka and Orochimaru are blasted to bits.

Madara seals the Juubi in him and betrays Izuna.

Izuna, Naruto, Kakashi and Gai vs juubi Madara.
 
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It seems that your unhappy with Tobi being Obito, but like others have said it seems Izuna was just a sacrifice for Madara to gain the eternal, it makes the Uchiha clan abandoning Madara even more dramatic. Kishi did say this year was all about Kakashi so that should have been a hint that Tobi was Obito. However, I understand that you would have had a zetsu clone as the one who controlled Yagura because for Obito to do it the timeline would have been all messed up. Also, I hate to say it but I think Kishi is gonna give us a star wars ending with Sasuke, Obito and Naruto teaming up against Madara.
 
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